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- Tue Jan 16, 2024 9:16 am
- Forum: Stories by Hooked6
- Topic: The Antebellum School Project Chapter 2B
- Replies: 21
- Views: 3720
Re: The Antebellum School Project Chapter 2B
This is such an interesting take on the slave grading stories. I'm curious to see how the whole process develops.
- Mon Jan 15, 2024 7:55 am
- Forum: Stories by Hooked6
- Topic: The Antebellum School Project CH1
- Replies: 7
- Views: 2344
Re: The Antebellum School Project CH1
What a story! I've missed such well written stories that takes their time and you can see the effort put in each paragraph. Gonna go read the rest!
- Mon Jan 15, 2024 7:26 am
- Forum: Member Stories
- Topic: The Yards-Chapter 11 The End
- Replies: 9
- Views: 2574
Re: The Yards-Chapter 11 The End
I'm glad to see a continuation and a satisfying ending. It does seem to be happy ending as well which I prefer. Something that caught my eye and that I'm honestly surprised that no other authors have yet added in their slave grading stories is the magnetic cuffs that are able to be controlled via th...
- Sun Dec 31, 2023 10:48 pm
- Forum: Stories by Joe Doe
- Topic: Hey Abner - A Taxing Question
- Replies: 8
- Views: 1078
Re: Hey Abner - A Taxing Question
I absolutely love these shorts. They're each very unique and bring to life people of this universe and their stories. Looking forward to your next installment.
- Wed Aug 09, 2023 6:28 am
- Forum: Member Stories
- Topic: Sadie and Leah in Toronto: Pt 01 - Arrivals
- Replies: 8
- Views: 2768
Re: Sadie and Leah in Toronto: Pt 01 - Arrivals
Fantastic start. Glad to see some action happening in my country too. I'm looking forward to the next installment.
- Thu Jul 27, 2023 5:29 pm
- Forum: Stories by mikey22
- Topic: Caught driving naked
- Replies: 6
- Views: 2117
Re: Caught driving naked
Why did you post the same story 3 times??
- Sun Jul 23, 2023 2:21 am
- Forum: Member Stories
- Topic: The Yards---Chapter 6
- Replies: 8
- Views: 2854
Re: The Yards---Chapter 6
I really don't mean to be pushy or ignore what is very possibly your real life that is getting in the way of this but I'd like to be certain that you do plan to continue this story? It's a very interesting take on the Slave Grading universe and I'm personally very invested in the characters you've c...
- Sun May 21, 2023 7:32 am
- Forum: Member Stories
- Topic: The Yards--Chapter 5
- Replies: 13
- Views: 2886
Re: The Yards--Chapter 5
This is great! Setting up some backstory is good and allowing multiple story paths to play is nice too. Can't wait to see what happens to Kaylee.
- Thu May 04, 2023 6:26 am
- Forum: Member Stories
- Topic: THE YARDS ---Kaylee's Story Part 2
- Replies: 9
- Views: 2798
Re: THE YARDS ---Kaylee's Story Part 2
Loving this series you've began! I'm very interested to see where you take it. Great work.
- Thu Apr 27, 2023 9:48 am
- Forum: Stories by Gentlemanmariner
- Topic: Story status
- Replies: 6
- Views: 3121
Re: Story status
Not trying to complain man, just checking in on you since you blew past your release date of part 10 by a bit. You doing ok?
- Tue Apr 18, 2023 7:11 am
- Forum: Stories by Gentlemanmariner
- Topic: The Apartment - Part 5
- Replies: 3
- Views: 2169
Re: The Apartment - Part 5
I missed your perfect grammar and writing man. Excited for the next chapter.
- Mon Apr 17, 2023 8:11 am
- Forum: Stories by Gentlemanmariner
- Topic: The Apartment - Part 3
- Replies: 7
- Views: 2669
Re: The Apartment - Part 3
Missed you man! Happy to see you back at it!!
- Tue Mar 21, 2023 4:08 pm
- Forum: Stories by mikey22
- Topic: Crystals slave grading adventure part 35
- Replies: 4
- Views: 549
Re: Crystals slave grading adventure part 35
Glad to see a happy ending as most stories with slave gradings end up with the girl "accidentally" getting enslaved. I thought there was some interesting topics ij your stories like the offer Belinda gave Crystal to be enslaved through college and also the slight mentions of the mom being ...
- Tue Mar 07, 2023 7:17 am
- Forum: Stories by mikey22
- Topic: Crystals slave grading adventure part 33
- Replies: 2
- Views: 502
Re: Crystals slave grading adventure part 33
Eager to see what happens next with Crystal! Poor Misty though.
- Mon Feb 13, 2023 5:25 pm
- Forum: Stories by mikey22
- Topic: Crystals slave grading adventure part 30
- Replies: 1
- Views: 431
Re: Crystals slave grading adventure part 30
I'm a bit confused man, there seems to be these large jump in time and flashbacks in the story. I find it a bit difficult to stay on track. Also do people in this universe live forever?
- Mon Nov 28, 2022 6:01 am
- Forum: Stories by mikey22
- Topic: Crystals slave grading adventure Part 16
- Replies: 5
- Views: 641
Re: Crystals slave grading adventure Part 16
Just wanted to say sorry for my horrible posts on your last story. I should be much more empathetic to you and your writing. The spelling errors are fine and not at all as bad as I said. You've created and made a wonderful story and I have no right to shit all over it. As someone else said it's a fr...
- Tue Nov 22, 2022 9:15 am
- Forum: Stories by mikey22
- Topic: Crystals slave grading adventure part 15
- Replies: 8
- Views: 902
Re: Crystals slave grading adventure part 15
Edit to my last comment:
No it doesn't just apply to there and their. There are tons of easy to fix spelling errors.
No it doesn't just apply to there and their. There are tons of easy to fix spelling errors.
- Tue Nov 22, 2022 9:03 am
- Forum: Stories by mikey22
- Topic: Crystals slave grading adventure part 15
- Replies: 8
- Views: 902
Re: Crystals slave grading adventure part 15
Love your story love that we're finally getting the interesting stuff but my goodness you have to learn how to spell. This only applies to using the words "There or Their". It becomes increasingly frustrating to read when I have to re-read sentences several times in a row just to understan...
- Thu Oct 13, 2022 6:06 am
- Forum: Stories by mikey22
- Topic: Crystals slave grading adventure part 8B
- Replies: 4
- Views: 791
Re: Crystals slave grading adventure part 8B
Your chapters are good but still very short. I don't know what your life is like ans it's definitely none of my business but I feel like you could put a bit more effort and draw out these chapters. Crystal has had 8+ chapters in this series yet she hasn't even been slave graded yet. At this point yo...
- Thu Sep 15, 2022 5:10 am
- Forum: Stories by mikey22
- Topic: Crystals slave grading adventure part 8
- Replies: 2
- Views: 861
Re: Crystals slave grading adventure part 8
Love to see a new chapter finally but I was expecting a little more. Looking forward to the next one =D
- Thu Jul 21, 2022 5:49 pm
- Forum: Stories by mikey22
- Topic: Crystals slave grading adventure part 7 A
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1047
Re: Crystals slave grading adventure part 7 A
Great follow up chapter. Albeit a bit short. I would seriously recommend that you get an editor or at least someone to read your story prior to posting as you have many grammatical and spelling errors in your texts. It's not an enigma, it's an enema for example.
- Mon Apr 04, 2022 3:47 am
- Forum: Member Stories
- Topic: The Troubles - Carol Manning
- Replies: 10
- Views: 4599
Re: The Troubles - Carol Manning
Wow, this is deplorable. Please add details, character motivations and some humanity in this. It feels like everyone is a damn robot. Your stories on Literotica aren't any better.
- Fri Apr 01, 2022 4:40 am
- Forum: Stories by mikey22
- Topic: The selective service slave part 10A
- Replies: 1
- Views: 710
Re: The selective service slave part 10A
Holy shit man spell check please! This is unreadable.
- Fri Dec 10, 2021 6:17 am
- Forum: Stories by DonMarco
- Topic: Story cooperation: Claire returns Part 4/4
- Replies: 8
- Views: 3335
Re: Story cooperation: Claire returns Part 4/4
Great story, nice to see a co-operation type story with a long time and great author. One thing troubles me though. Why the fuck wasn't this stuff spell checked? I understand that English isn't your first language but if you had Gary help you with the plot and such why couldn't you just ask him to s...