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Mr. Smith wrote: ↑Tue Jul 11, 2023 2:20 pmYes, authors must always respect the sanctity of the courtroom.

Smith, I dunno what religion you practice, but please let me attend this Sunday service!

Now, they slapped a band aid onto my new wound and attached the still-bloody chip to the leg of what appeared to be a homing pigeon – not that I had ever seen one before. For a brief moment, as I watched it soar into the sky and wing its way northward, possibly to Canada, my soul was free. Thank yo...

Wowsers! Boy, was that hot!

I'm so glad you're writing again, Mariner.

I'm very much looking forward to reading more of this. Also, looking forward to the "Went West" sequel.

Zee!

Rock on, bro. As one who has recently experienced a health crisis brought on by job-related stress, I salute you.

Zee

We all have our own artistic vision. I'm interested in seeing more of yours.

This is an interesting story. I'm looking forward to seeing more of it. I feel like it has great potential. - Zee

ElJefe wrote: ↑Sat Mar 25, 2023 2:42 pm indentures must quickly learn to toe the line lest the light at the end of the tunnel be extinguished forever

El Jefe, good point. I honestly see that as being a big part of the attractiveness of this genre - we WANT there to be a stronger coercive for incalcitrant young people.

I really enjoyed this story, I hope the young lady has a session in a gangbang room and several fetish dressing up lessons eg a school classroom for role play. SmCyber Cyber, this is a good point. Mei is going to a whorehouse where she will be required to act out the sexual fantasies of her custome...

Steve: You are an evil genius. Also, a phenomenal writer. I respect that. - Zee

Our fraud checking system decide you need to provide code sent to you via SMS and you didn't enter it in time. Exactly, it makes a good plot point – the actual owner of the account can’t access their own money in an emergency. I’m an accountant, this happened recently. People are always trying to s...

Why so totally stupid system design so even law enforcement is not above law even if it's necessary for cases? Because the author is trying to paint things in the most dark and unsustainable way possible. Read his other story and the responses to it. D. Night is intending this story to be a takedow...

Wow! So... look at all of us arguing philosophy! I came here to read a new story and got a lecture. Also, an extremely critical dissection of what’s been happening around here. It’s all good stuff in my opinion because that’s what good writers are supposed to do – critique each other. I would love t...

Reading this excellent story felt like reading a mainstream action-thriller paperback. I loved the way it just bursts into action right from the opening paragraph. I’m super impressed right now.

reddbunnz wrote: ↑Sat Mar 11, 2023 4:50 pm Great combination of stories. I love them both. I cannot wait to see what's in store for both Gabby and Bethany. Please do not keep us waiting much longer.

After a months-long hiatus from writing, I'm working on Gabriela 3 right now. Thanks for your support.

Zee!

JustBob wrote: ↑Tue Mar 07, 2023 2:02 pm I like the short section with Arthur. I can't wait for the next part of the story.

Thanks, Bob. I totally forgot I even posted that. I was working on the next installment this weekend. I'm pretty rusty, so it's slow going.

Zee

The workout was a great set of chapters in your ongoing saga and I can’t wait for the next one to be posted. Your writing keeps getting better and you have a real knack for telling these stories. Keep up the great work and please don’t keep us waiting too long. Sorry for the delays, Jim. Working th...

As an accountant, I spent a lot of time thinking about this. Remember, the value of a utility slave is the value of their labor minus the cost of upkeep, including medical. Also, the retirement tax if it's a lifetime enslavement. So that's one way of doing it. Another is to consider how much money p...

Any points of interest that you liked/disliked or think need clarification when I get around to doing rewrites? Naw. Remember, I'm not shy. Also, I expect the same from anyone else. If I thought I had something helpful to add, I would. One thing I recommend, though, is stick to legal slavery. Just ...

Good chapter. I had one of those hematomas once. Not fun.

I like the way you're slipping more world-building into the narrative as you become more comfortable writing this story.

Looking forward to seeing what happens next.

Jim927 wrote: ↑Sat Jan 28, 2023 2:27 amI’m just hoping that it’s sooner rather than later.

- Me too. I'm always working on recovering my mojo. Believe it or not, your post was a huge help to me. - Zee.

As a reader who really likes your writings, it gets frustrating to be left hanging without any hint of for how long. - Hey Jim, thanks for the kind words. Yes, I have a seasonally intense job and a hellish home life. So it's not unusual for me to disappear for months on end. Two days ago, I wrote m...

Yeah, doesn't seem to be going through. You have PM's turned off somehow? Email me at zeechromosome@gmail.com if it doesn't work.

Dan, great chapter. I'm really getting invested in this character. I feel like you're really starting to tell us more about her and it's really good stuff. Additional comments sent via DM. Let me know if you don't get them.

Zee!

Zee, Honest question. What is the vibe that you are getting from Miss O'Connor so far? I didn't really have too much of a plan when writing her personality so I'm half winging it right now with her. It's a good question, Dani. I do that too... just write a character and then wonder who or what I'm ...

A superb chapter. This is powerful writing. Well done.