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by bayviewrocks
Mon Feb 06, 2023 8:04 pm
Forum: Stories by mikey22
Topic: The selective service slave #15
Replies: 2
Views: 870

Re: The selective service slave #15

I am new here. This is my first post ever. I am overwhelmed with your imagination and creativity. You flip through (segue) changes so rapidly that my reading brain has whiplash. I have read Christal's journey and I have run across other posts suggesting you use Word and Spell Check and Grammar. I ha...
by bayviewrocks
Wed Sep 01, 2021 3:52 am
Forum: Welcome/Introductions
Topic: stories by Olga Anastasia
Replies: 4
Views: 2605

Re: stories by Olga Anastasia

hang in there. it gets rather intense.
by bayviewrocks
Wed Sep 01, 2021 12:12 am
Forum: Welcome/Introductions
Topic: stories by Olga Anastasia
Replies: 4
Views: 2605

Re: stories by Olga Anastasia

Oh wow man. Thank you so much for responding. I did not know the site rules and if mentioning other sites or links were allowed. But what are "they" going to do; bend my dog tags and send me to Nam? Hope this works 'cause I suck at this stuff. Read this one first and then move on to her/hi...
by bayviewrocks
Tue Aug 31, 2021 8:15 pm
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: Lakewood Avenue - Conclusion
Replies: 4
Views: 2594

Re: Lakewood Avenue - Conclusion

This is my first ever doing this (by the way i am not an author, so I have guilt at reviewing when I can't do?) My god, you did so many things so good. Here are my major suggestions after only reading once: I experienced major dissonance in reading this thinking it was set in my real world. Maybe yo...
by bayviewrocks
Mon Aug 30, 2021 5:46 pm
Forum: Welcome/Introductions
Topic: file named "StripSearch for Dummies"?
Replies: 2
Views: 2451

file named "StripSearch for Dummies"?

I'm new (I mean here, not on earth) and I am not very good at understanding the conventions of how things work. Think poor old man who's kinda sad at understanding techworld. I have never even owned a smart phone and live in North Idaho where there is no cell service. I have never sent a text in my ...
by bayviewrocks
Thu Aug 12, 2021 4:02 pm
Forum: Welcome/Introductions
Topic: stories by Olga Anastasia
Replies: 4
Views: 2605

stories by Olga Anastasia

On another site I found a story titled: Slavers of Aghara-Penthay by Olga Anastasia. I thought it a well written and engaging work, along with one other on the same site. As talented as she is I can't believe those are her only two efforts. Does anyone know where else I might find more of her storie...