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The plot thickens. I know you are getting to it, but has Frankie been fucked even once yet? It just seems unlikely that a sex slave hasn't been mounted even once in all this time. What is the Bird group? Remind me. You're so good with the twists and turns of the plot. It's one of the best stories I...

Excellent plot development. I hope that, eventually, the character of Stefania will become clearer--here, she appears as a pure sadist, yet if I recall in Part 2B she was playing slave to the other trainer--is she a switch, or secretly submissive so she punishes the slaves because she wishes she we...

Went West - Part 5 This part is pretty much all sapphic sex. It's also a bridge to the next part: here I'm setting up the major events that will take us into the finale. “You all did very well yesterday,” Master David said, addressing Fish class as we knelt on the grass, still slightly damp from the...

This subjugation by Jared is some of your finest work. I'm sure you'll find some way to increase the time Frankie has to spend at his feet. As for Amy, I had the impression from previous comments that she is going to be increasingly assertive and judgemental, losing any deference she had for Franki...

So is Marla still in the picture? Was she totally in the dark about what happened, indifferent, part of the plot? Was the Puppet Master way above Marla's pay grade? Did they hold something over her head or did Marla smell blood in the water and wants the story no matter what it costs Frankie? By th...

While short, it was very intense. I thought the sex would awesome, but the humiliation was even hotter. Like the very last person Frankie would ever suck off and she had to do it. Thanks orflash64, I'm glad you liked it! I love shame and humiliation in stories, and am working on writing it better -...

Kind of a short chapter, but wanted to get it out here. Let me know what you think! ---------------------------------------------------------------- Frankie knelt, as naked as the day she was born, on a rubber mat in the bright New Mexico sunshine. One scarcely needed to see her that her arms were ...

To Joe: Dammit, you talented SOB - this is a great story! Now I really have to step up my game. (I've just now caught up, so I'm going to comment on the entire series rather than go back to each entry, although I may do that anyway.) So much to like here, but to me the best aspect is that while this...

How is Nicolaides still running around free after what he did? I know, right? The in-story answer is that Nicolaides traded information for his freedom - he had some leverage, he knew it, and he used it. Nicolaides is a cunning predator, and I plan to write more stories with him as a character. The...

I'm thoroughly enjoying this series! Great tension, absorbing plots, and interesting characters, well done. Gary's Claire stories are one of the reasons I got into the genre to begin with and these are excellent continuations of that tradition. Thanks for sharing, I'm looking forward to the next one!

Not as much sex in this one, but lots of plot exposition - as we will see, the next part will have plenty of sex ------------------------------------------------ I knelt on the floor in front of the cages, not paying attention to anything the trainers were saying. Instead I was thinking about the t...

Greetings all! I have indeed been gone far too long - I got sick (not the thing in the news, fortunately, but still pretty bad) and had to spend way too long recovering. During that time, I just couldn't find it in me to write: I didn't have to energy or the ability to focus. Sorry I was gone withou...

(...) The smiling teenager motioned the trainer over, and he used his phone to film all the action as the trainer laid two bright welt across Vanessa Kensington Longworth pampered white bottom. "That's it! Rub your slave snatch. Get it all nice and juicy, like a good little slut. Steve has lot...

I am really enjoying this series and the plot twists as they occur. To be honest I was hoping you would have Brooke and Kenzie back for more, either in this series of stories or in a separate story line. Just making a request since they will need to be slave graded again since they were purposely s...

Very good, really liked the story. Loved the idea of them screwing with the trainees sense of time, I have read its sometimes used in interrogations. I'm not sure about the idea of Visitors Day. For the story it works since it allows Amy and Marla to interact with Frankie. It would also work in sla...

WOW! This installment was packed full of goodies. I admired the concept of “Visitor’s Day.” Having family or friends allowed into the facility to check on their loved ones wasn’t something I thought about but it really humanizes the whole concept of slavery and Slave Training and adds a touch of re...

orflash64 wrote: ↑Thu Jul 30, 2020 3:25 am Oh Shit! Did really just end it there? Part three better be coming soon. That's like Superman rescues Lois Lane then the credits roll.

Working on it now - Frankie has no idea what's about to hit her!

FASCINATING! I love little mysteries. I also like the pacing and balance of your writing in this series. Many training stories get so bogged down in repetitive details or at the other end of the spectrum, gloss over things so fast the reader misses out on things. You have managed to create just the...

( This is the ending part to Part 2, I had to rewrite it a few times to get it like I wanted it. Not much sex, but it advances the plot. ) I didn’t get much sleep, and awoke groggy. Tossing and turning, what little sleep I got was disturbed by dreams of sex — submissive sex with men who had complete...

( This is part one of two, covering the first week of obedience school. It's still a bit rough, so please let me know what you think. ) ( The concluding portion will be ready Monday or Tuesday - I'm rewriting it a bit because I wasn't happy with it. ) ( And I promise that all of the subplots will be...

Yes.

Gentlemanmariner, so how is the story coming? Waiting patiently for Frankie to be taken down a peg. 8-) I'm almost done with part two: between being unhappy with the original format necessitating a complete re-write, and the fact that it's a lot longer than I expected, it's taken more time than I e...

I'm sorry, Karen. Yes, your husband won the auction, but he only transferred the cash for your hammer price, and neglected to pay the buyer's premium. Since he didn't transfer us the cash within 2 hours of your sale, we contact Mr. Abdul, who paid us the full amount. The good news is that your fant...

Dammit Joe, this was enjoyable AND it gave me ideas for more stories - as if I didn't have enough already.

Thanks, and well done

Possibly similar to what Joe Does describes as "slave heat?" Perhaps "collar heat?"

Another idea: "slave burning" or "burning collar?"