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Another wonderful piece to the story. As I have told you i so love the small pieces with lower time increments in between. You are an amazing author dear.

Another wonderful segment dear. I love the fact that you write smaller segments in quicker time span. That way I feel the story is more in my mind without rereading. Much more timely. This is a wonderfully insightful segment. Your skill and understanding shine through. Love it.

Mikey,
Thank you so much for responding to my comment. As authors desire feedback so do commenters such as me. You don't know how much it means that we are appreciated.

Belinda

What a marvelous chapter. You sure know ho to build the drama. Poor Chrystal's future and destiny to be determined. Just a fabulous piece of work.

I really loved your first version of the party. However the embellishments you included in the revised version made a totally new story. Her forced strip tease and slave heat it created in her was so delicious. Dr. Ranger's chemical brand still quite visible for all to see adds to the feeling she wi...

Carl, What a wonderfully romantic ending (at least romantic in our world here). Her willingness to give up everything to be his slave shows her true love for him. His response is of marriage and a fino contract also show his love. What a happily ever after story dear. Just sensational. On a literary...

Gary, just reread this story. Never thought I liked this story because of the Mr. Edwards character. Upon rereading it is the fact although a smelly, small endowed, an despicable character Clair is able to get in the the slave mindset and actually love the slave life. Also the slave pleasure concept...

Carl, what a wonderful continuation. Her submissive qualities are so enhanced in role as a service animal. Her designation as a bitch is so exciting to me and stokes my submissive instincts. Just a wonderful piece of work.

Just a wonderful romance story. I love happily ever ending stories. Just love your work.

To a person of a submissive mindset such as I am. This is the ultimate romance story. So well written and formulated. Two lovely highly intelligent people indulging in a passionate relationship of the Dom- Submissive ilk. Lok forward to the continuation. Love the inclusion of Dr. Sheldon.

So love this story and an older woman who's desires linger years later. You did a marvelous job in expressing her feelings and desires for humiliation and exhibitionism. Keep up the marvelous work.

What a wonderful pony story. Love NAACP analogy. Can't wait for the next segments and the training regime Charlotte must follow. Again, great story keep up the excellent work.

What a wonderful "live happily ever after" story. I am a sucker for this type of romantic ending. It pulled at my heart strings. Such an emotional loving story for two women with strong submissive feelings. Their slave training years grooming them as wives to two dominant men. The slave pe...

Avicia,

Read this story and your others on Literotica. This one I feel is one of your best. Your talent is amazing and I really enjoy your work. Erin's story hits close to home forme and my fantasy world. Thank you so much for including this fine piece of work here.

Warmest regards,

Belinda

Carl, Thank you for incorporating all of the known dehumanizing methods of enslavement available in stories on this site. This is an amazing piece of work. As an older now retired professional woman(accountant) this story so hits home. This has always been fantasy for me. However being able to post ...

Your writing skills are amazing. You have created a true gift for us older gals with lifelong feelings of true slavery. A fantasy come true so to speak. Thank you so much kind sir.

So awesome. This particular part had a true emotional impact on me. At 69 I should not be affected this way. Your words made me feel young again.

Steve,

What a wonderful story. You have a true gift as an author. Can't wait for your next installment dear.

Belinda

Gary There is a movie out there by Marc Dorcell Claire: desires of submission A very classy movie. It fits so well with your story line of consentual slavery and you stories of Claire. I think you and your followers will like it. https://www.xvideos.com/video61995029/claire_desires_of_submission_-_d...

Avicia, Love this chapter so much. The little added things are amazing dear. I looked up the Orvis shampoo ad and it also had other items such as a harness. Ooooo so nice. Don't worry about fast sex the way you are writing this is so erotic. This is a work of art as far as I am concern. Your level o...

Such a beautiful love story. All end up winners.

Tremendous story. Mother in law hopefully becomes involved personally. You have made her such an exquisitely devious character.

Gary I know this is asking a lot but maybe you could write a revised chapter here and ex expand on Claires final enslavement.

Gary You create the most wonderful slave appliances. In this story the fancy collar masquerading as a piece of fine jewelry, then the remote controlled vibrating anal dildo and also the acid branding device. these add so much to the story. Your creative juices were really flowing this time. Keep up ...

Just found this wonderful story. It is exquisite like all of your work. Makes the slave girl in me blush.