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I'm loving how this story fragment is progressing, much longer and it'll be a complete story! :lol:

A thought about Hunter, what if he was trying to buy some weed and in trying to find money to pay for it he had emptied his pockets. When the pink receipt appeared, the seller might have seen it and ...

Joe, great inspiration from you! Thanks for adding what I'm officially labeling part 17.

I'm quite pleased that I threw in a curve that inspired you so much.

Of course since what you have shared has given me some great stuff to work with, I'm having to rework what I've written so far. And I'll be ...

Here’s a quick one that I came up with over the weekend. I think it counts more as a one-shot rather than a story fragment. (If anyone feels like playing with any part of this story, feel free to have fun with it.)

I’m having to rework the latest chapter of ‘Fearful Future’, since Joe gave me some ...

I read this bit about Trudy being secretly vengeful, and it got me to thinking.

What if Trudy plays at being easily ordered by the powerful like Sarah Powers, but for those below her in the office...

I could see where someone comes to chat with her and some gourmet donuts or chocolates are left on ...

Fearful Future by Joe Doe / Part 16 by GreyRose
Joe’s reply post on part 14, I’m labeling it as part 15.

Like part 10 is Joe’s response to part 9.

A slightly shorter chapter, but I hit a good break point.

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The bustle of the crew as the ship came into dock and all of the blaring ...

Thanks Joe!

For future reference I'm labeling this as part 15, it belongs in the thread.

We're getting close to the end, I hope what I've got planned feels satisfying to all who came along for the ride.

Great Part 11. But where is Part 10. I can’t find it.


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I wondered when I did it that it could be confusing.

On chapter 9 when Joe replied to that string, what he added was so great that I thought of it as chapter 10 but it's not actually labeled that anywhere on the site. (Just in my ...

The name of 24 or Arjun, is Joe's creation, so any incorrect spellings are most likely a typo on my part.

Thanks for appreciating the two author story weaving!

Ah the limitations of AI tools. ;)

Very glad to hear that you are working to continue the story, looking forward to when you post them.

I have no idea of how Grok works, never looked at it, so my suggestions here may be totally useless.

As an idea that you might have already tried, can you get ...

I've really enjoyed these three chapters, I hope that you complete the story arc and post where she signs up for the Luxury Slave Vacation.

Fearful Future by Joe Doe / Part 14 by GreyRose
This one was quick as I had it plotted out several chapters ago. Things should pick back up again in the next chapter.

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In the restaurant Arjun stiffened, seeing 0717 collapse on the block. Mitch gave his upper arm a light fist bump ...

Fearful Future by Joe Doe / Part 13 by GreyRose
My apologies that it took me so long to complete this chapter, life happened and I lost the creative thread. But I managed to recover it and I hope this was worth the extended wait.

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Sarah slept through when other slaves were placed in ...

Fearful Future by Joe Doe / Part 12 by GreyRose
When I started this chapter, I had planned on 0717 being on the road again as the break point, but there just seemed so much happening that she still has an appointment to keep in the next chapter before she leaves this facility.

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This part was harder to wrap my head around than I thought, there was a lot more to tell than I had planned on. Giving a different feel to this processing center than what we've become familiar with through Big D and HCI was an interesting challenge.

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Sarah rolls over, feeling groggy ...

Joe, a great addition to this story! I love the skilled young artist's rendering, and how that will have its own immortality.

I bet Slave Mart will have that in their advertising promotions for some time to come!

Interesting ideas Eug, thanks for sharing. But I've got a different story arc in mind.

Now to see if the characters agree to where I'm aiming the story. ;)

I've had stories where the characters highjack the plot and it ends up someplace completely different from where I meant to arrive when I ...

I think I like what you came up with for the brand better than what I had in mind. I had chosen the Pacifico font, SPS - with the two 'S' characters pushed together, and the 'P' planted like a flag above them.

I don't have any experience in graphic design and searching for images is a black hole ...

Re: Fearful Future by Joe Doe
Part 9 by GreyRose

Whew! I wrote the first few parts in a kind of fever. Then I needed some extra time to recharge and think how things were going at this new slave processing center. I also had a side bar with Joe that was very productive, as they tend to be, and ...

An idea that, is about after the parade. ;)

The Slave Mart group seems to be terribly disorganized in dealing with the parade. What if the 2nd truck bundles up all of the loose Slave Mart gear (including the anvil and the associated tools) and heads back to the store. :o

This would be a problem ...

I realized after I posted that the parade had already started, so my ideal was too late.

I also realize that since the two girls from Fox5 news didn't make the official story-line, this extra bit wasn't likely to happen either. It was just an interesting fantasy idea.

As I was reading my way through this story again, I had a wild thought.

When Julia arrived at the parade start, there was great excitement and everyone watched avidly as she was stripped and then was collared.

Swiftly following that excitement is the arrival of the Fox5 news team, and the stations ...

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Look under part 5, Joe's reply to that is the part 6. It's not numbered, but the numbering worked out so that I've been designating his reply's as the even number sections.

Re: Fearful Future by Joe Doe
Part 7 by GreyRose
For those paying attention to the chapter numbering, part 6 is by Joe and is under the part I posted on Sunday.

I just realized that when I posted the first addition to Joe’s story, I thought it was going to be 2 maybe three chapters. This is chapter ...

Once again a great job! The escalation was beautifully done, and the teasing the visiting friends with hints was beautiful to read. I can imaging them every time they think of this weekend trip that bit of mystery, pops up and nags at them.

I had a thought of something that could complicate the number issue, in addition to miss matched lists. The original 23 had their number put on their shoulder/tit, and then that young fellow came along with that sunscreen that he slathered all of the slaves with, focusing on making sure that their ...