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- Wed Jul 12, 2023 4:06 am
- Forum: Stories by Carl Bradford
- Topic: Marlon's Ghost, Pt. 02
- Replies: 3
- Views: 2276
- Wed Jul 12, 2023 4:03 am
- Forum: Stories by Carl Bradford
- Topic: Marlon's Ghost, Pt. 02
- Replies: 3
- Views: 2276
Re: Marlon's Ghost, Pt. 02
Now, they slapped a band aid onto my new wound and attached the still-bloody chip to the leg of what appeared to be a homing pigeon – not that I had ever seen one before. For a brief moment, as I watched it soar into the sky and wing its way northward, possibly to Canada, my soul was free. Thank yo...
- Fri Apr 28, 2023 7:09 pm
- Forum: Stories by Gentlemanmariner
- Topic: The Apartment - Part 1
- Replies: 4
- Views: 3718
Re: The Apartment - Part 1
Wowsers! Boy, was that hot!
I'm so glad you're writing again, Mariner.
I'm very much looking forward to reading more of this. Also, looking forward to the "Went West" sequel.
Zee!
I'm so glad you're writing again, Mariner.
I'm very much looking forward to reading more of this. Also, looking forward to the "Went West" sequel.
Zee!
- Fri Apr 28, 2023 3:37 am
- Forum: Stories by Gentlemanmariner
- Topic: Story status
- Replies: 6
- Views: 4193
Re: Story status
Rock on, bro. As one who has recently experienced a health crisis brought on by job-related stress, I salute you.
Zee
Zee
- Sun Apr 16, 2023 10:18 pm
- Forum: Stories by LoyalHound
- Topic: Dorcus and the Rule of Names Ch. 01 - Intake
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1575
Re: Dorcus and the Rule of Names Ch. 01 - Intake
We all have our own artistic vision. I'm interested in seeing more of yours.
- Sun Apr 16, 2023 2:30 am
- Forum: Stories by LoyalHound
- Topic: Dorcus and the Rule of Names Ch. 01 - Intake
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1575
Re: Dorcus and the Rule of Names Ch. 01 - Intake
This is an interesting story. I'm looking forward to seeing more of it. I feel like it has great potential. - Zee
- Sat Mar 25, 2023 5:39 pm
- Forum: Member Stories
- Topic: The Seasoning House - Part 1
- Replies: 10
- Views: 2988
Re: The Seasoning House - Part 1
El Jefe, good point. I honestly see that as being a big part of the attractiveness of this genre - we WANT there to be a stronger coercive for incalcitrant young people.
- Sat Mar 25, 2023 3:39 pm
- Forum: Member Stories
- Topic: The Seasoning House - Part 1
- Replies: 10
- Views: 2988
Re: The Seasoning House - Part 1
I really enjoyed this story, I hope the young lady has a session in a gangbang room and several fetish dressing up lessons eg a school classroom for role play. SmCyber Cyber, this is a good point. Mei is going to a whorehouse where she will be required to act out the sexual fantasies of her custome...
- Sat Mar 18, 2023 3:34 pm
- Forum: Stories by Steve Burke
- Topic: Tales of the CPA - Topping from the bottom (Amelia #1)
- Replies: 8
- Views: 4643
Re: Tales of the CPA - Topping from the bottom
Steve: You are an evil genius. Also, a phenomenal writer. I respect that. - Zee
- Tue Mar 14, 2023 10:09 am
- Forum: Member Stories
- Topic: Generation XX Exodus by D.Night
- Replies: 8
- Views: 2033
Re: Generation XX Exodus by D.Night
Our fraud checking system decide you need to provide code sent to you via SMS and you didn't enter it in time. Exactly, it makes a good plot point – the actual owner of the account can’t access their own money in an emergency. I’m an accountant, this happened recently. People are always trying to s...
- Mon Mar 13, 2023 11:06 am
- Forum: Member Stories
- Topic: Generation XX Exodus by D.Night
- Replies: 8
- Views: 2033
Re: Generation XX Exodus by D.Night
Why so totally stupid system design so even law enforcement is not above law even if it's necessary for cases? Because the author is trying to paint things in the most dark and unsustainable way possible. Read his other story and the responses to it. D. Night is intending this story to be a takedow...
- Sun Mar 12, 2023 7:36 am
- Forum: Member Stories
- Topic: Gotcha by D.Night
- Replies: 14
- Views: 5265
Re: Gotcha by D.Night
Wow! So... look at all of us arguing philosophy! I came here to read a new story and got a lecture. Also, an extremely critical dissection of what’s been happening around here. It’s all good stuff in my opinion because that’s what good writers are supposed to do – critique each other. I would love t...
- Sun Mar 12, 2023 5:21 am
- Forum: Member Stories
- Topic: Generation XX Exodus by D.Night
- Replies: 8
- Views: 2033
Re: Generation XX Exodus by D.Night
Reading this excellent story felt like reading a mainstream action-thriller paperback. I loved the way it just bursts into action right from the opening paragraph. I’m super impressed right now.
- Sat Mar 11, 2023 4:58 pm
- Forum: Stories by ZeeChromosome
- Topic: Gabriela 02 - Road Trip
- Replies: 16
- Views: 4991
Re: Gabriela 02 - Road Trip
After a months-long hiatus from writing, I'm working on Gabriela 3 right now. Thanks for your support.
Zee!
- Tue Mar 07, 2023 2:37 pm
- Forum: Stories by ZeeChromosome
- Topic: Gabriela 02 - Road Trip
- Replies: 16
- Views: 4991
- Mon Mar 06, 2023 5:18 am
- Forum: Stories by ZeeChromosome
- Topic: The Stallion – Workout Part 5 - Seduction of Tamsin Part 2
- Replies: 4
- Views: 2807
Re: The Stallion – Workout Part 5 - Seduction of Tamsin Part 2
The workout was a great set of chapters in your ongoing saga and I can’t wait for the next one to be posted. Your writing keeps getting better and you have a real knack for telling these stories. Keep up the great work and please don’t keep us waiting too long. Sorry for the delays, Jim. Working th...
- Wed Feb 08, 2023 7:28 pm
- Forum: Member Stories
- Topic: Anna's Story - A Slave's Journal: Entry 7
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1045
Re: Anna's Story - A Slave's Journal: Entry 7
As an accountant, I spent a lot of time thinking about this. Remember, the value of a utility slave is the value of their labor minus the cost of upkeep, including medical. Also, the retirement tax if it's a lifetime enslavement. So that's one way of doing it. Another is to consider how much money p...
- Tue Jan 31, 2023 5:18 am
- Forum: Member Stories
- Topic: Anna’s Story - A Slave’s Journal Entry 12
- Replies: 6
- Views: 1371
Re: Anna’s Story - A Slave’s Journal Entry 12
Any points of interest that you liked/disliked or think need clarification when I get around to doing rewrites? Naw. Remember, I'm not shy. Also, I expect the same from anyone else. If I thought I had something helpful to add, I would. One thing I recommend, though, is stick to legal slavery. Just ...
- Tue Jan 31, 2023 5:00 am
- Forum: Member Stories
- Topic: Anna’s Story - A Slave’s Journal Entry 12
- Replies: 6
- Views: 1371
Re: Anna’s Story - A Slave’s Journal Entry 12
Good chapter. I had one of those hematomas once. Not fun.
I like the way you're slipping more world-building into the narrative as you become more comfortable writing this story.
Looking forward to seeing what happens next.
I like the way you're slipping more world-building into the narrative as you become more comfortable writing this story.
Looking forward to seeing what happens next.
- Sat Jan 28, 2023 2:30 am
- Forum: Stories by ZeeChromosome
- Topic: The Stallion - Champion's Reward Part 3
- Replies: 46
- Views: 13534
- Sat Jan 28, 2023 12:17 am
- Forum: Stories by ZeeChromosome
- Topic: The Stallion - Champion's Reward Part 3
- Replies: 46
- Views: 13534
Re: The Stallion - Champion's Reward Part 3
As a reader who really likes your writings, it gets frustrating to be left hanging without any hint of for how long. - Hey Jim, thanks for the kind words. Yes, I have a seasonally intense job and a hellish home life. So it's not unusual for me to disappear for months on end. Two days ago, I wrote m...
- Fri Jan 27, 2023 11:43 pm
- Forum: Member Stories
- Topic: Anna’s Story - A Slave’s Journal Entry 11
- Replies: 5
- Views: 1250
Re: Anna’s Story - A Slave’s Journal Entry 11
Yeah, doesn't seem to be going through. You have PM's turned off somehow? Email me at zeechromosome@gmail.com if it doesn't work.
- Fri Jan 27, 2023 11:26 pm
- Forum: Member Stories
- Topic: Anna’s Story - A Slave’s Journal Entry 11
- Replies: 5
- Views: 1250
Re: Anna’s Story - A Slave’s Journal Entry 11
Dan, great chapter. I'm really getting invested in this character. I feel like you're really starting to tell us more about her and it's really good stuff. Additional comments sent via DM. Let me know if you don't get them.
Zee!
Zee!
- Wed Jan 25, 2023 6:29 am
- Forum: Member Stories
- Topic: Anna’s Story - A Slave’s Journal Entry 9
- Replies: 8
- Views: 1340
Re: Anna’s Story - A Slave’s Journal Entry 9
Zee, Honest question. What is the vibe that you are getting from Miss O'Connor so far? I didn't really have too much of a plan when writing her personality so I'm half winging it right now with her. It's a good question, Dani. I do that too... just write a character and then wonder who or what I'm ...
- Wed Jan 25, 2023 6:14 am
- Forum: Member Stories
- Topic: Anna’s Story - A Slave’s Journal Entry 9
- Replies: 8
- Views: 1340
Re: Anna’s Story - A Slave’s Journal Entry 9
A superb chapter. This is powerful writing. Well done.