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by Hooked6
Tue Sep 21, 2021 9:13 pm
Forum: General Humiliation
Topic: Random story idea: tricking free girls into slavery
Replies: 23
Views: 10964

Re: Random story idea: tricking free girls into slavery

Actually The Players of Gor is a series of 20-something different novels each featuring somewhat different plots. I probably realize you might not know the answer to the obvious question I am going to ask but I'll ask anyway - you wouldn't happen to remember the book number or the subtitle of the bo...
by Hooked6
Thu Sep 16, 2021 9:16 pm
Forum: General Humiliation
Topic: Random story idea: tricking free girls into slavery
Replies: 23
Views: 10964

Re: Random story idea: tricking free girls into slavery

I believe the story you are referring to, Jeepster, might be "Tracey Prime" which Joe cowrote with Katie Smith many moons ago. It is a CLASSIC to be sure and in my humble opinion a must have for any collector. Survivor's idea differs in that it features three girls each approached separate...
by Hooked6
Thu Sep 02, 2021 9:09 am
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: Pixies Insight Part 3
Replies: 3
Views: 1658

Re: Pixies Insight Part 3

Understood, and it makes sense . . . but I too agree with Jeepster; it is still confusing - especially if time elapses between reading new chapters. I'm not sure that you gain all that much but changing between name and number for the sake of perspective anyway but that is just my observation. In a ...
by Hooked6
Tue Aug 31, 2021 9:36 am
Forum: Welcome/Introductions
Topic: stories by Olga Anastasia
Replies: 4
Views: 2632

Re: stories by Olga Anastasia

Thanks for sharing this little tidbit. I for one would love a link to the site for Olga Anastasia (or at the very least the name of the site or story forum.) Any chance you could post a link?
by Hooked6
Mon Aug 30, 2021 8:59 am
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: Pixies Insight Part 2
Replies: 9
Views: 2375

Re: Pixies Insight Part 2

Um . . . did the author DELETE part 2? The part 2 of the story I saved Saturday seems to be missing.
by Hooked6
Wed Aug 25, 2021 9:27 am
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: Pixies Insight Part 1
Replies: 11
Views: 3632

Re: Pixies Insight Part 1

Remarkable "first" story. I loved the slow build-up and the innocent nature of Gwyneth and her reactions to her surroundings. Her self-discovery could be very interesting. I do hope you continue and I eagerly await Part 2.

Hooked6
by Hooked6
Thu Aug 19, 2021 10:46 pm
Forum: Stories by Hooked6
Topic: Tracey's Halloween Slave Costume - Part 2
Replies: 10
Views: 6822

Re: Tracey's Halloween Slave Costume - Part 2

yes I will be finishing all these stories as well as posting a few new stories. Sorry for the delay. Thanks for the kind words.

Hooked6
by Hooked6
Wed Aug 18, 2021 8:23 am
Forum: General Humiliation
Topic: Story challenge: Interview at a Slave Centre
Replies: 7
Views: 3747

Re: Story challenge: Interview at a Slave Centre

This is pretty good writing, you should keep it up. I'm new to these "Tracy stories", but they're kinda fun. You may wish to check the author and originator of the Tracey Smith character, Katie Smith. Her website can be found here: https://www.patreon.com/user/posts?u=43008905 It is a sit...
by Hooked6
Sat Aug 14, 2021 9:51 am
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: Story fragments
Replies: 9
Views: 2299

Re: Story fragments

Mr. Smith wrote: Fri Aug 13, 2021 1:41 pm Virginia as a blue state would tax the entire value of the transaction including the trade in thus collecting $1,800 in taxes.
Hilarious but sadly, true.

Hooked6
by Hooked6
Thu Jul 29, 2021 3:30 pm
Forum: Stories by Joe Doe
Topic: Sandy Foot Girl, Part 6A ON BRAND
Replies: 9
Views: 1903

Re: Sandy Foot Girl, Part 6A ON BRAND

I am THRILLED that you picked up this story again. It is one of my favorites (along with all your other stories. :D )

Hooked6
by Hooked6
Mon Jul 26, 2021 3:04 pm
Forum: Stories by Carl Bradford
Topic: Breeding the Pony Girl, Pt. 09
Replies: 7
Views: 1416

Re: Breeding the Pony Girl, Pt. 09

The idea of a Slave Petting Zoo as mentioned in this chapter reminded me of these photos of an alternative version of a slave petting zoo that might be of interest to some of you. https://imgur.com/a/uZoWWQb https://imgur.com/a/V8I3hRk https://imgur.com/a/nEj0oDe https://imgur.com/a/aPFENpb https://...
by Hooked6
Thu Jul 22, 2021 11:22 am
Forum: Stories by Carl Bradford
Topic: Breeding the Pony Girl, Pt. 08
Replies: 2
Views: 969

Re: Breeding the Pony Girl, Pt. 08

Really well-written and most enjoyable chapter. The really intriguing re-design of the now required blinders by the great state of Texas was clever in its conception. You had teased us, Carl, in a previous post, that something new was coming in the way of pony head gear and I am happy to say that yo...
by Hooked6
Wed Jul 21, 2021 5:21 pm
Forum: Stories by Joe Doe
Topic: Saul's Revenge
Replies: 9
Views: 2730

Re: Saul's Revenge

this story is so credible. I mean only an accountant could think this stuff up and weave it into an enjoyable short story. Well only an accountant or a brilliant creative writer like Joe Doe.

Hooked6
by Hooked6
Mon Jul 19, 2021 8:58 am
Forum: Stories by Joe Doe
Topic: The Rest Safety Area by Joe Doe
Replies: 8
Views: 2497

Re: The Rest Safety Area by Joe Doe

Another example of why you are a master wordsmith in creating erotic stories. Withdrawing her hand, Lopez smelled her finger. “It’s slave oil, all right,” she agreed. “But it came out of her snatch, not the bottle.” I blushed. “You can call me Sam, sweet stuff, seeing as how my fingers are gonna-be-...
by Hooked6
Fri Jul 16, 2021 2:26 pm
Forum: Stories by Carl Bradford
Topic: Breeding the Pony Girl, Pt. 07
Replies: 13
Views: 2229

Re: Breeding the Pony Girl, Pt. 07

SteveBurke wrote: Fri Jul 16, 2021 11:27 am

^^^ That's some excellent nitpicking!
LOL, thanks for the compliment. Actually, I wasn't really nitpicking. I was just genuinely confused - my natural state it seems. :lol:

Hooked6
by Hooked6
Fri Jul 16, 2021 8:57 am
Forum: Stories by Carl Bradford
Topic: Breeding the Pony Girl, Pt. 07
Replies: 13
Views: 2229

Re: Breeding the Pony Girl, Pt. 07

I LOVE the description (design) of the Spinning Wheel Ranch. Marvelous stuff! Chapter 7 is a great addition to the story as well. I am confused a bit but your interchangeable use of the terms "Blinkers" and "Blinders" - often in the same scene. Although they accomplish the same t...
by Hooked6
Thu Jul 08, 2021 8:53 am
Forum: Stories by Gary
Topic: Gary's Stories Overview
Replies: 57
Views: 17054

Re: Gary's Stories Overview

So came up with a solution with the new third chapter of my Heartland story. The supernatural part of the chapter will become a "What if?" story and the rest will become the new third chapter. The new chapter has another visit to HCI for slave yoga and a mistaken visit from a van from HCI...
by Hooked6
Fri Jul 02, 2021 3:52 pm
Forum: Stories by Gary
Topic: "A What If?" Heartland Story
Replies: 7
Views: 3798

Re: "A What If?" Heartland Story

I agree. Gary definitely has a way with words which allows us to get inside the head of the protagonist and that really makes the story a whole lot more interesting than when an author just writes the storyline with a lot of tangential details without humanizing his characters.

Hooked6
by Hooked6
Tue Jun 29, 2021 1:13 pm
Forum: Stories by Carl Bradford
Topic: Breeding the Pony Girl, Pt. 03
Replies: 8
Views: 1652

Re: Breeding the Pony Girl, Pt. 03

Carl Bradford wrote: Tue Jun 29, 2021 10:52 am It's a fun plot device because it requires both real slaves and wannabees to embarrass themselves by appearing to offer their bodies to any free adult;
And that, my esteemed friend, is what makes your stories so much fun to read. :D
by Hooked6
Tue Jun 29, 2021 10:30 am
Forum: Stories by Carl Bradford
Topic: Breeding the Pony Girl, Pt. 03
Replies: 8
Views: 1652

Re: Breeding the Pony Girl, Pt. 03

A subtle difference I agree between a Mantra or an affirmation and what Gary called Slave Hawking. Using the New Oxford dictionary as well as other sources, a Mantra is a word or statement that is repeated over and over to aid in meditation to change a negative view of a situation into a positive on...
by Hooked6
Mon Jun 28, 2021 8:41 pm
Forum: Stories by Carl Bradford
Topic: Breeding the Pony Girl, Pt. 03
Replies: 8
Views: 1652

Re: Breeding the Pony Girl, Pt. 03

Excellent. Only quibble I have is referring to the slave's calling out their availability as Slave Mantra's is a mistake as various authors have used them as Affirmations. Different word: Slave Hawking? Slave Invitations? Slave Enticement? Slave Lure? I too also thought that the use of Slave Mantra...
by Hooked6
Fri Jun 18, 2021 3:11 pm
Forum: Stories by Joe Doe
Topic: Any Chance Auction, Chapter 16B, by Joe Doe
Replies: 12
Views: 3569

Re: Any Chance Auction, Chapter 16B, by Joe Doe

For my story I was looking for something that was more demeaning than leading the ponygirl/boy by the bridle for the breeding scene. There are some creative minds on here and was open for suggestions. Okay, if you are looking for a cringe-worthy visual, how about instead of a twitch you use a force...
by Hooked6
Thu Jun 17, 2021 8:37 pm
Forum: Stories by Joe Doe
Topic: Any Chance Auction, Chapter 16B, by Joe Doe
Replies: 12
Views: 3569

Re: Any Chance Auction, Chapter 16B, by Joe Doe

I would like to know if Joe or anyone else has ever considered using a horse twitch in a story? Carl and I have been discussing the use of this instrument or something similar in stories we are working on. It just has such a brutally demeaning quality to it. Actually a horse twitch is just a distra...
by Hooked6
Thu Jun 17, 2021 10:33 am
Forum: Stories by Joe Doe
Topic: Any Chance Auction, Chapter 16B, by Joe Doe
Replies: 12
Views: 3569

Re: Any Chance Auction, Chapter 16B, by Joe Doe

“She looks pretty excited,” Hillary noted. “Can we make her hump the brand?” Hillary turned the branding iron around, and put the old time wooden handle between my legs. Then she began to rub it against my hot, wet pussy. Like the Pleasure Slut they thought I was, I responded, pushing back against ...
by Hooked6
Tue Jun 08, 2021 2:11 pm
Forum: Stories by Joe Doe
Topic: Any Chance Auction - Chapter 16A by Joe Doe
Replies: 13
Views: 3299

Re: Any Chance Auction - Chapter 16A by Joe Doe

Thank you, THANK YOU , THANK YOU for continuing this marvelous story picking up from where you left off at Chapter 15 before your “Post Script” postings. You answered so many questions that were left hanging in the air before and provided so much rich and arousing detail that otherwise would have be...