StripSearch

This was a very engaging tale. It amazing what people will get up to when they get a rush of blood to the head … or somewhere else. Add in the possibility of some alcohol and so many possibilist.

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Jeepster I certainly wasn't offended by your comment. You were only pointing out the obvious. Plus for anyone who ever submitted anything to Mr Lakewood your comments were mild indeed compared to some of his … sometime interesting feedback. :D Hooked6 I'm glad I am not the only one who likes a long ...

First off thank you to Automagix12 for posting the story and to Hooked6 thank you very much for your kind words. I can't speak for other authors but I find it highly helpful when people give feedback. When I start a story its usually because a particular idea or scenario has caught my interest and I...

I’d like to give a big thank you to all the people who posted a comment here. It’s always nice to get some feedback on a story. Plus thanks for the clarification on ‘arse’ (UK) vs ‘ass’ (US) I will try to remember that in future.

Watcher

This was a very written and engaging story. I especially liked how you developed the relationship between servant and the heiress and how justice was done in the end. The mother and older daughter were lucky they had somewhere to go when justice was done. Imagined what might have happened if they we...