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"Eventually, these two came to an agreement, and this woman somehow haggled me down to 20,000 dollars and a bunch of free extras that were added on to sweeten the deal." So... $20K in debt is worth a lifetime of slavery? Dang bro, that's cruel. Even a high school dropout can pay that off i...

Excellent segment. I really liked it.

Got it. So how is it different when Boss Robins pulls a slave from inventory to use her for sexual services? Was it because the two guards were doing it after hours when the inventory was supposed to be sleeping?

It's supposed to be a reference to her being a product now. like she's inside of a shopping bag Also I was talking about the rape scene I stupidly put in there. There had to be a better way to write that than to go that dark. Got it. Her vagina is now a commodity to be sold. The "rape" sc...

Thank you for not giving me any guff over the "scene" before it. I'm still trying to find some other way for her to meet Mistress Robins, but I haven't been able to come up with a replacement abuse No idea what you are talking about. I assume it will be revealed in due time. Did you notic...

Dani: “What I couldn’t tolerate was some of the hornier guys putting their dick through said holes like it was a fucking glory hole.” – I had considered putting a similar scene into Gabby and Bethany’s story, but decided against it. For example, I think it would have been entirely within the scene a...

Dani: “Then a few days before our transport day I got to listen to Mistress Robins talk on the phone excitedly about how happy she was to get product moving again. I doubt she even knew I was paying attention to her conversation while I was massaging her” – I like this part. It portrays something th...

Dani: “… in a place like this learning how to turn soy milk cartons into a cup and making slave loaf into “oatmeal” kept half of these women from falling into complete despair.” – I really like this detail. It strongly humanizes your characters and shows them adapting and overcoming their circumstan...

Dani - More comments from the peanut gallery! :D “The only odd thing in there that made it unlike any other office I’ve seen was the small standing cage in the corner that I was told to enter and was locked into.” – I like this detail. Very creative. I can just see her there with her fingers on the ...

"In less than a day I was transformed from a free girl with a full scholarship to a good school and a bright future, into a scared slave girl crying herself to sleep while the cum was still leaking out of her."

Wow, ow. Way to hit hard at the end of the chapter. Well done.

Dani: Thank you for your kind words on my story. My writing is unproductive at the moment due to the fact that certain home-life difficulties have made creative writing difficult. Nevertheless, I soldier on. Gabriela’s story will continue. I have gathered a few comments on your story below. None of ...

I hope you enjoy them, Jim. That's why I write, to entertain my friends. Any commentary is welcome. I need to know what I'm doing right and what I am doing wrong in order to do my best.

Thanks Jim! All feedback is appreciated. I'm glad you liked it. This story isn't abandoned. I just haven't been able to write recently due to some home life issues, but I hope to be back in the saddle soon. There are two more chapters planned out. It will be fun to write. I hope you find it just as ...

The fun part about stories like this is that there are so many branches in the story tree to explore. What the auction does to Bethany is one possibility, but so is her effect on Master Do or his son. Does she bring him out of his shell? Tone down his wildness? Make his father look at him different...

I am really glad you decided to continue with this tale. As usual, you did a wonderful job of storytelling. I look forward to reading the rest of the story. Thanks for the upvote Bob, everyone likes feeling appreciated. I was worried that the generally dark tone and lack of explicit sex would put r...

"Hey.... How was dinner?"

Like she doesn't know.

"Next up, Madison tries to make it out of town."

Honestly, I hope she makes it. I really do. I hope the happily-ever-after ending is the two of them escape and become lovers.

I love the way you keep the tension going. Maybe "Madison, Girl Detective" will actually pull this one off!

"She didn't bother with a parking spot, she just lined it up next to the curb."

Heh. Heh-heh. Hehe-heh-heh...

Gee, I hope that doesn't become a problem.

"It was time for Maddie Rogers, Girl Detective, to take a crack at this case and find her friend." She can DO it! Everything will be fine ! I have confidence ! "Then she got a large zucchini out of her refrigerator and ensured she would get a good night's rest." Muhahha! So much ...

"Elizabeth was found guilty of speeding, disobeying a police officer, and having a smart mouth." Lol. I agree, "having a smart mouth" needs to be a crime. You were all thinking that, I'm just the one that said it. Johnny, I love the hypno twist to the plot. Very clever. And I lik...

Johnny, loving the set up here. It makes me want to read more. I'm grinning right now because my imagination is running wild... it a very naughty direction. It's perfect.

As originally conceived, "Gabriela 02" started with Gabriela and Bethany being pulled from their crate on the loading dock at White Brier Finishing School. I have that scene fully written, and it should take place at the end of Chapter 03. But then I took a break from this story to work on...

-=-=-=-=-=-=-=- The Slutbus -=-=-=-=-=-=-=- After the trip to the clinic, the girls were given enemas, washed (hosed down, really), and then to their surprise, diapered. “The Slutbus doesn’t stop,” they were told, “that means it’s not stopping for you to piss. You have two drivers and 32 slaves on t...

As always: Kudos and gratitude to Joe Doe for inventing this universe. Also, many thanks to Carl Bradford, Mr. Smith, Eroticstoryspinner, and Avicia for their edits, comments, and encouragement. Trigger Warning: Almost no actual sex in this segment of our tale. We're following Gabriela and Bethany a...