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Absolutely superb. You have continued the suspense about her ultimate fate while also continuing her learning about slave mentality and slave duties.

As usual, our esteemed colleague Joe has summed it up. The lady has returned to the custody of Southwest Shipping, but what is her future? Is she really a permanent slave? If so, will she be sold to the trust fund lady, pimped out, kept in a cage for her lover/partner to play with, or perhaps even g...

It was always a likely possibility that Natalie would end up as a slave in the hands of Southwest Shipping, but this has been a wild ride en route. The author's description of the familiar slave grading, auction, and even branding is excellent, as usual.

As usual, I must agree with Ms. Belinda. The author has done a great job of depicting this woman as the ultimate over-achiever. Yes, she's fascinated by the powerless sex of slavery, which she is now experiencing up close and far too personal. Beyond that, however, the lady wanted to succeed as an i...

I must agree with Zee; I put in a little work on the second part of the 4-H story today, but I'm both motivated and distracted by this excellent series--a new standard. I'm glad to see that our heroine finally got used at the Big D--seemed like such a shame to have a magnificent and terrified adult ...

I particularly appreciate your ability to reproduce her thoughts and feelings while she's being sold, right down to comparing the dildo to the size of her owner/boyfriend's cock. Fantastic, as usual.

Possession is, indeed, 9/10 of the law, and the other 10th is Hutzpah. In theory, I think we've all agreed that the seller has to have a criminal conviction or a signed (by the slave) power of attorney assigning her/his rights to the seller. In reality, of course, it's difficult to argue when you're...

As usual, Joe's comments and insight into slave psychology are great; wish I could write like that off the cuff (or perhaps in this case on her cuffs?) The author of this series has clearly laid out [emphasis on laid] a plot, and I have tried to resist the urge to make unwanted suggestions. That sai...

I've reached the point in my own writing where I tend to rush through slave grading/processing for fear of boring the reader, but this is excellent. I also have to say that her boyfriend/partner is really astute about manipulating submissive female urges. I know he's a former slave wrangler/handler,...

Your suspense is excellent. I keep waiting for you to trigger the trap where she ends up as a naked slave girl, probably controlled by the rich wannabee investor. Now she's even provided evidence for her own enslavement, evidence that is hanging over her head, while she continues down the rabbit hol...

As usual, I must agree with Jeepster. Master Will is doing a superb job of playing on Natalie's curiosity and fascination with slavery to turn her into a slave at heart. I don't know what her legal status will be at the end of this, but he's spoiled her into longing for sexual subjugation. Excellent...

Our minds are all filled with possible ways in which the cute investor/submissive could be used & abused in a collar. That said, I have learned to resist the urge to make such suggestions in public, as they only confuse the readers as to what has actually happened in the story. Based on the rate...

Excellent fall from grace/power reversal. In reality, a smart woman such as her should have been prepared mentally to strip off in front of the guy, but I'm sure the thrill is greater if we assume that she DIDN'T see that coming/cumming. You are doing a superb job of habituating this free woman, bit...

Ms. Belinda is, as usual right on the money. You have both a great concept of plot and an ability to draw your reader into your condition-contrary-to-fact; the essence of good fiction. We're all waiting with baited breath and constricted privates for what happens next. Don't tell me--your money lady...

Thank you for such a marvelous job of showing how one woman gradually gives in to her fascination with slavery--well done, even if I feel sorry for all the females in this story. I must also thank you for an excellent explanation of the Texas slavery universe, and even a shout-out to FINO contracts....

I should have expected this outcome, but I guess, like so many other readers, I've come to assume nefarious plots at every turn. This is a neat story as is, but I suspect that I'm not the only reader who hopes that Natalie will explore involuntary servitude in some other way, either by a FINO contra...

A great conception, and (presumably) a new means of enslaving someone without any restrictions on overseas sale. Given the supposed excess supply of young women in the US, that might not be necessary, but this is still an excellent beginning. Please keep going.

Sorry, Jeepster--once again, "assume" makes an ass out of me! Badger Therese wrote, I think, 5 novels in this series, all available on Kindle--included in the cost of Kindle Unlimited. If you do look her up, beware that the first novel (Girl, Recreational) was published in many little segm...

As I suspect that Mr. Smith already knows, I borrowed the University Slave Kennels idea from Badger Therese's brilliant series about the genius nymphomanic slave girl Hannah, especially _Girl, Recreational II: Kenneled_--If you haven't read that series, I encourage you to do so--very sexy and credib...

(This story is set in a world where legalized, non-hereditary slavery is commonplace for serious crime, unredeemed debt, or voluntary self-indenture. All characters who are enslaved or have any intimate/sexual contact with slaves are 18 years of age or older. This is fiction; no one should ever be d...

Artful dancing while serving as a dot-matrix printer to mark a symbol on the miscreant's skin--great combination of images!

I feel honored that Joe took my suggestion and wrote a scene in which the fallen woman returns to her home for a weekend, only to be humiliated again. Of course, there could be endless fun at the brothel, where she gets to service all the grown-up guys whom she used to be Den Mother for, drive to so...

Another superb piece (pun intended). I presume that this interview provides Sarah Hollister with cover when she writes (in her academic rather than slut persona) about experiencing branding. Did this woman's husband use her self-approved brand as evidence that she really was a slave, or did he just ...

Joe described the Big D's insistence on branding the traditional way, "hickory smoked" and all. My impression is that Professor Sarah is responsible for much of this--when she was a business consultant, she emphasized the "Brand" name value of traditional enslavement procedures, ...

In my defense, I was proposing a wide brand that would be imprinted diagonally on a buttock. As always, I enjoy Joe's fine sense of how to humiliate a once-proud woman. For the rest of her life, Professor Sarah will always sit down "on Brand," and probably feel the ridges of that "D&q...