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I have had a realization that Amy's slave visit with Mr. McTavish, where she gets dirty working with a horse and ends up being a slave for a weekend, no longer works where it is. With Amy's now having much more extensive slavery experience before she meets him in Chapter Seven. So I'm going to have ...

So came up with a solution with the new third chapter of my Heartland story. The supernatural part of the chapter will become a "What if?" story and the rest will become the new third chapter. The new chapter has another visit to HCI for slave yoga and a mistaken visit from a van from HCI ...

Thank you both very much.

This is what Literotica said: [[Of course, Amanda was no virgin, having lost it when she was sixteen, but doing it under these circumstances upset her.]] As our submission FAQ states, we do not accept stories involving people under the age of 18 in sexual situations: http://www.literotica.com/faq/05...

My submission of my "Mr. Edwards" was rejected by Literotica. Apparently their rule is absolutely no mention of underage persons and sex. They rejected my story because I mentioned that Amanda, Claire's sister, had lost her virginity at sixteen.

I have thought about the misspelled words and there is something else happening as well. I use Microsoft Word, which of course has a Spell Checker. Which I use to correct spelling. However I have noticed that when I Copy-Paste my stories on here, this site's Spell Checker flags words that were not f...

Doh!

Ya I should have given it another once over, sorry about that.

"A WHAT IF?" HEARTLAND STORY This was written awhile ago, And is based on the original versions of my Heartland Stories. Amy was so glad to be home again. She was back in her room, back with her family, back with her friends. She told herself she had to take it day by day and not to expect...

Excellent. Only quibble I have is referring to the slave's calling out their availability (“Please buy me and use me, Master;” “I long for you to ram your monster cock up my ass,” “Three holes—no waiting,”) as Slave Mantra's is a mistake as various authors have used them as Affirmations. Different w...

Excellent, what else would I expect?

I admit its a change from what I usually write. I got the idea a bit from a story I can no longer find but I well remember. Two collage girls studying anthropology go to Africa and attend a gathering led by a Witch Doctor. The shaman eventually hypnotizes both girls into becoming his sex slaves. One...

Update: After a lot if interruptions, I am now writing a new Chapter Three, so now The present Chapter Three will become Chapter Four. Its a bit of grab bag of ideas. It started as a short opening gambit to Chapter Three but has expanded. It started as a Slave Yoga story, Amy is offered a free slave...

LOVED the last chapter. I really like seeing people getting their comeuppance.

Really like the idea here, I have no idea if it would work in real life, but then phooey on real life. If we wanted real life we wouldn't be reading and writing these stories would we?

Thanks for using the Protective Enslavement, I'm glad I was able to give you a a nice idea to add to your story. In the original version misread the how the Pussy Post was used. I also started calling it a Pussy Pole and it was the inspiration for the Pussy Pole Trap in "A Heartland Slave Gradi...

In the original "Slave Grading Do's and Don'ts" story by Joe Doe, which I took as my original template, an adult child could be sold into slavery by a parent or guardian. So yes I parent could impose a Protective/Preventative Enslavement on their children. Though local laws may very. A PE ...

In my story "Back Home Again" that you can read here: https://www.literotica.com/s/home-again-14 I introduce the idea, but don't give a name to, Protective Slavery that is describe as: “Some parents enslave their daughter’s as a form of protection. They become not just parent, but their ow...

Thank you. I've been trying to think about how Amy might help herself control her slave mind. She would likely look up on the internet for answers, though the slave industry would try to suppress therapies to cure someone with a slave mind. I'm not sure what to have Amy do to help herself. Confront ...

CHAPTER TWO, Part Two When Amy awoke, she was groggy, she was still naked, collared, and was in one of the slave pens, she wasn’t sure who she was. She tried to stand up but was still too wobbly. Through her still cloudy vision she saw men and the occasional naked woman walking by. A couple seemed p...

CHAPTER TWO Part One Amy had walked away from slavery, but it seemed she had done so by the skin of her teeth. The more she thought of it, the more she realized that without her strong family ties, she might have stayed a slave for days, weeks, or longer, maybe forever. Amy felt that her world had b...

I'm still not sure what all to do about Amy in the last chapter, though I still plan for her to become a Slave In Name Only (SINO) to her husband Ty. But I do like the idea of Amy being asked about slavery from a teenager. By the way the age of consent in Canada is sixteen, it was raised to that fro...

I enjoyed how you flesh out the slave universe. Lots of detail and funny episodes. Especially the feminists signing up to be in the My Little Pony Girl Movie. I'm glad you have broached the fact that slavery would leak into everyday life. I was worried that your suggesting that there are pony girl t...

I do like that you give and extensive explanation of how some of the slavery in your world works. Excellent work. In some ways, in these stories, saying that somehow often recently, slavery was made legal again, is somewhat of a throwaway line that isn't meant to be put under too much scrutiny. The ...

Just curious, are you thinking of the Nancy Drew books, or the CW TV Series?

An excellent chapter, as usual. My only complaint is the legal bits. The corrupt judges cliche is so 1970's, and the bit that the HCI won't obey a contract and ignore the fact that a woman isn't a slave. I always thought HCI was more bureaucratic than Big D's, so maybe more likely to follow rules. B...