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Gary raises a very interesting issue about use of slaves by non-owners. I'm certainly no expert, but for me, it goes something like this: In theory, the owner controls whatever the slave does, beyond showing respect for a free person. This would be particularly significant if the slave were, for exa...

Thanks for the shout out to the FINO personal services contract. To be absolutely fair, I believe that the great Gentleman Mariner introduced the term FINO, for which I thank him--as usual, he is far more creative than I. All I added--and the author of this story checked the details with me before h...

The post-auction graphic sodomy (anal and oral) does a good job of establishing the emotional link between these two women. Keep going!

Excellent plot development. I hope that, eventually, the character of Stefania will become clearer--here, she appears as a pure sadist, yet if I recall in Part 2B she was playing slave to the other trainer--is she a switch, or secretly submissive so she punishes the slaves because she wishes she wer...

Dear Joe: Thanks for your latest description of the famous Big D--as always, your imagination is as fertile as the slave girls you want to see bred (which leads my dirty mind back to where you left Anne, bound upside down with a load of swimmers to knock her up, unless Roscoe conveniently had a vase...

The previous commentator is much more creative than I. By all means, I hope that Rita will buy her with her own money (she does have a power of attorney, right?) and keep her enslaved for a while, including the branding and implants she threatened earlier. Meanwhile, though, if Roscoe got to screw h...

I, too, am impressed with Skeeter's way of maximizing her humiliation, parodying her expressed rejection of male lust for her. That scene epitomizes the conflict within Anne, the confident, independent career woman who longs to be treated like a helpless sex object. I know it would detract from the ...

This subjugation by Jared is some of your finest work. I'm sure you'll find some way to increase the time Frankie has to spend at his feet. As for Amy, I had the impression from previous comments that she is going to be increasingly assertive and judgemental, losing any deference she had for Frankie...

OK: Full disclosure: The author of this magnum opus and I have had extensive discussions about branding--we both agree, for example, that (as in everything else) Joe Doe is the absolute master of sadistic branding (inside the butt for Professor Sarah, while at least threatening to brand Aunt Annie a...

A great segment. I particularly like the idea that she was already a slave but didn't know it when she was processed and graded. Diabolical.

I'm very slow about electronics, but the kind people running this site finally explained (to my 19th century mind) how to get access to your story fragment. This is very well done as background to your forthcoming stories--keep it up.

Thank you for putting Skeeter in charge of his teasing aunt; I'm sure I'm not the only one hoping she draws the highest bidding, so she has to service him orally after the auction. It's great to see him come into his own, including openly auctioning his own (adoptive) aunt--another great reversal of...

I have seen plots where a person allows herself/himself to be auctioned for debts, for reprogramming, for psychological experience, to save a family member, and heaven knows what else--but you've come up with a new reason--bolstering your nephew's self-confidence! I realize that Anne is deluding her...

I have only just found your Went West series, and it's as finely tuned as your other writing. Thanks for letting us see your creative plotting and character development. You've told us that Frankie is in for a big surprise, which I'm sure is necessary for the plot and character, but she and the othe...

I'm running out of superlatives. Both parts of chapter 10 really crank up Anne's sense of her helplessness. Schadenfreude is the word of the month in politics (I understand dictionary searches of the word are up 30,000 %), but it also applies to this slavery-obsessed woman. Now that Skeeter has appe...

Dear Joe: Like your other commentators, I found episode 9 to be yet another superb contribution to the suspense. By now, you have presented us with such an array of punishments for Anne--from branding to the zapper to auction--that I can hardly contain my impatience and curiosity about the outcome. ...

I always enjoy your suspenseful stories, but this interaction between sisters and imagination is even better than usual. Some of your other women have been not only arrogant but unbelievably stupid in teasing and defying the men who will eventually dominate them. This time, Anne seems to be smart en...

Once again, the master of humiliation at the slave market had outdone himself. Superb, Joe--please keep it going!