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- Tue Sep 21, 2021 9:13 pm
- Forum: General Humiliation
- Topic: Random story idea: tricking free girls into slavery
- Replies: 23
- Views: 10964
Re: Random story idea: tricking free girls into slavery
Actually The Players of Gor is a series of 20-something different novels each featuring somewhat different plots. I probably realize you might not know the answer to the obvious question I am going to ask but I'll ask anyway - you wouldn't happen to remember the book number or the subtitle of the bo...
- Thu Sep 16, 2021 9:16 pm
- Forum: General Humiliation
- Topic: Random story idea: tricking free girls into slavery
- Replies: 23
- Views: 10964
Re: Random story idea: tricking free girls into slavery
I believe the story you are referring to, Jeepster, might be "Tracey Prime" which Joe cowrote with Katie Smith many moons ago. It is a CLASSIC to be sure and in my humble opinion a must have for any collector. Survivor's idea differs in that it features three girls each approached separate...
- Thu Sep 02, 2021 9:09 am
- Forum: Member Stories
- Topic: Pixies Insight Part 3
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1658
Re: Pixies Insight Part 3
Understood, and it makes sense . . . but I too agree with Jeepster; it is still confusing - especially if time elapses between reading new chapters. I'm not sure that you gain all that much but changing between name and number for the sake of perspective anyway but that is just my observation. In a ...
- Tue Aug 31, 2021 9:36 am
- Forum: Welcome/Introductions
- Topic: stories by Olga Anastasia
- Replies: 4
- Views: 2632
Re: stories by Olga Anastasia
Thanks for sharing this little tidbit. I for one would love a link to the site for Olga Anastasia (or at the very least the name of the site or story forum.) Any chance you could post a link?
- Mon Aug 30, 2021 8:59 am
- Forum: Member Stories
- Topic: Pixies Insight Part 2
- Replies: 9
- Views: 2375
Re: Pixies Insight Part 2
Um . . . did the author DELETE part 2? The part 2 of the story I saved Saturday seems to be missing.
- Wed Aug 25, 2021 9:27 am
- Forum: Member Stories
- Topic: Pixies Insight Part 1
- Replies: 11
- Views: 3632
Re: Pixies Insight Part 1
Remarkable "first" story. I loved the slow build-up and the innocent nature of Gwyneth and her reactions to her surroundings. Her self-discovery could be very interesting. I do hope you continue and I eagerly await Part 2.
Hooked6
Hooked6
- Thu Aug 19, 2021 10:46 pm
- Forum: Stories by Hooked6
- Topic: Tracey's Halloween Slave Costume - Part 2
- Replies: 10
- Views: 6822
Re: Tracey's Halloween Slave Costume - Part 2
yes I will be finishing all these stories as well as posting a few new stories. Sorry for the delay. Thanks for the kind words.
Hooked6
Hooked6
- Wed Aug 18, 2021 8:23 am
- Forum: General Humiliation
- Topic: Story challenge: Interview at a Slave Centre
- Replies: 7
- Views: 3747
Re: Story challenge: Interview at a Slave Centre
This is pretty good writing, you should keep it up. I'm new to these "Tracy stories", but they're kinda fun. You may wish to check the author and originator of the Tracey Smith character, Katie Smith. Her website can be found here: https://www.patreon.com/user/posts?u=43008905 It is a sit...
- Sat Aug 14, 2021 9:51 am
- Forum: Member Stories
- Topic: Story fragments
- Replies: 9
- Views: 2299
- Thu Jul 29, 2021 3:30 pm
- Forum: Stories by Joe Doe
- Topic: Sandy Foot Girl, Part 6A ON BRAND
- Replies: 9
- Views: 1903
Re: Sandy Foot Girl, Part 6A ON BRAND
I am THRILLED that you picked up this story again. It is one of my favorites (along with all your other stories. )
Hooked6
Hooked6
- Mon Jul 26, 2021 3:04 pm
- Forum: Stories by Carl Bradford
- Topic: Breeding the Pony Girl, Pt. 09
- Replies: 7
- Views: 1416
Re: Breeding the Pony Girl, Pt. 09
The idea of a Slave Petting Zoo as mentioned in this chapter reminded me of these photos of an alternative version of a slave petting zoo that might be of interest to some of you. https://imgur.com/a/uZoWWQb https://imgur.com/a/V8I3hRk https://imgur.com/a/nEj0oDe https://imgur.com/a/aPFENpb https://...
- Thu Jul 22, 2021 11:22 am
- Forum: Stories by Carl Bradford
- Topic: Breeding the Pony Girl, Pt. 08
- Replies: 2
- Views: 969
Re: Breeding the Pony Girl, Pt. 08
Really well-written and most enjoyable chapter. The really intriguing re-design of the now required blinders by the great state of Texas was clever in its conception. You had teased us, Carl, in a previous post, that something new was coming in the way of pony head gear and I am happy to say that yo...
- Wed Jul 21, 2021 5:21 pm
- Forum: Stories by Joe Doe
- Topic: Saul's Revenge
- Replies: 9
- Views: 2730
Re: Saul's Revenge
this story is so credible. I mean only an accountant could think this stuff up and weave it into an enjoyable short story. Well only an accountant or a brilliant creative writer like Joe Doe.
Hooked6
Hooked6
- Mon Jul 19, 2021 8:58 am
- Forum: Stories by Joe Doe
- Topic: The Rest Safety Area by Joe Doe
- Replies: 8
- Views: 2497
Re: The Rest Safety Area by Joe Doe
Another example of why you are a master wordsmith in creating erotic stories. Withdrawing her hand, Lopez smelled her finger. “It’s slave oil, all right,” she agreed. “But it came out of her snatch, not the bottle.” I blushed. “You can call me Sam, sweet stuff, seeing as how my fingers are gonna-be-...
- Fri Jul 16, 2021 2:26 pm
- Forum: Stories by Carl Bradford
- Topic: Breeding the Pony Girl, Pt. 07
- Replies: 13
- Views: 2229
Re: Breeding the Pony Girl, Pt. 07
LOL, thanks for the compliment. Actually, I wasn't really nitpicking. I was just genuinely confused - my natural state it seems.
Hooked6
- Fri Jul 16, 2021 8:57 am
- Forum: Stories by Carl Bradford
- Topic: Breeding the Pony Girl, Pt. 07
- Replies: 13
- Views: 2229
Re: Breeding the Pony Girl, Pt. 07
I LOVE the description (design) of the Spinning Wheel Ranch. Marvelous stuff! Chapter 7 is a great addition to the story as well. I am confused a bit but your interchangeable use of the terms "Blinkers" and "Blinders" - often in the same scene. Although they accomplish the same t...
- Thu Jul 08, 2021 8:53 am
- Forum: Stories by Gary
- Topic: Gary's Stories Overview
- Replies: 57
- Views: 17054
Re: Gary's Stories Overview
So came up with a solution with the new third chapter of my Heartland story. The supernatural part of the chapter will become a "What if?" story and the rest will become the new third chapter. The new chapter has another visit to HCI for slave yoga and a mistaken visit from a van from HCI...
- Fri Jul 02, 2021 3:52 pm
- Forum: Stories by Gary
- Topic: "A What If?" Heartland Story
- Replies: 7
- Views: 3798
Re: "A What If?" Heartland Story
I agree. Gary definitely has a way with words which allows us to get inside the head of the protagonist and that really makes the story a whole lot more interesting than when an author just writes the storyline with a lot of tangential details without humanizing his characters.
Hooked6
Hooked6
- Tue Jun 29, 2021 1:13 pm
- Forum: Stories by Carl Bradford
- Topic: Breeding the Pony Girl, Pt. 03
- Replies: 8
- Views: 1652
Re: Breeding the Pony Girl, Pt. 03
And that, my esteemed friend, is what makes your stories so much fun to read.Carl Bradford wrote: ↑Tue Jun 29, 2021 10:52 am It's a fun plot device because it requires both real slaves and wannabees to embarrass themselves by appearing to offer their bodies to any free adult;
- Tue Jun 29, 2021 10:30 am
- Forum: Stories by Carl Bradford
- Topic: Breeding the Pony Girl, Pt. 03
- Replies: 8
- Views: 1652
Re: Breeding the Pony Girl, Pt. 03
A subtle difference I agree between a Mantra or an affirmation and what Gary called Slave Hawking. Using the New Oxford dictionary as well as other sources, a Mantra is a word or statement that is repeated over and over to aid in meditation to change a negative view of a situation into a positive on...
- Mon Jun 28, 2021 8:41 pm
- Forum: Stories by Carl Bradford
- Topic: Breeding the Pony Girl, Pt. 03
- Replies: 8
- Views: 1652
Re: Breeding the Pony Girl, Pt. 03
Excellent. Only quibble I have is referring to the slave's calling out their availability as Slave Mantra's is a mistake as various authors have used them as Affirmations. Different word: Slave Hawking? Slave Invitations? Slave Enticement? Slave Lure? I too also thought that the use of Slave Mantra...
- Fri Jun 18, 2021 3:11 pm
- Forum: Stories by Joe Doe
- Topic: Any Chance Auction, Chapter 16B, by Joe Doe
- Replies: 12
- Views: 3569
Re: Any Chance Auction, Chapter 16B, by Joe Doe
For my story I was looking for something that was more demeaning than leading the ponygirl/boy by the bridle for the breeding scene. There are some creative minds on here and was open for suggestions. Okay, if you are looking for a cringe-worthy visual, how about instead of a twitch you use a force...
- Thu Jun 17, 2021 8:37 pm
- Forum: Stories by Joe Doe
- Topic: Any Chance Auction, Chapter 16B, by Joe Doe
- Replies: 12
- Views: 3569
Re: Any Chance Auction, Chapter 16B, by Joe Doe
I would like to know if Joe or anyone else has ever considered using a horse twitch in a story? Carl and I have been discussing the use of this instrument or something similar in stories we are working on. It just has such a brutally demeaning quality to it. Actually a horse twitch is just a distra...
- Thu Jun 17, 2021 10:33 am
- Forum: Stories by Joe Doe
- Topic: Any Chance Auction, Chapter 16B, by Joe Doe
- Replies: 12
- Views: 3569
Re: Any Chance Auction, Chapter 16B, by Joe Doe
“She looks pretty excited,” Hillary noted. “Can we make her hump the brand?” Hillary turned the branding iron around, and put the old time wooden handle between my legs. Then she began to rub it against my hot, wet pussy. Like the Pleasure Slut they thought I was, I responded, pushing back against ...
- Tue Jun 08, 2021 2:11 pm
- Forum: Stories by Joe Doe
- Topic: Any Chance Auction - Chapter 16A by Joe Doe
- Replies: 13
- Views: 3299
Re: Any Chance Auction - Chapter 16A by Joe Doe
Thank you, THANK YOU , THANK YOU for continuing this marvelous story picking up from where you left off at Chapter 15 before your “Post Script” postings. You answered so many questions that were left hanging in the air before and provided so much rich and arousing detail that otherwise would have be...