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Joe, here is my covid 19 scam story idea. Tracey One A Plus Story outline By orflash64 In a world of legalized slavery and the covid 19 pandemic. Tracey is surviving in the new age of legalized slavery, going to work and not really thinking about slavery. Some girls have had slave fantasies but Trac...

Joe can do a whole series of short ones like that covering the daily news events. Two twenty year olds were caught in Florida dressed as Grandmas to get vaccinated for Covid 19. I pitched a story to Katie Smith along those lines, and she wrote it, then said she changed everything. If you want to hea...

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Happy Valentine's day! So what's happening with your stories?

Happy Valentine's day! So what's happening with your story?

Happy Valentine's day! So what's happening with your story?

Happy Valentine's day! So what's happening with your story?

Happy Valentine's day! So what's happening with your story?

Joe, are you going to reflect on how much Anne was used sexually before being released or are you going to circle back to that when continue the main story?
Does she look upon that interval fondly or with exasperation?

Good one Joe,
While Anne will probably walk away from the Court still free, I imagine she will be cream filled in various places with a well spanked backside and more photos of her slave naked well documented.

You could also do a flashback interval with Marie opening the box sometime ago and not understanding what the contents are used for, then at the school she learns how to use them and is shown how. It still leaves you with "What's in box?" Maybe a cagol device she puts in her pussy to exerc...

I would think she is fucked and does some sucking, but learning to do it submissively as a slave. Learning to squeeze her pussy as she is fucked, same with anal, how to deep throat and make it look effortlessly. Also how to present herself as a slave naked in public, which I don't think she has done...

You could always start on a new character story. The best part is when a unaware or innocent experiences slavery for the first time.

So what's next on the horizon?

Yeah, if George Lucas can twik his movies three or four times, why not you.
You can go back to the unopened box and do a stand alone side story of what is in it and how Marie uses it.

You can also use the feedback to rewrite the chapter as you go. Once posted doesn't mean it's permanent. Your story is your story and you can go back and make changes that fit better.

Joe, you will no doubt finish this story and many more. When you start on a new one I hope you give some thought to making a continuation of "Victoria the war whore", I know you said there was not much interest in the story. That might be because not alot of people read it. Of all your cha...

I agree, it was very humiliating and embarrassing for her and for the most part a good chapter, but the bread thing just seems a little gross. A little sampling is one thing but over doing it can be dangerous. Just ask Michael Douglas, who got throat cancer because he couldn't stop eating his wife's...

What does that have to do with sticking bread up her pussy and eating it. I have seen the Japanese dinning thing, this isn't it.
They eat food around her, on her and even have a replica of her filled with the cuisine and eat it, but pussy isn't a dipping sauce.

Joe, are you sure you want that bread thing in the story? I almost stopped reading the story, bit grossed out.

Joe, now that's the part I was waiting for. I was disappointed last chapter because you lead up to the moment and left us hanging. This part was perfect, the pigtails blowjob, the humiliation, putting her in her place. Her mindset, still thinking she is in charge and the realization that she is not....

Wow, I don't know how you are going wrap this all up in just two more chapters, I have more questions than ever. Glad to see Frankie finally got laid and enjoyed it, even to a fat slime of a asshole. Maybe the brainwashing is getting to her, making her think like a slave slut. This is the Universe w...

Your next character, could be in a warmer place? Or at least in the warmest season? Part of the humiliation is being out in public naked, it's a little hard for that to happen in sub zero weather conditions.

What's happening with Marie?

When's the party?