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by CommodorRaptr
Sun Nov 10, 2024 5:01 pm
Forum: Stories by jessmartin
Topic: The Medieval Fair - The Castle
Replies: 1
Views: 257

Re: The Medieval Fair - The Castle

I've always loved the medieval fair stories and yours checks every box. Well done!
by CommodorRaptr
Sat Nov 09, 2024 6:18 am
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: Slave girls productions
Replies: 6
Views: 1042

Re: Slave girls productions

Thx for the compliments people. Always appreciated!
by CommodorRaptr
Tue Oct 29, 2024 2:52 pm
Forum: Stories by jessmartin
Topic: The Medieval Fair - Deceived
Replies: 3
Views: 511

Re: The Medieval Fair - Deceived

Is there a way to access more stories like this from this author. I've tried to sign up on the page but it doesn't let me.
by CommodorRaptr
Mon Oct 28, 2024 2:00 pm
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: Slave girls productions
Replies: 6
Views: 1042

Slave girls productions

Author's note: For anyone that might recognize the title from some old site back in 2003 this is simply a fictional POV of a girl for SGP. I may have added some slight personal touches. Enjoy. "So just to be sure, you've reviewed the contract thoroughly?" "Yes, I admit it's a bit outs...
by CommodorRaptr
Sun Oct 06, 2024 4:23 pm
Forum: Stories by jessmartin
Topic: The Prey
Replies: 2
Views: 477

Re: The Prey

The absolute definition of short and sweet. Wonderfully written. Well done.
by CommodorRaptr
Thu Sep 26, 2024 10:48 pm
Forum: Stories by Hooked6
Topic: The Antebellum School Project 4
Replies: 3
Views: 1823

Re: The Antebellum School Project 4

So glad you're continuing this. The plot is interesting and quite unique. Thank you for posting.
by CommodorRaptr
Mon Sep 09, 2024 5:05 pm
Forum: Stories by mikey22
Topic: Scared straight
Replies: 5
Views: 1069

Re: Scared straight

Interesting take on Scared Straight and a good start. Looking forward to your next part.
by CommodorRaptr
Fri Aug 16, 2024 4:41 am
Forum: Stories by jessmartin
Topic: The Collection Pole
Replies: 3
Views: 1133

Re: The Collection Pole

This is great! I love seeing more stories of this kind. Well done!
by CommodorRaptr
Tue Aug 06, 2024 3:53 pm
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: Intro to Slavery part 2B
Replies: 0
Views: 691

Intro to Slavery part 2B

I don't plan to continue this series but I’m totally fine if someone wants to continue it themselves. I’m much better at making one off stories and I will likely make some of those in the future. Any comments and constructive criticism is always welcomed. Enjoy! Intro to Slavery Part 2B Beatrice’s P...
by CommodorRaptr
Sun Aug 04, 2024 6:58 pm
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: Intro to Slavery Part 2A
Replies: 8
Views: 1468

Re: Intro to Slavery Part 2A

Thx! I always doubt myself when I think of new ways to talk about the Slave Grading universe and what other topics I can develop or explore. I'm glad people enjoy it. Part 2B is in progress.
by CommodorRaptr
Fri Aug 02, 2024 5:30 am
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: Intro to Slavery Part 2A
Replies: 8
Views: 1468

Re: Intro to Slavery Part 2A

It means so much to be graced by a compliment from you Ma'am.
by CommodorRaptr
Wed Jul 31, 2024 6:02 am
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: Intro to Slavery Part 2A
Replies: 8
Views: 1468

Intro to Slavery Part 2A

This is an unplanned continuation of the first part so I highly recommend you go read that. Any comments, feedback, suggestions or criticism is always welcomed. Intro to Slavery - Part 2A Andrea’s POV I sat in the HCI locker room and I had been staring at this plastic bin that contained my clothes t...
by CommodorRaptr
Wed Jul 31, 2024 4:17 am
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: Intro to Slavery
Replies: 5
Views: 1189

Re: Intro to Slavery

That could be interesting. I've got someone brewing at the moment but I'll keep that in mind as possible spin off. Any other suggestions, feedback or criticism are very much welcomed.
by CommodorRaptr
Tue Jul 30, 2024 2:23 pm
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: Intro to Slavery
Replies: 5
Views: 1189

Re: Intro to Slavery

I honestly don't really know where to take it from here. I wrote this in one night when the idea just popped up in my head. I'm glad that you like it tho.
by CommodorRaptr
Tue Jul 30, 2024 5:52 am
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: Intro to Slavery
Replies: 5
Views: 1189

Intro to Slavery

This is a 1 part story. Follow up parts may happen if enough people like it. It is based on the legal slavery stories originally created by Joe Doe and led on to many authors on this platform. My story has, like most, it's own special touches to the universe and it's world. The setting is mentioned ...
by CommodorRaptr
Mon Jun 10, 2024 1:15 pm
Forum: Stories by Gary
Topic: HEARTLAND (REVISED) CHAPTER ELEVEN
Replies: 4
Views: 1366

Re: HEARTLAND (REVISED) CHAPTER ELEVEN

I have to admit that I was pretty surprised when I saw you posted a new chapter. I'm glad to see you write again.
by CommodorRaptr
Tue Jan 16, 2024 9:16 am
Forum: Stories by Hooked6
Topic: The Antebellum School Project Chapter 2B
Replies: 23
Views: 6732

Re: The Antebellum School Project Chapter 2B

This is such an interesting take on the slave grading stories. I'm curious to see how the whole process develops.
by CommodorRaptr
Mon Jan 15, 2024 7:55 am
Forum: Stories by Hooked6
Topic: The Antebellum School Project CH1
Replies: 8
Views: 3705

Re: The Antebellum School Project CH1

What a story! I've missed such well written stories that takes their time and you can see the effort put in each paragraph. Gonna go read the rest!
by CommodorRaptr
Mon Jan 15, 2024 7:26 am
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: The Yards-Chapter 11 The End
Replies: 9
Views: 3621

Re: The Yards-Chapter 11 The End

I'm glad to see a continuation and a satisfying ending. It does seem to be happy ending as well which I prefer. Something that caught my eye and that I'm honestly surprised that no other authors have yet added in their slave grading stories is the magnetic cuffs that are able to be controlled via th...
by CommodorRaptr
Sun Dec 31, 2023 10:48 pm
Forum: Stories by Joe Doe
Topic: Hey Abner - A Taxing Question
Replies: 8
Views: 2039

Re: Hey Abner - A Taxing Question

I absolutely love these shorts. They're each very unique and bring to life people of this universe and their stories. Looking forward to your next installment.
by CommodorRaptr
Wed Aug 09, 2023 6:28 am
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: Sadie and Leah in Toronto: Pt 01 - Arrivals
Replies: 8
Views: 3295

Re: Sadie and Leah in Toronto: Pt 01 - Arrivals

Fantastic start. Glad to see some action happening in my country too. I'm looking forward to the next installment.
by CommodorRaptr
Thu Jul 27, 2023 5:29 pm
Forum: Stories by mikey22
Topic: Caught driving naked
Replies: 6
Views: 2628

Re: Caught driving naked

Why did you post the same story 3 times??
by CommodorRaptr
Sun Jul 23, 2023 2:21 am
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: The Yards---Chapter 6
Replies: 8
Views: 3640

Re: The Yards---Chapter 6

I really don't mean to be pushy or ignore what is very possibly your real life that is getting in the way of this but I'd like to be certain that you do plan to continue this story? It's a very interesting take on the Slave Grading universe and I'm personally very invested in the characters you've c...
by CommodorRaptr
Sun May 21, 2023 7:32 am
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: The Yards--Chapter 5
Replies: 13
Views: 4024

Re: The Yards--Chapter 5

This is great! Setting up some backstory is good and allowing multiple story paths to play is nice too. Can't wait to see what happens to Kaylee.
by CommodorRaptr
Thu May 04, 2023 6:26 am
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: THE YARDS ---Kaylee's Story Part 2
Replies: 9
Views: 3303

Re: THE YARDS ---Kaylee's Story Part 2

Loving this series you've began! I'm very interested to see where you take it. Great work.