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My compliments on an excellent chapter with very interesting developments, I'm looking forward to the continuation of your story. I like your inclusion of the FINO, introduced by Carl Bradford, and your introducing of an additional clause that can add interesting elements as well. The chapter I'm wo...

Great new chapter! As always great character development with so many directions you might take things. I'm suspecting that Stefania is following her own plan for training Frankie, and may prove to have been more supportive of our heroine than it appears. And I'm thinking that Amy better watch her a...

Hmm... I like the idea of adding the ID cards to this environment. Chips could be only for those that have been enslaved or have gone the extra distance to get them. Being a unique device there would be limited distribution of the chip readers, after all why spend money for something that would not ...

Amber, aka Splits - Redhead, 5'4" https://stripsearchfantasy.com/gallery/picture.php?/922/category/70 Juliana DeVries - Raven haired, 5’ 7” https://stripsearchfantasy.com/gallery/picture.php?/921/category/70 Josua (Josh) Bronson - aka Bucking Bronson Jake Abercrombie - the old man downstairs Th...

Great chapter! I liked how you handled her transition from getting slave graded to slave traded. And brining in the other girl from the lobby was a nice touch. You give entertaining details and your characters feel real. Looking forward to the sale and where this one goes from there.

You're laying some intriguing groundwork, I'm looking forward to where you will go with each of your subplots.

I like how you've done such a good job at blending ideas from other storytellers but there's still a unique flavor all your own.

Glad that your back and feeling better. Looking forward to the next chapter in your story.

In my recent stories I've included links to ladies that resemble the characters in the story. There are a couple of reasons that I started this, but I noticed a comment on this board where there are those that have a preference for their own imagination. Can I get a temperature check, how many enjoy...

Interesting and nicely done, with some interesting new elements that could lead to some intriguing plotlines. I hope we see more contributions from you in the near future.

I don't know if you chose to change it or aren't familiar with the name, but its the Texas Department of Criminal Justice (TDCJ).

To everyone, I should have mentioned that Katamaran789 gave me some good feedback that improved this chapter. I was happy to help her a bit with her writing and she's returned the favor in kind. I'm very glad she's joined our group.

Survivor, Thank you for you input, I'll always listen to honest commentary. And I understand that not all kinks are shared by everyone. I'm glad the rest of the chapter was something you enjoyed. I introduced an element for a reason and found myself writing it more into the story than I had original...

Dramatis Persona Amber, aka Splits - Redhead, 5'4" (think Amy Adams) https://www.imdb.com/name/nm0010736/bio?ref_=nm_ov_bio_sm Josua (Josh) Bronson - aka Bucking Bronson The Cheerleader Gambit, chapter 1 By GreyRose Amber pondered on how surreal her life had become. Last semester she was a 3rd ...

Gary, What if someone hacked the slavery registry (maybe trying to change the status of someone they want or they want more blonds on the block), or there was a database crash that corrupted the data for women in her region. As a result all the women that are affected by the database corruption are ...

Gary, Your right about the blinders, they are just stiffened leather panels that focus the wearer to view only in the direction they are facing. But what I noted was that Amy had a bridal locked on as she left the stall first thing in the morning. (sorry I think I'm being pedantic...) Any time there...

Very nice Gary! I liked how Amy is sliding further and further down the slippery slope of slavery. A couple of minor items I caught. Amy was told to run on the track as fast as possible, then return. Upon returning, “Wasn’t that easy, and you were really fast.” And Amy smiled, “Now I’m going to put ...

I really like the way your story is going, lots of potential elements here. It looks like she's thinking about returning to the mall, perhaps to see 32's auction. Unconsciously maybe to see what else can happen to her. Does she meet with 32 again later and does that lead her into any new adventures?...

Katamaran, A very nice start, especially for a first story. I'm really looking forward to where you take your heroine. You have some great story development going with lots of places to go. I take it as a high compliment that my stories were part of your inspiration, thank you. By the way, you did h...

Katamaran, A very nice start, especially for a first story. I'm really looking forward to where you take your heroine. You have some great story development going with lots of places to go. I take it as a high compliment that my stories were part of your inspiration, thank you. By the way, you did h...

So my experiment had mixed results, both versions are enjoyable. It just depends upon the reader as to which is better. :) But I think I also prefer the original ending for several reasons. Part of what I was doing in the sales booth portion of the story was show a variety of paths that lead girls t...

Gary, As a reply to your story segment with Amy, what if instead of a rod the Big D wrangler uses some cord or rope to bind Amy's elbows before she applies some 'distraction' to Amy. Either playing with her or putting a toy in her pussy, before she binds Amy's hands or feet she's distracted. Amy des...

I want to thank Yvel for his comments, and getting me to rethink this chapter. I’d appreciate feedback as to which version people prefer, or if they are equal if different entertainment value. = = = = Katie gets an Education – Post graduate studies... Part 5 by GreyRose Katie scurries behind her new...

In case now one else noticed, this author has a 2nd chapter posted. The same link as referenced will get you there.

Very Hot! Thank you for writing this, I look forward to how it continues.

I like how you are working the psychological issue of changing Amy's name to 3, and how it messes with everybody's heads.

Yvel, I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I don't know if you've read any of the 'Tracey' stories by Katie Smith, this is an extension of her original slave world. From your comments I gave enough background for the reader to understand the rules of engagement for the plot but didn't bog it down with un...

Hooked66, Yes you did give me an answer to my question, and it was very welcomed. I'm very familiar that just because I'm thinking one thing as I write, that doesn't mean my readers will be reading it the same way. That's what's great about the written word, the readers imagination is engaged and ne...