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by Jim927
Sat Jan 06, 2024 5:07 pm
Forum: Links to Other Sites
Topic: new story
Replies: 3
Views: 1134

Re: new story

Just letting people know that the next chapter has been posted.
https://www.literotica.com/s/best-chanc ... going-home
by Jim927
Sun Dec 31, 2023 4:57 pm
Forum: Stories by Joe Doe
Topic: Hey Abner - A Taxing Question
Replies: 8
Views: 1027

Re: Hey Abner - A Taxing Question

It looks like Harvey wants Tanya as a slave and has found the perfect way to convince her father to sell her. I look forward to seeing what kind of advice or guidance is provided to her. On a more important note, it is nice to see you writing again and I hope this is just the first of a many over th...
by Jim927
Thu Dec 28, 2023 2:58 pm
Forum: Links to Other Sites
Topic: new story
Replies: 3
Views: 1134

Re: new story

Thanks for pointing this story out. I thought he did a great job on it and it really opened the door for any number of new stories or chapters that Joe or other talented authors could pursue. While on literotica, I also read the authors other story which I also thought was well done.
Jim
by Jim927
Tue Dec 26, 2023 4:34 pm
Forum: Stories by Mr. Smith
Topic: Captured, Collared and Trained Ch 2. The new slave goes to court.
Replies: 9
Views: 1653

Re: Captured, Collared and Trained Ch 2. The new slave goes to court.

This is turning out to be the start of another great story and I’m sure that you can and in addition you have laid the basis of several more future stories. There is the story of amber and what happens to her as well as other exploits of Joe Doe. I hope that you pursue and finish all of them, I just...
by Jim927
Tue Dec 26, 2023 4:19 pm
Forum: Stories by Carl Bradford
Topic: The Rivalry Pt. 02
Replies: 3
Views: 822

Re: The Rivalry Pt. 02

This was a great story. Thank you so much for taking the time to write it and share it with us.

Jim
by Jim927
Fri Nov 24, 2023 7:52 pm
Forum: Stories by Joe Doe
Topic: My Wife's Hospitality, Part Eight by Joe Doe
Replies: 12
Views: 6383

Re: My Wife's Hospitality, Part Eight by Joe Doe

Welcome back, Joe. Thank you so much for not only coming back and sharing your writing with us but more importantly, for continuing this story. I loved the conversation scene between Harvey and Brian and adding the figging at the end was perfect. It was the perfect way to end this chapter and leave ...
by Jim927
Thu Nov 02, 2023 12:04 pm
Forum: Stories by Mr. Smith
Topic: Ch 5 The Slave Girl Next Door
Replies: 11
Views: 3841

Re: Ch 5 The Slave Girl Next Door

Hi, I hope this answer helps at least a little bit. First, the estim unit we had was not one of the more sophisticated or high end units, but rather a simple replacement for a vibrating egg. Rather than vibrating, this just had two electrodes, one on each side. When inserted into her vagina, there w...
by Jim927
Mon Oct 30, 2023 1:36 pm
Forum: Stories by Mr. Smith
Topic: Ch 5 The Slave Girl Next Door
Replies: 11
Views: 3841

Re: Ch 5 The Slave Girl Next Door

Good morning Mr. Smith. Thanks for getting back to me. I am encouraged to hear that not only is chapter 6 close to being published but that you are actively working on chapters 9 and 10. All to often, stories get started and never finished and the readers are left hanging, wondering what happened, h...
by Jim927
Thu Oct 26, 2023 3:12 pm
Forum: Stories by Mr. Smith
Topic: Ch 5 The Slave Girl Next Door
Replies: 11
Views: 3841

Re: Ch 5 The Slave Girl Next Door

Hi Mr. Smith. Hope you’re doing well. I’m wondering what happened to you with this story. You were moving right along and then everything stopped and we haven’t had any updates in quite a while. I’m hoping that nothing is wrong and is it just that everyday life has gotten in the way of your writing ...
by Jim927
Tue Sep 26, 2023 6:47 pm
Forum: Stories by Joe Doe
Topic: My Wife's Hospitality, Part Seven by Joe Doe
Replies: 9
Views: 4499

Re: My Wife's Hospitality, Part Seven by Joe Doe

Hi, Joe. I just finished re-reading this story and I enjoyed it as much the second time as I did the first. I was just wondering if there is any hope of you revisiting this story and finishing it. You got us right to the best part and then stopped. I’m hoping that it was just because you were stuck ...
by Jim927
Fri Aug 25, 2023 1:22 pm
Forum: Stories by Mr. Smith
Topic: Ch 4. The Slave Girl Next Door
Replies: 4
Views: 2061

Re: Ch 4. The Slave Girl Next Door

This was a great chapter, Mr. Smith. I would never have thought of a slave intervention. Great concept and I lover that once again you presented it from both side points of view. Your doing a great job on this story and I can’t wait for the next chapter.
Thank you for sharing with us,
Jim.
by Jim927
Wed Aug 16, 2023 10:57 pm
Forum: Stories by Mr. Smith
Topic: Ch 3 The Slave Girl Next Door
Replies: 11
Views: 2637

Re: Ch 3 The Slave Girl Next Door

This was a great chapter and well worth the wait. I loved that you split it into each woman’s perspective. I can’t wait for the next chapter. Thanks for writing and sharing it with us.
Jim
by Jim927
Tue Aug 08, 2023 1:43 pm
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: Sadie and Leah in Toronto: Pt 01 - Arrivals
Replies: 8
Views: 2749

Re: Sadie and Leah in Toronto: Pt 01 - Arrivals

Your story is off to a great start. Keep up the great writing.
by Jim927
Sun Jul 30, 2023 1:13 am
Forum: Stories by Gentlemanmariner
Topic: The Apartment - Part 14
Replies: 8
Views: 3108

Re: The Apartment - Part 14

Another great chapter and I can’t wait for the next one. I really thought that Jane was going to end up with a brand and I couldn’t help but feel that she deserved it for letting herself be strapped into the branding bench. She is definitely on a path of no return.

Jim
by Jim927
Wed Jul 19, 2023 1:44 pm
Forum: Stories by Carl Bradford
Topic: Fraternity Girl
Replies: 4
Views: 2669

Re: Fraternity Girl

A great story and I liked the happy ending. Thanks for sharing your writing with us.
Jim
by Jim927
Sun Jul 16, 2023 2:54 am
Forum: Stories by Mr. Smith
Topic: The Slave Girl Next Door Ch 2.
Replies: 5
Views: 2528

Re: The Slave Girl Next Door Ch 2.

This was a great chapter. You certainly have me hooked. I can’t wait for the next chapter. Thanks

Jim
by Jim927
Mon Jul 10, 2023 1:23 am
Forum: Stories by Mr. Smith
Topic: The Slave Girl Next Door Ch 1 Pt 2 of 2.
Replies: 8
Views: 2581

Re: The Slave Girl Next Door Ch 1 Pt 2 of 2.

This story is off to a great start. I can’t wait for the next chapter to come out. Thanks so much for writing and sharing.
Jim
by Jim927
Thu Jul 06, 2023 11:20 pm
Forum: Stories by Gentlemanmariner
Topic: The Apartment - Part 13
Replies: 4
Views: 2063

Re: The Apartment - Part 13

Another great chapter. I will be very interested in seeing where you are going with this. I am not really sure but trust you when you assure us that you know where it is going.
Jim
by Jim927
Tue Jul 04, 2023 1:10 am
Forum: Stories by Mr. Smith
Topic: The Slave Girl Next Door Ch 1 Pt 1 of 2.
Replies: 7
Views: 2777

Re: The Slave Girl Next Door Ch 1 Pt 1 of 2.

This was a very hot start to what hope is an ever hotter story. Well done. I can’t wait for the next chapter.

Jim
by Jim927
Tue May 16, 2023 8:07 pm
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: The Yards--Chapter 5
Replies: 13
Views: 2858

Re: The Yards--Chapter 5

Another great chapter, Kaylee.
by Jim927
Mon May 08, 2023 2:22 pm
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: THE YARDS ---Kaylee's Story Part 2
Replies: 9
Views: 2771

Re: THE YARDS ---Kaylee's Story Part 2

You are off to a great start on this story, Kaylee. I’m looking forward to the next chapters as I see so many possibilities. It will be interesting to see where you take us or them as the story develops. Great work, especially since you said this is your first story. I only hope that it is the first...
by Jim927
Thu Apr 20, 2023 10:59 pm
Forum: Stories by Gentlemanmariner
Topic: The Apartment - Part 4
Replies: 3
Views: 2064

Re: The Apartment - Part 4

I agree with Belinda. This is very well written. You keep adding these twists that I don’t see coming. I love it.
Jim
by Jim927
Thu Apr 20, 2023 9:56 pm
Forum: Stories by Gentlemanmariner
Topic: The Apartment - Part 3
Replies: 7
Views: 2621

Re: The Apartment - Part 3

Very interesting twist that I didn’t see coming. That’s why I always enjoyed your previous stories.
Jim
by Jim927
Thu Apr 20, 2023 8:00 pm
Forum: Stories by Gentlemanmariner
Topic: The Apartment - Part 2
Replies: 4
Views: 2257

Re: The Apartment - Part 2

The first two chapters show that you are off to another great story that I can’t wait to read. I can’t wait to see how it developers. Well done. I’m so happy that you are writing again.
Jim
by Jim927
Wed Mar 22, 2023 10:09 pm
Forum: Stories by Carl Bradford
Topic: Shannon and Sean, Pt. 04
Replies: 3
Views: 1857

Re: Shannon and Sean, Pt. 04

Another great story, Carl. Thanks for posting and sharing it with us.
Jim