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by dtrelsky
Mon Nov 20, 2023 10:20 pm
Forum: Stories by Joe Doe
Topic: My Wife's Hospitality, Part Eight by Joe Doe
Replies: 12
Views: 6247

Re: My Wife's Hospitality, Part Eight by Joe Doe

Great to see you writing again! I agree with Jeepster that the conversation while she humps his hand was nice. I also liked that the rich father actually followed through and made an offer.
by dtrelsky
Tue Feb 07, 2023 8:31 am
Forum: Stories by Joe Doe
Topic: Hey Abner: Happy Birthday!
Replies: 5
Views: 3055

Re: Hey Abner: Happy Birthday!

Truly a contender for "Best Mom". I'm sure she can win the popular vote! My favorite letter to Abner so far!
by dtrelsky
Sun Dec 25, 2022 1:29 pm
Forum: Stories by Joe Doe
Topic: Any Chance Auction, Part 22 (Conclusion) By Joe Doe
Replies: 30
Views: 6666

Re: Any Chance Auction, Part 22 (Conclusion) By Joe Doe

The dog pile was a great move! I'm sure Annie is going to enjoy watching that video for many years to come. I like to think her touch up branding wouldn't end up making it permanent. I have found the adding of temporary brandings to be great addition to the setting. While it isn't permanent it lasts...
by dtrelsky
Fri Jun 24, 2022 1:13 am
Forum: Stories by Joe Doe
Topic: My Wife's Hospitality, Part Two, by Joe Doe
Replies: 3
Views: 1738

Re: My Wife's Hospitality, Part Two, by Joe Doe

Loving the story! I thought she was gonna find herself tipped into the trunk for the ride home there for a bit, but her time in the frontseat proved to be an adventure! I'm looking forward to find out what happens at Typhoon Lagoon. I'm assuming its a water park and I find myself immediately wonderi...
by dtrelsky
Sun Jun 05, 2022 8:04 am
Forum: Stories by Joe Doe
Topic: New Story by Joe Doe: A Judicious Request
Replies: 7
Views: 4004

Re: New Story by Joe Doe: A Judicious Request

I like the mention of community service! I feel like a lot more fines and misdemeanors would be replaced with some "community service" though I imagine there would be many who would rather take on more hours of service in exchange for some choice of where they offered their service. Maybe ...
by dtrelsky
Sun Jun 05, 2022 7:53 am
Forum: Stories by Joe Doe
Topic: Roman World, Part Two, by Joe Doe
Replies: 12
Views: 4876

Re: Roman World, Part Two, by Joe Doe

I'm glad to see Rachel is going to have some means of recovering. I was worried when the collar seemed to be overwriting her personality and preventing her from taking action of her own volition. Now it looks more like she won't simply be controled by the collar to perform her slave duties, but rath...
by dtrelsky
Sun Jun 05, 2022 7:26 am
Forum: Stories by Joe Doe
Topic: My Wife's Hospitality, Part One, by Joe Doe
Replies: 4
Views: 2639

Re: My Wife's Hospitality, Part One, by Joe Doe

All of these new stories are great! I'm looking forward to what Margot's husband has planned for her after her "fifteen minutes" are up and she still has no clothes!
by dtrelsky
Fri Feb 04, 2022 5:33 am
Forum: Other/Misc Topics
Topic: Just felt like sharing this
Replies: 4
Views: 2608

Re: Just felt like sharing this

https://vimeo.com/73851503 I've seen the music video for Robin Thicke's Blurred Lines before but I never knew there was a version where the girls were topless and practically naked, combined with the songs lyrics it stimulated my imagination a bit. Okay, now he was close Tried to domesticate you Bu...
by dtrelsky
Wed Jan 26, 2022 9:10 pm
Forum: Stories by Carl Bradford
Topic: The Girl in the Window, Pt. 04
Replies: 4
Views: 1552

Re: The Girl in the Window, Pt. 04

Great story! The mother-in-law cleary isn't sorry in the least as even after hearing how her ass could be on the line she is still making comments to rile up Natalie. Circle star seems like the perfect remedy. If her husband repurchasing her is a real concern when they go to court he could have Lois...
by dtrelsky
Tue Nov 23, 2021 10:25 am
Forum: Other/Misc Topics
Topic: Just felt like sharing this
Replies: 4
Views: 2608

Just felt like sharing this

https://www.reddit.com/r/trashy/comments/qzr68g/police_training_to_stop_naked_dancer_at_the_beach/ Saw this on the front page of reddit and thought it made for an interesting idea. The poster made a typo that was autocorrected from "trying" to "training" but I like the idea that ...
by dtrelsky
Mon Nov 08, 2021 11:38 pm
Forum: Stories by Carl Bradford
Topic: Ellie May Pt. 03: Shipboard Slave Whoring
Replies: 10
Views: 2070

Re: Ellie May Pt. 03: Shipboard Slave Whoring

I really enjoyed these last two chapters. Getting to revisit Sarah Hollister was great. I liked the reference to the people behind her grant being the bidders from her Anychance Auction who trained her during their court appointed time with her. I am surprised she didn't make the cut versus the othe...
by dtrelsky
Tue Oct 26, 2021 12:26 pm
Forum: Stories by ElJefe
Topic: Southwest Shipping - Part 15
Replies: 14
Views: 3618

Re: Southwest Shipping - Part 15

Well that was certainly a bleak version of her future Zee. At the same time you point out something that I think is a reality of these fictional worlds even if it is never mentioned. Once a woman is a slave and her identity replaced with a number, who she was is only going to be a reason that people...
by dtrelsky
Thu Sep 09, 2021 1:30 pm
Forum: Stories by Joe Doe
Topic: New Joe Doe Story Fragment from Sandy Foot Girl Epilogue
Replies: 9
Views: 1983

Re: New Joe Doe Story Fragment from Sandy Foot Girl Epilogue

The Slave Mall is suddenly very interesting to me. I think I'd written it off as a place you went to buy accessories, basically just a bunch of sex toys. This though...wow. It sounds really hot! I really hope we get to read about it one day. Even if you don't get around to writing a story in there t...
by dtrelsky
Sun Aug 15, 2021 2:43 am
Forum: Stories by Joe Doe
Topic: DixieLand - Honeypot's Story
Replies: 19
Views: 4371

Re: DixieLand - Honeypot's Story

This was great! I loved seeing the scene conclude with her sale and branding. The concept of story points was a great addition along with the MSCP behind the scenes making all the adjustments necessary to satisfy the guests. It seemed it even killed off her wife character with just a line or two. Wh...
by dtrelsky
Tue Aug 10, 2021 11:21 pm
Forum: Stories by ZeeChromosome
Topic: The Stallion - Arrival
Replies: 14
Views: 3949

Re: The Stallion - Arrival

Maybe if the guy has no idea his significant other is the one being bred. They may have chosen to attend to event separately, even going so far as to hide it from each other due to the reason they were going. She would be the one to find out he was there because she recognized his voice but for him ...
by dtrelsky
Tue Aug 10, 2021 1:32 pm
Forum: Stories by ZeeChromosome
Topic: The Stallion - Arrival
Replies: 14
Views: 3949

Re: The Stallion - Arrival

Congratulations! I admit I wasn't expecting to be very interested for the same reason you mentioned. Once I understood the premise he'll be unbroken, get to fuck a lot, and he's doing it all for family I stopped picking at it and read it straight through. I'm interested to see what Hank's future wil...
by dtrelsky
Mon Aug 09, 2021 11:48 pm
Forum: Stories by Joe Doe
Topic: Story Fragment: A Dark Transformation
Replies: 19
Views: 3922

Re: Story Fragment: A Dark Transformation

Huh, I didn't realize it was Christmas!
by dtrelsky
Mon Aug 09, 2021 9:48 am
Forum: Stories by Joe Doe
Topic: Story Fragment: A Dark Transformation
Replies: 19
Views: 3922

Re: Story Fragment: A Dark Transformation

I'm thrilled you liked it and even felt like writing a bit of it! I myself am not a writer so if you have any interest in doing more feel free. I'll just be happy to see life breathed into it. As it is already, its more than I could have hoped for.
by dtrelsky
Sun Aug 08, 2021 10:01 pm
Forum: Stories by Joe Doe
Topic: Story Fragment: A Dark Transformation
Replies: 19
Views: 3922

Re: Story Fragment: A Dark Transformation

Nice fragment. As for the theme park idea, I've thought about the show Westworld for that. Southworld I guess? Rather than rewrite it out differently I'm going to try just pasting the train of thought I had here it was meant to exorcise the thought and flesh it out so I could move on from thinking a...
by dtrelsky
Wed Jul 21, 2021 3:11 pm
Forum: Stories by Joe Doe
Topic: Saul's Revenge
Replies: 9
Views: 2651

Re: Saul's Revenge

The SNATCH act sure sounds great. No need to worry about student loans anymore! I could imagine that its not so easy to qualify for a full ride though , an applicant's slave grade would likely determine how much assistance they could receive. Those with poor slave grades could end up having to put i...
by dtrelsky
Mon Jul 19, 2021 2:02 pm
Forum: Stories by Joe Doe
Topic: The Rest Safety Area by Joe Doe
Replies: 8
Views: 2427

Re: The Rest Safety Area by Joe Doe

Nice! I know it doesn't tend to show up in stories here due to an apparent distaste for it but I think it makes a ton of sense that this sort of thing happens in this setting slaves are treated as property not as a person who might be related to someone else. Especially since I've never seen any men...
by dtrelsky
Fri Jul 16, 2021 3:47 am
Forum: Stories by Carl Bradford
Topic: Breeding the Pony Girl, Pt. 07
Replies: 13
Views: 2192

Re: Breeding the Pony Girl, Pt. 07

Another great installment in this wonderful series. I definitely look forward to more interactions between Lois, Mary and Hailie! The adventure this time with the lesbian ranchers was great. I like the fact that they were also risking time in harness, it makes Lois' actions look not so far out there...
by dtrelsky
Tue Jul 06, 2021 5:33 pm
Forum: Stories by Other Authors
Topic: Literotica
Replies: 45
Views: 17345

Re: Literotica

Always felt it was a shame there was no more from this author. https://www.literotica.com/s/teamora Any nude woman is believed to be a prostitute, as that is their uniform. Noble woman feels unsatisfied. Don't know if it fits but here goes https://www.literotica.com/s/milk-sow-ch-01 Due to the disco...
by dtrelsky
Tue Jul 06, 2021 5:11 pm
Forum: Stories by Carl Bradford
Topic: Breeding the Pony Girl, Pt. 05
Replies: 15
Views: 2484

Re: Breeding the Pony Girl, Pt. 05

I like the idea of Ginger helping to fill in for a redhead pony girl pulling a float for some college kids. I think rather than being carelessly mentioned by Hailie though it would be a better fit if she learned of a need for a redhead and Mary making the offer to help out a fellow rancher instead o...
by dtrelsky
Mon Jul 05, 2021 7:02 pm
Forum: Stories by Carl Bradford
Topic: Breeding the Pony Girl, Pt. 05
Replies: 15
Views: 2484

Re: Breeding the Pony Girl, Pt. 05

I'm with Jeepster on this! I am also very excited to hear that you have planned out more installments and are already so far along writing them! On the subject of the possible phishing emails, I think that if the bank reacted that way they are just asking to lose business. The SIN brand I could see ...