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Your dialog above represents PERFECTLY the types of thoughts that would be in the minds of readers enjoying your story, as I tried to point out in my post a couple of posts above. When an author can entice readers into imagining how a scene might go, far and beyond what the author actually wrote - T...

Loved the ending. I really, REALLY enjoyed this entire tale (Westbound and Went West) so far but I am overjoyed at seeing that the SAGA continues with Frankie in "Big Sky Country." With Imreadonly2 posting Joe Doe's, "The Christmas Candle" recently and now you posting the last ch...

WOW! You made my point WAAAY better than I did. Thanks!

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Marsha, hands on her hips, turned and confronted her mother. “Like, EXCUSE ME, boss-mom. Like, I’m taking the slave training class in college, so we agreed I’d be in charge today? That was our agreement. Remember?” There is so much to love about this story. The dialog snippet above was hilarious ye...

Asking the author to go beyond that one word and show us the consequences of her enslavement is unrealistic . I'm not criticizing the author, just trying (I hope) to empathize with him. You can't expect a great artist to turn his portrait masterpiece into a vast landscape. What?? I most respectfull...

Surely there needs to be a Part 2 to this Marvelous story. All of the people of that little town that attended the Sheriff's Auction that day know the outcome and had a chance to witness what happened afterwards to Lot #130 and to Max and the Stepmother and whether the Sheriff got to bet on our hero...

Loved the subtle changes which made this version of the rewrite more consistent with the wonderful, rich and endearing Allison in the first original story. Great stuff.

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Heartfelt congratulations on your literotica debut. yesterday. Wishing you great success - you have put a lot of work into your story and I'm glad it is now available to a wider audience.

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Thank you, that means a lot. Looking back im not super happy wiht some choices on how and what I've written but I do really want to finish this story [/quote] Kat: No matter wharf proverbial corner you may feel that you have written yourself into in the story or may feel dissatisfied with, readers ...

Kat, you still with us? It's been awhile since you posted. I agree with orflash. Not that I have room to beg for more of Marie's Slavery Adventures as I have several unfinished stories of my own, but your story, Kat, is amazing and I would love to see you continue it. Hope you are okay and all is w...

Thanks for the link, Diver. I had no idea Imreadonly2 had a DeviantArt page. The things you learn at this forum

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Wow! An Imraedonly2 story I've not read. It sounds very interesting. I hope I can persuade him to post it at this forum. Pretty please?

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Interesting idea. You've done well in creating erotic captions for the photos you've posted and the short story vignettes are entertaining as well. Though the site isn't strictly strip search or slave in totality, it is well worth the look.

Thanks for the link.

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Without giving anything away I just leave you with an *evil grin*

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Interesting. You obviously put a lot of thought into this.

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Thanks. There is more to Tracey's Halloween Costume if I ever get time to finish it. As for a repository. I started on one but the same legal fear over liability on the part of the host service that killed off many forums and story sites like Discwebbapps, Yahoo and others did the same to my host si...

I really should have edited it more carefully and dumped it, and if I edit this to post on Literotica I certainly will. Does that mean you'll be posting your preferred "final" edit here as well or will your fans here at Stripsearchfanatsy.com have to pop over to Literotica to see what sho...

This whole answering message scene was wonderfully creative. I could just hear the "worry" and fear in the tone of her message. I especially liked the use of the French language to name the pole (Le pôle Esclave - or "The Slave Pole.") The French derivative here has a certain ele...

This was always one of my favorite stories of yours. You did an excellent job conveying the escalating tension as the story progressed and the visual imagery was nicely done.

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The idea is that a private company operates a database of free woman that could be enslaved. They analyse their financial status, Internet-data like browsing history etc. and offers slavers to access this information and even further analyses, suggested methods for enslavement and so on. WHAT A GRE...

Just have to say I love the concept of "Sudden Enslavement Syndrome." It gives rise to a lot of emotions on the part of the reader trying to imagine what, Amy in this case, might be going through. Just the title alone makes one pause as it sounds so foreboding.

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Mr. Smith wrote: ↑Thu Feb 25, 2021 5:03 am
I have to confess, I was torn when the Interior Minister showed up when he did with part of me wishing he showed up about thirty minutes later.

LOL . . . only 30 minutes?? I was hoping for another hour! Great story b7ffh

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Annette’s employers demanded that her bottom always be bare when she worked – both in the office and in court. Her grey knee-length skirt had a heart-shaped cutout that displayed her delectable derriere in all its naked perfection – wearing panties was forbidden. I LOVED this addition to the CPA ta...

As excited as I was to see another Any Chance Auction post by you, I think I'll skip reading this postscript as I would rather wait for you to develop the story and read it as things happen. This is such a great story and I am willing to wait for it - EVEN if that means I might be waiting for years ...

From Joe: The scene with the slave bread was inspired by a scene in a very old French porn film, The Education of the Baroness. [url]https://xhamster.com/videos/education-of-the-baroness-english-dub-12371652/url] To Joe: I LOVED the bread scene in your story and I also like the movie link. Thank yo...