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This is such an interesting take on the slave grading stories. I'm curious to see how the whole process develops.

What a story! I've missed such well written stories that takes their time and you can see the effort put in each paragraph. Gonna go read the rest!

I'm glad to see a continuation and a satisfying ending. It does seem to be happy ending as well which I prefer. Something that caught my eye and that I'm honestly surprised that no other authors have yet added in their slave grading stories is the magnetic cuffs that are able to be controlled via th...

I absolutely love these shorts. They're each very unique and bring to life people of this universe and their stories. Looking forward to your next installment.

Fantastic start. Glad to see some action happening in my country too. I'm looking forward to the next installment.

Why did you post the same story 3 times??

I really don't mean to be pushy or ignore what is very possibly your real life that is getting in the way of this but I'd like to be certain that you do plan to continue this story? It's a very interesting take on the Slave Grading universe and I'm personally very invested in the characters you've c...

This is great! Setting up some backstory is good and allowing multiple story paths to play is nice too. Can't wait to see what happens to Kaylee.

Loving this series you've began! I'm very interested to see where you take it. Great work.

Not trying to complain man, just checking in on you since you blew past your release date of part 10 by a bit. You doing ok?

I missed your perfect grammar and writing man. Excited for the next chapter.

Missed you man! Happy to see you back at it!!

Glad to see a happy ending as most stories with slave gradings end up with the girl "accidentally" getting enslaved. I thought there was some interesting topics ij your stories like the offer Belinda gave Crystal to be enslaved through college and also the slight mentions of the mom being ...

Eager to see what happens next with Crystal! Poor Misty though.

I'm a bit confused man, there seems to be these large jump in time and flashbacks in the story. I find it a bit difficult to stay on track. Also do people in this universe live forever?

Just wanted to say sorry for my horrible posts on your last story. I should be much more empathetic to you and your writing. The spelling errors are fine and not at all as bad as I said. You've created and made a wonderful story and I have no right to shit all over it. As someone else said it's a fr...

Edit to my last comment:

No it doesn't just apply to there and their. There are tons of easy to fix spelling errors.

Love your story love that we're finally getting the interesting stuff but my goodness you have to learn how to spell. This only applies to using the words "There or Their". It becomes increasingly frustrating to read when I have to re-read sentences several times in a row just to understan...

Your chapters are good but still very short. I don't know what your life is like ans it's definitely none of my business but I feel like you could put a bit more effort and draw out these chapters. Crystal has had 8+ chapters in this series yet she hasn't even been slave graded yet. At this point yo...

Love to see a new chapter finally but I was expecting a little more. Looking forward to the next one =D

Great follow up chapter. Albeit a bit short. I would seriously recommend that you get an editor or at least someone to read your story prior to posting as you have many grammatical and spelling errors in your texts. It's not an enigma, it's an enema for example.

Wow, this is deplorable. Please add details, character motivations and some humanity in this. It feels like everyone is a damn robot. Your stories on Literotica aren't any better.

Holy shit man spell check please! This is unreadable.

Great story, nice to see a co-operation type story with a long time and great author. One thing troubles me though. Why the fuck wasn't this stuff spell checked? I understand that English isn't your first language but if you had Gary help you with the plot and such why couldn't you just ask him to s...