Nice story, a little bit of nitpicking though:
Don't you mean Beetlejuice instead of Betelgeuse?
Unless you really mean a guy dressed up as a red supergiant star (No kink shaming) ist doing first the shoot and then 233.
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- Tue Apr 30, 2024 8:04 am
- Forum: Member Stories
- Topic: Acccidental Slavery
- Replies: 5
- Views: 1298
- Sat Aug 27, 2022 5:42 pm
- Forum: Links to Other Sites
- Topic: My ratings of some commercial fiction
- Replies: 4
- Views: 2618
- Tue Oct 12, 2021 3:04 pm
- Forum: Stories by Other Authors
- Topic: Stories by Katie Smith
- Replies: 4
- Views: 5566
Re: Stories by Katie Smith
I guess Freight_Trains Link should have been this.
- Wed Sep 01, 2021 8:49 pm
- Forum: Member Stories
- Topic: Pixies Insight Part 3
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1660
Re: Pixies Insight Part 3
My only complaint is the switching between name and number! It caused me to go back and verify that it was the same slave/person! It's because the POV/focus switches. Gwyneth found being talked about this way extremely humiliating. Yet she still got hornier. But held in check like she was, she coul...
- Wed Sep 01, 2021 3:47 pm
- Forum: Member Stories
- Topic: Pixies Insight Part 3
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1660
Pixies Insight Part 3
----------------------------- Behind the door at the back of the hall was a staircase to the right and an elevator to the left. With 8636’s legs cuffed, it would have been difficult, if not dangerous, for her to use the stairs, so Thomas decided to take the elevator to the basement. A woman in offic...
- Mon Aug 30, 2021 9:15 am
- Forum: Member Stories
- Topic: Pixies Insight Part 2
- Replies: 9
- Views: 2378
- Mon Aug 30, 2021 4:34 am
- Forum: Member Stories
- Topic: Pixies Insight Part 2
- Replies: 9
- Views: 2378
Re: Pixies Insight Part 2
Well phooey! I was literally reading this episode, realized I was reading Chapter 2, went back to read Chapter 1... and came back to find that Chapter 2 had been removed. - So... darnit. Please re-post Chapter 2 when you are happy with it. - Thanks! - Look here: https://stripsearchfantasy.com/viewt...
- Mon Aug 30, 2021 4:27 am
- Forum: Other/Misc Topics
- Topic: Should I stop?
- Replies: 2
- Views: 2482
Should I stop?
Hello everyone, Last night I send jaws a message: Two weeks ago, I had a phase during which I had little to no sleep for reasons I don't know. During this time, I started looking into mindmaps to have something to do and I thought about using it to structure a story I believed I had in mind. Today I...
- Fri Aug 27, 2021 6:45 pm
- Forum: Member Stories
- Topic: Pixies Insight Part 1
- Replies: 11
- Views: 3635
Re: Pixies Insight Part 1
Please don't interpret my nit-picking as being critical of what is shaping up as a good story. I understand that you are not familiar with English and wish to improve, and only wish to aid you with that. Attest is usually a verb, an action. "Joe will attest to the fact that I wasn't there that...
- Thu Aug 26, 2021 9:26 pm
- Forum: Member Stories
- Topic: Pixies Insight Part 2
- Replies: 9
- Views: 2378
Pixies Insight Part 2
---------------------------------------------- “And thus ends my demonstration.” Carmen went back to the working bench where she had laid out a tool bag to inspect its contents. Gwyneth was dazed. Moments ago she was about to climax, now she felt like she was falling down a cliff. “Won’t You finish ...
- Wed Aug 25, 2021 11:03 am
- Forum: Member Stories
- Topic: Pixies Insight Part 1
- Replies: 11
- Views: 3635
Re: Pixies Insight Part 1
Remarkable "first" story. It really is my first story. At least the first I've written down and not just fantasized about in the privacy of my head. I do hope you continue and I eagerly await Part 2. I intend to. The ending of part 1 somewhat changed during writing, so i have to wrestle a...
- Tue Aug 24, 2021 12:12 pm
- Forum: Member Stories
- Topic: Pixies Insight Part 1
- Replies: 11
- Views: 3635
Re: Pixies Insight Part 1
That was good, and you probably speak better english than me - I'm not sure i even knew 'assumably' was a word :? I really doubt that i speak better english. But with the help of an online dictionary and thesaurus I'm sometimes able to create a semblance of proficiency. :D For someone who has Engli...
- Tue Aug 24, 2021 5:21 am
- Forum: Member Stories
- Topic: Pixies Insight Part 1
- Replies: 11
- Views: 3635
Pixies Insight Part 1
-------------------------------- Gwyneth arrived at the municipality center and managed to find a parking spot right away. The designation though was somewhat exaggerated. In fact, the municipality center just happened to be the spot where the town hall, courthouse, and the police station were locat...