StripSearch

The nice thing about this site is that you can easily make edits or rewrites. I did that with Allison's story when I wrote myself into a hole so to speak. I also appreciate getting feedback from authors that are better writers than myself. My question for this story is what future does Anna have. N...

Slavery topics...darkness..you know the drill ------------------------------------------------------------- When we arrived at Miss O’Connor’s home it was impressive, and kinda looked like a smaller version of the house from Home Alone. It’s red brick exterior was surrounded by a beautiful garden, d...

Miss O'Conner comes across as harsh, crude (too much profanity), driven with random acts of kindness towards her new slave. I am not used to seeing doctors using "fuck" in what feels like every other sentence. This is a dark story with hereditary slavery and what looks like a lifetime ens...

I'm also trying to give her a slightly softer side that you occasionally see. A good example of this is when she asks Anna for her side of the enslavement story, and immediately feels guilty enough to drive to one of the most dangerous neighborhoods in the city to let her see her mother one last tim...

Zee,
Honest question. What is the vibe that you are getting from Miss O'Connor so far? I didn't really have too much of a plan when writing her personality so I'm half winging it right now with her.

If you read the next part, I expand on how corrupt the system is somewhere in the middle. I'm not gonna spoil it if you haven't read it yet, but alot of what I write is inspired by shit that is currently going on in the US and around the world. In its own messed up way, in this universe slavery is t...

Slavery topics....you know the drill Not the most sex filled part, but a long one that ties a few loose ends. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- The next morning, I woke up to the alarm waking us all up. My back was sore from sleeping on t...

Slavery, Dark topics, you know the drill. Also please let me know if there are any plot holes I missed, I'm out of Adderall and it's getting harder to focus on finding little things. There's also a scene where she gets a shot, so if you hate needles it's in there toward the end. --------------------...

Thank you zee, I appreciate it

You know the drill..Slavery and dark topics. Please poke some holes in this chapter too. I probably need a rewrite and need someone to point out what I missed. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- The next...

I should’ve wrote that part better too to be honest but here’s some blanks filled in. Mistress Robins gets away with it because she’s allowed a personal assistant slave and she followed proper procedure in regard to inventory controls. Also she’s the boss of the whole women’s warehouse, so who’s gon...

------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ “I knew it wasn’t healt...

It's supposed to be a reference to her being a product now. like she's inside of a shopping bag

Also I was talking about the rape scene I stupidly put in there. There had to be a better way to write that than to go that dark.

------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ “… in a place like this...

Zee..thank you again for the feedback. It is greatly appreciated. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------...

Zee, Thank you for not giving me any guff over the "scene" before it. I'm still trying to find some other way for her to meet Mistress Robins, but I haven't been able to come up with a replacement abuse that won't also get dangerously close to breaking the rules. One question though. Did y...

Thank you for the feedback. I honestly like people poking holes in my writing because it helps me do better next time. I plan on fixing alot of these now that I see them though but here is some clarification in the meantime. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------...

I loved reading this, can't wait for more. I'm hoping my work gets to this level someday.

This one got dirty. Also same warning as before. Slavery topics Harder than normal content Chapter 6: On the Road & Arrival at Mercer The truck was finally on the road, and I was still mostly passed out in my allergy pill coma. Just how I wanted things to be for this trip. I couldn’t control whe...

You know the drill..slavery topics, harder than normal shit, a single paragraph of slight claustrophobia if that triggers you. Chapter 5: Transport Day At first, the day we were shipped out seemed like just another dreary day in the warehouse. We ate the same food, waited in the same line to use the...

I loved this man. Light hearted and fun to read before bed.

WARNING: Slavery Topics, Slightly harder than normal stories here. The next few weeks I spent in that warehouse were a blur, albeit a boring blur, as all of us in our slave pen seemed to get used to the idea that were were going to be another person’s property somewhere. Most of us, including myself...

It’s hard to write Anna because I want to write this young woman who just had her life as she knows it ended and being forced to cope with the fact that she’s considered property now. I’m Not the greatest at writing emotions like that unfortunately. At the same time Anna is supposed to be a chronic ...

Trigger Warning: my writing is a touch harder than other stories on here. You’ve been warned Also In retrospect I went a touch too far with the last part's ending. Luckily that was the only instance of r*** in this story out of like a dozen outlined parts I have written out. Sorry to anyone who didn...

A Slave’s Journal Entry 2: Day 1 Continued As we entered the warehouse the overseer leading our coffle reminded us to “keep our eyes on the ass in front of you, or else”. I had already witnessed and experienced what “or else” entailed so I gladly kept my gaze on that beautiful ebony ass walking in f...