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Your patient fans need you to finish some of the chapters and get them published. I risk being blacklisted if my giving you more ideas causes you to slow down even more. There is no need for the story to include everything. Perhaps if you start slowly and just dedicate 10 minutes or so to writing ea...

It’s good to hear you’re doing OK and still have lots of ideas for stories. I think it’s safe to say that I speak for everyone when I say that we hope you move your ideas to paper and start writing again. We have all been patiently waiting for you to finish what you have started and add some new one...

This is a great start. Can’t wait to see where you go from here.

Just letting people know that the next chapter has been posted.
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It looks like Harvey wants Tanya as a slave and has found the perfect way to convince her father to sell her. I look forward to seeing what kind of advice or guidance is provided to her. On a more important note, it is nice to see you writing again and I hope this is just the first of a many over th...

Thanks for pointing this story out. I thought he did a great job on it and it really opened the door for any number of new stories or chapters that Joe or other talented authors could pursue. While on literotica, I also read the authors other story which I also thought was well done.
Jim

This is turning out to be the start of another great story and I’m sure that you can and in addition you have laid the basis of several more future stories. There is the story of amber and what happens to her as well as other exploits of Joe Doe. I hope that you pursue and finish all of them, I just...

This was a great story. Thank you so much for taking the time to write it and share it with us.

Jim

Welcome back, Joe. Thank you so much for not only coming back and sharing your writing with us but more importantly, for continuing this story. I loved the conversation scene between Harvey and Brian and adding the figging at the end was perfect. It was the perfect way to end this chapter and leave ...

Hi, I hope this answer helps at least a little bit. First, the estim unit we had was not one of the more sophisticated or high end units, but rather a simple replacement for a vibrating egg. Rather than vibrating, this just had two electrodes, one on each side. When inserted into her vagina, there w...

Good morning Mr. Smith. Thanks for getting back to me. I am encouraged to hear that not only is chapter 6 close to being published but that you are actively working on chapters 9 and 10. All to often, stories get started and never finished and the readers are left hanging, wondering what happened, h...

Hi Mr. Smith. Hope you’re doing well. I’m wondering what happened to you with this story. You were moving right along and then everything stopped and we haven’t had any updates in quite a while. I’m hoping that nothing is wrong and is it just that everyday life has gotten in the way of your writing ...

Hi, Joe. I just finished re-reading this story and I enjoyed it as much the second time as I did the first. I was just wondering if there is any hope of you revisiting this story and finishing it. You got us right to the best part and then stopped. I’m hoping that it was just because you were stuck ...

This was a great chapter, Mr. Smith. I would never have thought of a slave intervention. Great concept and I lover that once again you presented it from both side points of view. Your doing a great job on this story and I can’t wait for the next chapter.
Thank you for sharing with us,
Jim.

This was a great chapter and well worth the wait. I loved that you split it into each woman’s perspective. I can’t wait for the next chapter. Thanks for writing and sharing it with us.
Jim

Your story is off to a great start. Keep up the great writing.

Another great chapter and I can’t wait for the next one. I really thought that Jane was going to end up with a brand and I couldn’t help but feel that she deserved it for letting herself be strapped into the branding bench. She is definitely on a path of no return.

Jim

A great story and I liked the happy ending. Thanks for sharing your writing with us.
Jim

This was a great chapter. You certainly have me hooked. I can’t wait for the next chapter. Thanks

Jim

This story is off to a great start. I can’t wait for the next chapter to come out. Thanks so much for writing and sharing.
Jim

Another great chapter. I will be very interested in seeing where you are going with this. I am not really sure but trust you when you assure us that you know where it is going.
Jim

This was a very hot start to what hope is an ever hotter story. Well done. I can’t wait for the next chapter.

Jim

Another great chapter, Kaylee.

You are off to a great start on this story, Kaylee. I’m looking forward to the next chapters as I see so many possibilities. It will be interesting to see where you take us or them as the story develops. Great work, especially since you said this is your first story. I only hope that it is the first...

I agree with Belinda. This is very well written. You keep adding these twists that I don’t see coming. I love it.
Jim