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I just circled back and read this again - I love the interaction between Gwen and Sparrow and Avicia's lovely French accent - thank you! True story, really happened: When I was working on my masters degree, one of our classmates was an international exchange student from France. One day, while a gr...

I love it when you guys go off the rails and start throwing new ideas at one another. It makes this forum so much fun. Just so you guys know, this is what sent Carl down this path in the first place. During a discussion on something else, I shared this news clip and comment: "Google "His E...

What a wonderful pony story. Love NAACP analogy. Can't wait for the next segments and the training regime Charlotte must follow. Again, great story keep up the excellent work. Thanks for the response, Belinda. Your support means a lot to me. The first story I wrote was "Stallion - Arrival"...

openmouth-tongueflat wrote: ↑Thu Sep 08, 2022 3:48 am I am again impressed by how you play with every part of this world and its implications. You build a great sandbox!

Joe Doe built the sandbox, I'm just playing in it! Thanks, Joe!

Good question. There ARE human pony ranches like that. The HH Ranch isn't one of them. The ponies have their speech turned off while they are in pony mode, which is usually 6-8 hours per day. The rest of the time, they are able to talk. Mistress Harriette's business plan requires a continuous supply...

Thanks, Avicia! No plans to enslave Cassie. I'm thinking of developing her into a recurring character, but on the free side. One of the last things I had Boss Monica say to her in Part 2 was that Monica thought that Cassie had the right stuff - she empathized with the slave girl but was still willin...

-=-=-=-=-=-=- Charlotte – Arrival, Part 02 -=-=-=-=-=-=- -=-=-=-=-=-=- Bert -=-=-=-=-=-=- Once the lotioning was finished, Monica took up the slave's leash again and began leading her out of the hygiene corral. Cassie began to follow and immediately noticed that they had attracted an audience. The s...

Author's Notes: 1 - Edited by Avicia, Carl Bradford, and Mr. Smith. Their support has been invaluable and without it, this would not have been possible. 2 - Appreciation to Joe Doe, for inventing this sandbox that we are playing in. -=-=-=-=-=-=- Charlotte – Arrival, Part 01 -=-=-=-=-=-=- Cassie pul...

Interesting. I see this story going lots of interesting places. I like it. It has potential. I think I only have one named character who is transgender at the moment. In my vision of the legal slavery universe, pharmaceutical science has accelerated rapidly due to the sudden availability of human ch...

Bob, thanks for the kind words. I wrote this story because I'm working on the next segment of "Seduction of Tamsin" and Mistress Bellefleur is coaching Gwen and Tamsin in "Dual Slave Yoga", which is a version of slave yoga block moves to be used by women who are being sold as a m...

I know, Jeep, it's still in outline format. I've only just started writing again after a 6-month hiatus. Hoping to get back to that one soon. - Zee

I’m not into forced incest with slaves so I find making the sisters go down on each other a bit icky? I seem to recall there being a bodyguard. Was he a local hire, or is he traveling back with them? If so, you have an available penis without having to introduce a new character that you need to dev...

I lay on my bed, unable to fall asleep. I couldn’t stop my terrified mind from imagining all the dire things my owner could do to me over the next three years. One of the things I love so much about this genre is that the stakes are so high. In some legal slavery story-verses, it's literally life o...

I really enjoy how the Bellefleurs are stern, but benevolent slavers, with their charges coming out of slavery in better shape than they went in. I am looking forward to the rest of the story. Thanks, Bob! I wasn't sure how that aspect of my vision would be received. Callous and uncaring slavery ca...

Very nicely done, and a nice expansion on The Big D lore!! :-) Thank you, sir! I was hoping you'd like it. I was a bit worried about using your intellectual property, but Carl and Smith kept me straight, so I did it right. I can't thank them enough for all the help they've given me. I was originall...

Dang, Avvy, you nailed that last scene. That was incredible!

I'm SO looking forward to Deniela's enslavement. How do you plan to ship the two sisters to Massachusetts?

Thanks, Carl. I posted this only 10 days after I first started clickety-clacking on it at the keyboard in a fit of madness. Without the support from you, Avicia, and Smith, it never would have happened. I'm grateful for that and very happy to be writing again. Zee! PS - I hope you had a great vacati...

-=-=-=-=-=-=- Fire and Pain -=-=-=-=-=-=- Gabriela's reminiscing was cut short by a hand on her back. Slacks and a pair of men's dress shoes walked into her limited range of vision. She knew those shoes very well. When he first hired her as an intern last summer, Mr. Bellefleur had given her a cloth...

-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=- Gabriela’s Enslavement -=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=- Author's note: I originally had no intention of writing this story. I had planned to keep it as a backstory, only revealed it brief discussions during someone else’s story. Gabriela is a recurring character in my "Stallion" stories...

-=-=-=-=-=-=-=- Naughty Girls Get Spanks -=-=-=-=-=-=-=- After sending Gwen off to her room with her bed-slave, Harriette guided her own sweet little morsel toward the master bedroom. The girl went willingly, even leaning into her as they padded down the hall barefoot with Harriette's hand on her lo...

-=-=-=-=-=-=-=- Bachelorette Party Part Five -=-=-=-=-=-=-=- Author's note: Parts 1 and 2 were almost entirely debauchery. Part 3 was mainly plot, with a bit of debauchery thrown in. Part 4 was mainly plot, with plenty of humiliation and a gratuitous spanking. Plus, a cute chirping noise. I haven’t ...

the girls start eating each other - and not in the fun way! Nice. A total ripoff of the real world "Miracle of the Andes". Nevertheless, it's such a powerful story that there are so many ways to tell it. Not a criticism: I applaud your effort! I have "ripped from the headlines" ...

"Stimulating the reader's imagination is a key element in storytelling. It gets people engaged because they create a picture in their own head - one that is tailored to their own fantasy. For example, if I were to describe a woman simply as "slim, long-haired and pretty", anyone readi...

RE: Action vs. Plot Steve: Honestly, you left me hoping for more. Which is exactly what a good writer does to their readers. Seriously, you need sufficient plot in order to make the action engaging and exciting. And sufficient action to make the plot worth reading. I really think you hit the right b...

"Erica smiled grimly as she pulled her uniform back on. It was going to be an interesting few months… but she was sure she could make it." I really like this aspect of your story-telling. You always ensure that your characters retain their agency. They may be in a difficult circumstance wi...