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by Hooked6
Tue Mar 12, 2024 11:42 am
Forum: Stories by Steve Burke
Topic: Joe Doe Spinoff - Tables Turned!
Replies: 7
Views: 1030

Re: Joe Doe Spinoff - Tables Turned!

Although I seriously enjoy all of your stories, Steve, I must say this Spin Off series is amazing. The tension is palpable and the story is so well written that it does Joe's original Ashley character justice. You have managed to show how a smart, well-educated, extremely clever lawyer/justice gets ...
by Hooked6
Mon Mar 11, 2024 4:53 pm
Forum: Stories by Hooked6
Topic: The Antebellum School Project Chapter 2B
Replies: 20
Views: 3303

Re: The Antebellum School Project Chapter 2B

Sorry for the delay in updating. I have been out of the country on business the last two weeks and was unable to update or post. I am back home as of this morning with a terminal case of jet lag but plan on finishing and posting the next 2 chapters in the next few days. The story is rather long with...
by Hooked6
Wed Jan 17, 2024 12:03 pm
Forum: Stories by Hooked6
Topic: The Antebellum School Project Ch2A
Replies: 2
Views: 1557

Re: The Antebellum School Project Ch2A

Evil smile on my part. Johnny, you are so good at playing out plot possibilities in your mind. I'll bet you are great at solving murder mysteries too picking out plot clues that most people miss! I won't confirm or deny your supposition so as not to spoil or mislead anyone as to where the story is g...
by Hooked6
Wed Jan 17, 2024 11:57 am
Forum: Stories by Hooked6
Topic: The Antebellum School Project Chapter 2B
Replies: 20
Views: 3303

Re: The Antebellum School Project Chapter 2B

Looking so very much to seeing what you decide to do with the story! Like I said, it has been one of my favorites - both the original and revised versions. If anyone can come of with a creative way to move the plot forward I am betting on you.

Hooked6
by Hooked6
Tue Jan 16, 2024 6:59 pm
Forum: Stories by Hooked6
Topic: The Antebellum School Project Chapter 2B
Replies: 20
Views: 3303

Re: The Antebellum School Project Chapter 2B

Can I say, I really hate the rest of family, even the father, he has no balls. I must say this would be a terribly short story if he had them and the rest of the family were all morally upstanding citizens; we would never even gotten "The Project" off the ground. There MAYBE, be a reason ...
by Hooked6
Tue Jan 16, 2024 1:04 pm
Forum: Stories by Hooked6
Topic: The Antebellum School Project Chapter 2B
Replies: 20
Views: 3303

Re: The Antebellum School Project Chapter 2B

Of course it would have to be in the Slavery Universe, otherwise everything they are doing would be illegal. :lol: :lol: The first thought that came to mind after reading your comment, Gary, is that many people reading this would think the same thing - that this, what is happening to Brooke would s...
by Hooked6
Tue Jan 16, 2024 3:32 am
Forum: Stories by Hooked6
Topic: The Antebellum School Project Chapter 2B
Replies: 20
Views: 3303

Re: The Antebellum School Project Chapter 2B

If this is in the same universe, I wonder if it's a precursor to the modern slavery stories. Maybe this project started it somehow. Oh, I hadn't thought about that but it is a nice thought and makes sense that something like this might have started people wondering if there was a place in today's w...
by Hooked6
Mon Jan 15, 2024 11:42 am
Forum: Stories by Hooked6
Topic: The Antebellum School Project Chapter 2B
Replies: 20
Views: 3303

Re: The Antebellum School Project Chapter 2B

Just a wonderful story. The humiliation aspect is so awesome and that Honey finds it so arousing. So well done. Thank you Belinda! You have always been so supportive and as you know for authors that aren't out to make a buck, feedback is everything. This story has many more chapters to go so if any...
by Hooked6
Mon Jan 15, 2024 11:38 am
Forum: Stories by Hooked6
Topic: The Antebellum School Project CH1
Replies: 7
Views: 2199

Re: The Antebellum School Project CH1

What a story! I've missed such well written stories that takes their time and you can see the effort put in each paragraph. Gonna go read the rest! Thank you CommodorRapt for your feedback. I also tend to take my time in many of my stories trying to build a set of characters that have depth and a s...
by Hooked6
Mon Jan 15, 2024 11:35 am
Forum: Stories by Hooked6
Topic: The Antebellum School Project CH1
Replies: 7
Views: 2199

Re: The Antebellum School Project CH1

WOW! What a great start to the story. I love the idea of the Principal being the auctioneer -- perfect casting for a low level authority figure who has absolute authority over Honey. I certainly hopes he makes sure that the buyers get a good look at what they're buying, and extolls the virtues and ...
by Hooked6
Sat Jan 13, 2024 11:05 pm
Forum: Stories by Hooked6
Topic: The Antebellum School Project Chapter 2B
Replies: 20
Views: 3303

The Antebellum School Project Chapter 2B

The Antebellum School Project Ch 2B BY: Hooked6 Copyright January 2024 by Hooked6 (Hooked6@hotmail.com) all rights reserved. Reproduction, redistribution, reposting on another Internet site whether or not a charge or profit is made is forbidden without the expressed written consent of the author. A...
by Hooked6
Sat Jan 13, 2024 10:51 pm
Forum: Stories by Hooked6
Topic: The Antebellum School Project Ch2A
Replies: 2
Views: 1557

The Antebellum School Project Ch2A

The Antebellum School Project Chapter 2A BY: Hooked6 Copyright January 2024 by Hooked6 (Hooked6@hotmail.com) all rights reserved. Reproduction, redistribution, reposting on another Internet site whether or not a charge or profit is made is forbidden without the expressed written consent of the auth...
by Hooked6
Sat Dec 30, 2023 6:24 pm
Forum: Stories by Hooked6
Topic: The Antebellum School Project CH1
Replies: 7
Views: 2199

The Antebellum School Project CH1

The Antebellum School Project BY: Hooked6 Copyright January 1, 2024 by Hooked6 (Hooked6@hotmail.com) all rights reserved. Reproduction, redistribution, reposting on another Internet site whether or not a charge or profit is made is forbidden without the expressed written consent of the author. All ...
by Hooked6
Sat Mar 18, 2023 1:06 pm
Forum: Stories by Steve Burke
Topic: Tales of the CPA - Topping from the bottom (Amelia #1)
Replies: 8
Views: 3645

Re: Tales of the CPA - Topping from the bottom

Great story! I loved the way Amelia turned the tables on the security agent. The confident dialog with a slight hint of doubt as to whether her strategy would work was very interesting. Usually I prefer to read stories where the woman is at a complete disadvantage but your set-up and imagery was was...
by Hooked6
Mon Mar 13, 2023 10:58 am
Forum: Strip Searches!
Topic: Petrol Employees strip searched daily.
Replies: 1
Views: 2367

Petrol Employees strip searched daily.

This article and link were posted at the Strip-search Sub-Reddit by ProfessionalFill that I thought this group might find interesting. https://www.emirates247.com/news/emirates/petrol-station-employees-strip-searched-2010-12-28-1.334883 Emirates 24|7 spoke to several distraught staff of petrol stati...
by Hooked6
Wed Jan 18, 2023 9:34 am
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: VagiVac 3500 XL
Replies: 6
Views: 1513

Re: VagiVac 3500 XL

LOVED the plot twist and the original story idea. I must say you were wrong about the disclaimer at the beginning regarding the limited use of the VagiVac 3500 XL. I thought this story sucked plenty during the first chapter (KIDDING!!) This was a very entertaining story and my compliments to you on ...
by Hooked6
Wed Nov 02, 2022 5:01 pm
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: Madison's Halloween Predicament -- Chapter 4
Replies: 8
Views: 1211

Re: Madison's Halloween Predicament -- Chapter 4

Very well written story. I am eagerly looking forward to the next installments. I love a good set-up and you have done a great job giving our two protagonists some depth to their characters. Your pacing is excellent and the scenes are quite erotic to say the least.

Great job so far.
Hooked6
by Hooked6
Thu Sep 01, 2022 12:21 pm
Forum: Stories by Steve Burke
Topic: Tales of the CPA - Show and Tell! (Annette 5)
Replies: 8
Views: 4227

Re: Tales of the CPA - Show and Tell! (Annette 5)

"Anything to declare?" asked the man who would shortly invade her special places. It was a pointless question, since she would be probed to her full depths regardless. She could hear the grin in his voice as he spoke. "I declare that I have the tightest, sweetest little holes that yo...
by Hooked6
Thu Jul 14, 2022 9:54 am
Forum: Stories by Steve Burke
Topic: Tales of the CPA - Petting Zoo
Replies: 17
Views: 4867

Re: Tales of the CPA - Petting Zoo

Will she hold out? Will this strategy work?

Can't wait to find out for sure! Interesting storyline here and a battle of determination and wills as a bonus!

Hooked6
by Hooked6
Tue Jul 12, 2022 1:37 pm
Forum: Stories by Steve Burke
Topic: Tales of the CPA - Petting Zoo
Replies: 17
Views: 4867

Re: Tales of the CPA - Petting Zoo

Most of the guards were men, a reminder of the mostly male authority under the CPA. The few female guards had been selected for their beauty so as not to spoil the image of the prison, but the inmates generally found the male guards to be far more pleasant. Interesting observation. At first glance ...
by Hooked6
Mon Jul 04, 2022 9:40 pm
Forum: Stories by Joe Doe
Topic: The History Lesson, by Joe Doe
Replies: 4
Views: 2519

Re: The History Lesson, by Joe Doe

I Loved the humorous yet menacing narrative style laced with pseudo-charm and empathy, yet diabolically confident and domineering. The storyline, with a single point of view setting the imagery and action, was very well done. Who needs dialog with storytelling like this? My favorite line, without a ...
by Hooked6
Mon Jun 13, 2022 9:03 am
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: Hospital humiliation!
Replies: 1
Views: 1844

Re: Hospital humiliation!

Very nice hospital exposure and humiliation. The slow strip was very nicely written. Thanks for posting.

Hooked6
by Hooked6
Wed Jun 01, 2022 1:34 pm
Forum: Stories by Joe Doe
Topic: Roman World, Part One, by Joe Doe
Replies: 10
Views: 4022

Re: Roman World, Part One, by Joe Doe

Very Creative. Just when I thought I figured out the cliché of the story line I found out I was not even close. Loved it.

Hooked6
by Hooked6
Tue May 24, 2022 6:33 pm
Forum: Stories by Steve Burke
Topic: Tales of the CPA - Career Opportunities (Annette 4)
Replies: 6
Views: 3044

Re: Tales of the CPA - Career Opportunities (Annette 4)

Annette nodded. “Officially we’re the Quill and Cane , but yeah, that’s what everyone calls us.” I LOVE that moniker - very creative. I am so thrilled that you added to the CPA collection. Some of my favorite stories are found in this universe that you created. I really find the visuals you manage ...
by Hooked6
Thu Apr 28, 2022 10:18 am
Forum: Stories by Joe Doe
Topic: Slave Yoga, Chapter 8A by Joe Doe
Replies: 6
Views: 3705

Re: Slave Yoga, Chapter 8A by Joe Doe

What an amazing and pleasant surprise - one of my all-time favorite slave stories has been continued!! Thank you so much for not giving up on this. I didn’t see Ellie May’s branding, but I certainly heard it. While listening to Betty Jean and the other alpha girls scream as their friend’s ass was br...