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by Johnny Lawrence
Thu Aug 08, 2024 12:25 am
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: Best laid plans...
Replies: 7
Views: 1490

Re: Best laid plans...

Thanks! I’m still deciding what to do with Erica.

Had my laptop die over the weekend. Everything is backed up, so I didn’t lose anything, but I can’t really write at the moment unless it’s on my phone. So, rain delay.
by Johnny Lawrence
Mon Aug 05, 2024 1:05 am
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: Best laid plans...
Replies: 7
Views: 1490

Re: Best laid plans...

Hey everybody, this story is a bit of an experiment. I see the previous post as being somewhere between a prologue, and one of those bookend wrap-around stories from those old horror anthologies (like Creepshow). The plan is to have a series of short vignettes, basically just brief case summaries of...
by Johnny Lawrence
Mon Aug 05, 2024 12:49 am
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: Best laid plans...
Replies: 7
Views: 1490

Best laid plans...

"Best laid plans..." Erica thought. It was 8:45, Friday night, and she was still at work. In addition to her regular practice, Erica Bishop was the court appointed counsel for their new federally funded rehabilitation program. Supposedly it was a great honor, but most days it just seemed l...
by Johnny Lawrence
Sat Aug 03, 2024 12:00 am
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: Crimestopper 5000
Replies: 2
Views: 826

Crimestopper 5000

It was all a bunch of politically correct garbage, according to Hank Renolds. The first real steps to cleaning up the streets in a long time, and now they want to neuter it. Hank was the project lead on the Crimestoppper program at DynaTron Unlimited. It was his baby, and they were badmouthing it. B...
by Johnny Lawrence
Fri Feb 23, 2024 12:30 am
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: Madison's Halloween Predicament -- Chapter 12
Replies: 8
Views: 2970

Re: Madison's Halloween Predicament -- Chapter 12

Thank you so much! I got stuck, and wasn't really sure how to wrap it up. I know the ultimate conclusion (generally speaking), but after three different attempts, each time I'd get halfway through a chapter and I'd realize it wasn't right. There's an Epilogue that is already done, and I'm pretty hap...
by Johnny Lawrence
Thu Feb 08, 2024 2:03 am
Forum: Other/Misc Topics
Topic: Online models/OnlyFans - FINO?
Replies: 19
Views: 3528

Re: Online models/OnlyFans - FINO?

I've got a handful of stories in progress with some similar themes. Real life schedule leaves little time for writing, but hopefully I can finish one or two of them in the next few weeks. Love the idea of a beautiful professional woman letting herself succumb to her dark fantasies, only to discover ...
by Johnny Lawrence
Wed Jan 17, 2024 12:04 am
Forum: Stories by Hooked6
Topic: The Antebellum School Project Ch2A
Replies: 2
Views: 2252

Re: The Antebellum School Project Ch2A

I'm curious if what she says is in that soap is what is actually in that soap.
by Johnny Lawrence
Sun Feb 05, 2023 2:59 am
Forum: Stories by Joe Doe
Topic: Dear Abner - Fun in the Sugar Sun
Replies: 6
Views: 3516

Re: Dear Abner - Fun in the Sugar Sun

There's a problem, of course, in that the more she complains and resists the idea, the more suspicious everyone will be of her. If she's got nothing to hide, why worry about it?
by Johnny Lawrence
Wed Feb 01, 2023 1:15 am
Forum: Stories by Joe Doe
Topic: Hey Abner - Under Florida Law
Replies: 9
Views: 4931

Re: Hey Abner - Under Florida Law

I'm sure the sheriff wouldn't be up to anything unethical. Those women who were auctioned off were probably legally enslaved by the court. Of course they'd say things like "this is all a mistake", what do you expect them to say? After all, the sheriff could have auctioned Paige off there, ...
by Johnny Lawrence
Wed Jan 18, 2023 11:54 pm
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: VagiVac 3500 XL
Replies: 6
Views: 2173

Re: VagiVac 3500 XL

Thanks everyone! I wanted a story with a happy ending, and I think I got it. Russell gets some time to relax from a high stress job, and is starting to get his libido back. Bridget (who really didn't deserve enslavement) gets to live in a much bigger house than she could have ever afforded, and gets...
by Johnny Lawrence
Wed Jan 18, 2023 2:30 am
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: VagiVac 3500 XL
Replies: 6
Views: 2173

Re: VagiVac 3500 XL

Part 2 of 2 Chuck and Tony let themselves into the back of the house, per the instructions. The door code worked fine, just like the order form said. If ever there were two men who looked more like cartoon dock workers, then they must have stepped directly out of an animation cel. Chuck and Tony we...
by Johnny Lawrence
Wed Jan 18, 2023 2:29 am
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: VagiVac 3500 XL
Replies: 6
Views: 2173

VagiVac 3500 XL

Inspired by Mr Smith's short story "Introducing the VagiVac 3000", I started writing this much much longer story that has only a little bit to do with the title. Apologies up front if you are really into vacuum cleaners. Split into two parts because I tend to drone on too long. VagiVac 35...
by Johnny Lawrence
Sun Jan 15, 2023 12:01 am
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: Madison's Halloween Predicament -- Chapter 12
Replies: 8
Views: 2970

Re: Madison's Halloween Predicament -- Chapter 12

I absolutely LOVE this story and have been waiting and waiting - first for Chapter 12 and now for the rest of this story. What can we do to encourage? Especially when we have no idea what is going on in your life, oh authors? I know I have been in a slump for months. So I fill my time with reading ...
by Johnny Lawrence
Mon Jan 02, 2023 11:12 pm
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: Madison's Halloween Predicament -- Chapter 12
Replies: 8
Views: 2970

Re: Madison's Halloween Predicament -- Chapter 12

I really liked the idea of giving her a "choice", even if all three doors lead to the same ignominious fate. You want the girl to think it's her fault, and she made a bad decision, and thus is somehow responsible and deserving of her misfortune, even if she never had a chance to begin wit...
by Johnny Lawrence
Thu Dec 29, 2022 2:56 am
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: Madison's Halloween Predicament -- Chapter 12
Replies: 8
Views: 2970

Madison's Halloween Predicament -- Chapter 12

After an unexpected delay, I am back with the next chapter. Sorry, I've discovered it's hard to write porn at Christmas time. Feels weird. Potentially one more chapter and an epilogue. I'm still not 100% sure what I want to happen to poor Madison though. What should her sentence be when the judge g...
by Johnny Lawrence
Fri Dec 09, 2022 12:00 am
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: Madison's Halloween Predicament -- Chapter 1
Replies: 6
Views: 2831

Re: Madison's Halloween Predicament -- Chapter 1

Thank you. Had the flu for the past two weeks, but I'm over it now. Hopefully I'll have the last couple chapters up in a few days.
by Johnny Lawrence
Mon Nov 28, 2022 3:59 am
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: Madison's Halloween Predicament -- Chapter 11
Replies: 4
Views: 1507

Re: Madison's Halloween Predicament -- Chapter 11

Thanks! Haven't given up, just had a bunch of people in town for Thanksgiving. They were good enough to bring me a nasty case of the flu. So things are delayed for just a bit.
by Johnny Lawrence
Mon Nov 21, 2022 11:48 pm
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: Madison's Halloween Predicament -- Chapter 11
Replies: 4
Views: 1507

Madison's Halloween Predicament -- Chapter 11

Chapter 11 Madison's awareness returned to her once Jim turned off the lights. Her chin was wet with a trail of drool. She blinked several times as her head cleared, and then realized that somehow they had caught up with her. Three of the men were standing directly between her and escape. "Well...
by Johnny Lawrence
Thu Nov 17, 2022 3:50 am
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: Madison's Halloween Predicament -- Chapter 10
Replies: 4
Views: 1374

Re: Madison's Halloween Predicament -- Chapter 10

Thank you! The next chapter should be up in a day or two. I'm still working on Madison's final fate. There are just so many options, and I'm not sure which one suits her the best. I don't know that "escape" is in her future though.
by Johnny Lawrence
Wed Nov 16, 2022 11:58 pm
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: Madison's Halloween Predicament -- Chapter 10
Replies: 4
Views: 1374

Madison's Halloween Predicament -- Chapter 10

I keep adding more chapters. It seems I've always got at least two more in the works after the one I'm currently writing. Chapter 10 Ricky slowly approached the vehicle that sat halfway in the ditch. Hooking his thumbs into his belt, he did his best to affect the confident swagger of a man in charg...
by Johnny Lawrence
Fri Nov 11, 2022 4:54 am
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: Madison's Halloween Predicament -- Chapter 9
Replies: 1
Views: 1132

Madison's Halloween Predicament -- Chapter 9

A slight detour... Chapter 9 It was Freshman year, and his name was Charlie Stafford. Tall and blond, with dimples. He was in Madison's Intro to Psych class, back when she thought she wanted to delve into people's thoughts and see what made them tick. Charlie sat next to her and was the reason she ...
by Johnny Lawrence
Tue Nov 08, 2022 4:56 pm
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: Madison's Halloween Predicament -- Chapter 8
Replies: 7
Views: 1845

Re: Madison's Halloween Predicament -- Chapter 8

Chapter 8 is marvellous!!! Those teasing. short scenes (the farm girl and the cotton field workers) wow!, a nice glimpse of what's comming!!! The action is starting to unfold nicely, I'm on the edge of my chair for what's comming I didn't understand very well that line of "the ghost", I h...
by Johnny Lawrence
Tue Nov 08, 2022 4:38 am
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: Madison's Halloween Predicament -- Chapter 8
Replies: 7
Views: 1845

Re: Madison's Halloween Predicament -- Chapter 8

Chapter 8 is marvellous!!! Those teasing. short scenes (the farm girl and the cotton field workers) wow!, a nice glimpse of what's comming!!! The action is starting to unfold nicely, I'm on the edge of my chair for what's comming I didn't understand very well that line of "the ghost", I h...
by Johnny Lawrence
Mon Nov 07, 2022 7:01 am
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: Madison's Halloween Predicament -- Chapter 8
Replies: 7
Views: 1845

Madison's Halloween Predicament -- Chapter 8

Chapter 8 The sun was low in the sky when the gasping woman finally reached her vehicle. Parking a quarter mile away had seemed like a good idea when her plan was to sneak in. But covering the same distance at a dead run had left Madison desperately out of breath. She collapsed against the side of t...
by Johnny Lawrence
Mon Nov 07, 2022 5:49 am
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: Madison's Halloween Predicament -- Chapter 7
Replies: 5
Views: 1557

Re: Madison's Halloween Predicament -- Chapter 7

ZeeChromosome wrote: Sat Nov 05, 2022 2:17 pm "Next up, Madison tries to make it out of town."

Honestly, I hope she makes it. I really do. I hope the happily-ever-after ending is the two of them escape and become lovers.
Well, one can always hope, I guess. :)