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Excellent, I do wonder what her husband to be will think of his mother either screwing this up (if it was a mistake).

Love it, another great slave grading story

Outstanding! Love the twist n the build up

Outstanding, very much enjoyed it. Keep up the good work

Again a very good chapter, really enjoyed it.

I'm still working on other parts of the chapter. As for the short slave episode, I've been considering either something along one of my older ideas where she goes to a livestock auction and finds a slave market like the story i put up here" https://stripsearchfantasy.com/viewtopic.php?f=18&...

Still like the story but I do wonder how the family will take their relative being sold out of spite. And since the story says that her assets will be SOLD, not distributed among her potential heirs. Which makes sense since it would make enslaving a rich relative potentially profitable. Now her fami...

Extremely intense, love it. I was thinking of a twist when Rita is enslaved instead, or maybe both sisters. But I think out heroine fate is sealed. Eternity collars do exist, except for the acid vial. I was going to use one in my story since they are a thin ring they are kind of unassuming and can b...

As for Amy, she is trying to stay away from slavery so I was thinking of something that happens unexpectedly. Something that brings up her slave feelings again. And since its out of the blue she isn't ready to defend against it. - She finds a lost or runaway slave? - She runs into some kinds of slav...

Yes it is, I found it and when I saw the Big Al's reference I thought it might be interesting to put up.

I have most of it, I have the beginning and end and the most of the middle. Been considering some ideas to add to the chapter. Been trying to think of another minor interaction with slavery for Amy
Also: I have added a picture I found on Flickr in my album.

Welcome Mr. Smith, an as for your question about coordination, well sort of. I was first introduced to the, as I call it, Slave Grading Universe through Joe Doe's story "Slave Grading Do's and Don't's" We exchanged some e-mail's discussing the rules of slavery, and that was where I came up...

Loved this on and I also appreciate the idea of the warranty and the zapper. There are actually remote control vibrators out there, panties with them in. https://www.adameve.com/adult-sex-toys/vibrators/vibrating-panties-c-1962.aspx?cm_mmc=MSY-_-Vibrators_CA_NB_Bing_Exact-_-Vibrating_Panties_Exact-_...

Intense, hanging on the edge of my seat

Thank you imreadonly2

Great idea, having the slave girls get deloused.

Those details is what makes the difference between a real author and a OK writer like myself

My spider senses are tingling, I sense trouble ahead!

Excellent build up. Of course she will probably end up enslaved.

Another great chapter. I always like when a clerk in a slave store tries to get a woman enslaved. Story Is coming along nicely. When it comes to legalizing slavery, an author can really have it happen any way they want. From my point of view I think it would be impossible for any modern western coun...

Actually I just realized I did say the bridal had come off: “No, no.” Emily assured her, “No one will think the worse of you, in fact they will think your brave to try it.” Amy was uncertain about what Dr. Ranger suggested, “Just put the bit in your mouth, see how it feels.” Amy started feeling subm...

GreyRose, I had assumed, without saying it, that Amy's tack was remove when she was put in the stall for the night. I should mention that in the story. Hooked6, I don't think the whip is used very hard, just enough to get the Pony Girls attention and a light correction. I only describe how forceful ...

I thought the text was going to be two long so I was going to cut in two. But I did a "Copy" instead of "Cut"
But that is where I ended the Chapter. But Dr. Ranger does show up again in the next chapter.

I'm no expert in blinders, I thought the blinders were a separate from the bridle, and just attached to it.
Oppsy about the getting undressed twice.

CHAPTER SIX - Part Two A few weeks later Amy was wearing the necklace at Calgary’s Boulevard Shopping Center when she absentmindedly passed a Sam The Slave Man store. There was a buzz and an announcement, “Welcome Slave Amy, is there anything we can help you with today?” Amy was completely dumbfound...