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Claire In Africa

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I had posted this in the Yahoo Group, but it got pushed aside due to all the discussion about the ending of Yahoo Groups
This story was written a couple of years ago and was the original followup to "Back Home Again". Its really only a First Draft so its needs work

It had been almost two years since her grading experience. Claire was giving the chance to visit West Africa with some friends. Their slavery was much more widespread and involved males as well. She had read that White women as slave were highly prized. A few women chose to go there for slavery, some were sent there for as punishment for more serious crimes. Few places had started using Slave Chips and were mostly limited to major stores for inventory control.
First, they went to Morocco enjoying the bazaars and seeing the sites. They huddled together while passing by a small slave market. They saw the naked slaves, all black, and had a mixture of fear, excitement and curiosity. There was a rush of people through the market and Claire became separated from the other girls. She called her friends that she would meet them at the hotel and then she wondered around trying to get back to the hotel but ended up walking in a circle, ending up back at the slave market. One of the slavers grabbed her arm and said “Ah such a fine slave you’d make, let me sell you”
“Please no I’m not here for that”
“Ah but you’d make such a fine slave your beauty should not be hidden”
“No thank you sir sorry” she was able to pull away. He followed her calling her a runaway slave. She became scared, even though no one would think her a runaway slave since she was dressed and didn’t have a collar on. She ran into a shop that didn’t seem to sell slaves but she soon realized that it did sell slave supplies such as whips and shackles and collars. She couldn’t help but look a them and then pick them up and handle them. The proprietor came up and looked her over. Claire was wearing free flowing clothing so as not to upset the local Muslim’s.
“I am Omar and this is my humble shop. These shackles are excellent to use for your slaves, or for yourself, the collars are only 800 Dirhams. Claire did some rough calculations, over $100 Canadian dollars.
“How much for the shackle’s”
“Ah much more expensive 1500 Dirhams, would you like to try them on” That was some $200
“No, I don’t think so, I’m just curious, besides I don’t have that much on me”
“Would you like a slave grading? Then I will sell you the set for 1000 Dirhams”
That was over $125 and more than she had with her “No I can’t afford that either” and she moved to leave the shop.
The owner blocked her way “I would be honored to grade you, please”
“Its OK I don’t need it”
“I insist, its dangerous out there and I will personally escort you to your hotel after”
Claire hesitated “How much?”
“Free, if you buy the collar and shackle set, you can pay me when you get back to the hotel” He then grabbed her arm and took her to the back room He told her to disrobe and she did quickly. He looked over her body and said “Wonderful you have such fine skin, your face is a beauty to behold” He laid her down on his grading table and disrobed “Of course we test our slave the old fashioned way” Oh god he’s going to fuck me she though to herself. First, he started juicing her and when he felt her get wet he mounted her. She was shocked by his size and winced in pain, while he thrusted hard and quickly. She thought to herself, this was just to fuck me. But she began to enjoy it as she got used to his large cock inside her, and along with her training it caused her to come quickly. “Ah you are a true slave, I wish I could take you to the auction block but I promised your safety on my honor.
“I will give you my highest grade, but I must get more opinions” He then took her to the front of his store and using the shackles and collar, locked her against the wall. He went out and returned with several other men. They all looked her over, speaking in Arabic so she couldn’t understand. The store owner said to her “These men are slave dealer, they know quality slave meat” The men fondled her breast and sex and rubbed her ass. She wasn’t sure if they were discussing her grade, or offering bids, or both. Then he said to her “The senior man wants your mouth so he can judge you better” Claire didn’t feel she had a choice, and released from the wall she knelt and pleasured him like she had been taught. He quickly came and the store owner said “You have shown great skill with your mouth, he says you should be on the block but I told him I could not do that” The men huddled together and then left.
He then told her “I will keep you naked and in shackles until we leave the market, for your safety” He attached a chain to her collar and let her out of the store. She walked through the market with her head bowed, so as to not look at those looking at her, of course this made he look even more like a slave. When they left the market area he undid her shackles but not her collar. “In case you don’t pay me” he laughed. she had to get dressed with people watching her but was able to hide the collar with a scarf and they walked to the hotel. When they arrived, she took him to her room and opened the safe to pay him. “Do you not want the chain for your collar?”
“No I think I have spent all the money I have now, I’ll have to go to the bank tomorrow to get more’
“Ah but you can pay me with you body”
“Are you talking sex, or something more?”
“I would prefer to keep you but having you in your hotel bed like a whore would be enough”
She decided to go through with it to just have it over with. She undressed and then helped him undress and then she was shocked to see how big his penis was, at least 8in, she couldn’t believe she had had that in her. He played with her breasts then demanded she turn around to use her ass. She quickly complied “By Allah you are so tight, I might keep you” she then kneeled and sucked his dirty cock. He then pulled her up and pushed her onto the bed. She used the Slave Pompoir (1) she had been taught. He came hard quivered as he orgasmed. “By Allah I cannot let you go”
“You promised on your honor” she said quietly and submissively
“You are right, but come to my store again and I will have you” He then finally unlocked her collar and left as he did he said “Bring your friends to let me grade them as well and maybe one of them I will take instead”
A few days later, looking at another market place, that they made sure didn’t have a slave section. They ran into her Grader again. “Ah what a pleasure it is to see you again my slave”
The other girls looked at her surprised “I just got graded by him while hiding from the slave dealers, he wanted to keep me”
“Ah, yes” he replied and come back to my store and I’ll have you to keep”
Claire smiled “That’s why we’re staying away from that area, no disrespect to you”
“None taken, but if you brought your pretty friends to me you’d walk free”
“I don’t think they want to be slaves either, and your grading procedure is much rougher then they would expect” But her friends looked like they were thinking it over
Carol asked “How much and will we go free again?”
“200 Dirham’s each and I promise your freedom if you wish it”
Against her better judgement her friends convinced her to go back to his place to be graded. Before they got to the market he said “Wait here”. They stood around nervously and when he came back he had brought a friend with a large bag and a slave coffle. “Put your clothes in here and I will bring you in like slave girls to heighten the experience” The girls took their clothes off.
“Did you want me to undress too?”
“It will help your friends if you join in” and Claire gave in. The girls then slowly walked through the slave market with people supposedly calling out offers on the girls. He made sure to stop by the auction block and stated “Sorry I need to do some business here before we go to the store” The girls got scared that he was going to sell them after all. The looked as saw several girls go on the block one after another and sold. The were excited and scared at the same time, wondering if they were next. Finally, Omar came back and brought them to the store.
He checked each girl over as he had done with Claire. She started to enjoy the girls discomfort. Omar told them “I cannot check you personally, I have brought assistants to do that for me while I observe.”
He then brought in four large black males. Each naked girl was laid on the grading table and entered by one of the “assistants”
Julie started to shiver and called out “No No not now!” and uncontrollably orgasmed.
Omar smiled “Ah your slave fire is great you should go to the block” Julie became scared
Then he came up to Claire, “Now it is your turn”
“You already did me, remember?”
“Ah but do you want to leave your friends upset with you for not participating?”
“I already did”
“Yes, but they didn’t witness it”
Her friends were looking at her and she gave in. She laid down and he again entered her. She refused to give him her slave pleasuring but he again came inside her.
He went over to Julie and said “Are you coming to the auction block slave?”
The other girls were shocked. But all Julie could do was nod her head. Her friends tried to talk her out of it but Omar was additament. All the girls were placed in the slave coffle and marched to the auction block. The cried as Julie was unlocked and brought put on the auction block. The watched he with her head bowed and the bid were shouted loud and quickly. Soon the auctioneer shouted loudly “Tama Albaye” (sold) and she was taken away. The girls wondered if they were next and even became wet at the thought. But Omar then brought them back to his store and unlocked them and their collars and shackles. He gave them back their clothes and said “I hope you can get back to your hotel”

“Can you help us get back?” asked Liz

“My promise is fulfilled you leave my store free” but then he said “But my ‘assistants will help you for a price”

“What price, well pay all we have with us”

“Oh, not money, your mouths” The girls sheepishly agreed and the men were brought back, each girl kneeled and sucked the men off. They then left taking Julie’s things with them, wondering how they would tell her parents.

After that she and her friends decided to hire locals as an escort, and had found some supposedly reliable men they could hire if they needed them. The first man they hired was named Abdul a friendly but gave on a feeling that he was crafty as well.

It was nice that Claire wouldn’t have to worry about her chip getting pinged anywhere. She felt freer here than in a while, but she knew she had to be aware.

Abdul took them around to the various markets, to which he probably got a kickback. Mary asked about the slave markets. “Yes of course men and woman are sold there, you would be very sought after there”
“Do they do grading there?” she enquired
“Yes, but they are much rougher when they do it, not as sophisticated as the West”
“Are the grades valid in the West?”
“They are supposed to be, but if you get graded you’d probably end up on the auction block after, women here don’t get graded for fun”
“I guess it would be too dangerous to go to the slave markets?”
“Yes, it would be, you can go but it would be dangerous”
Claire preferred if they didn’t discuss this, she didn’t want them getting ideas. Abdul changed the subject and offered to show them around a wildlife park nearby. He packed them up into a small bus and they went out into the bush to see the exotic animals. Coming back they saw a group of black women in a slave coffle walking down the road. Abdul answered their questions “Yes of course they are being driven to market”, The white girls ogled them as they passed, even Claire took a look. One of the guards waved them down and Abdul decided to stop. He went to talk to the Slave Monger and when he got back he said “Their truck broke down, the guards would like us to transport them to town, there is plenty of room for them” The girls were nervous and talked about it, and decided to let them ride with them as long and Abdul said it was safe. It was hot and dusty and they didn’t want the women to suffer any more than they had too. The slave got on the bus slowly and had to sit on one side of the bus because of the chains. The mongers sat in front and back of the slaves a couple sat close to the white girls. The girls eyed the guards nervously and stared at the slave girls. He guards also eyed the white girls.
When they got to town the guards were talking to Abdul and he said ”The guards want us to take them directly to the slave market. Now you will see the market for yourselves” They drove through the town and came to a stop where the girls could see a large number of both male and female slaves standing and sitting while naked and shackled. When the guards got up they brushed their hands against the white girls covered breasts or even their faces. The slave girls were hustled out of the bus. Claire unfortunately got locked onto one of the unused shackle on slave coffle and found her self being pulled along with the slaves
“Abdul help me I’m caught”
“Just follow them off the bus, it will be easier to unlock you” When Claire got off the bus there quickly became a commotion as other black man came over to look at the white girl in the coffle. She was quickly surrounded and people pulled at her clothes and soon her breast were uncovered and hands had pulled up her long skirt feeling her sex. There was intelligible jabbering and it almost sounded like they were making bids on her. On of the guards finally got to her and unlocked the shackle on he wrist. All of a sudden someone grabbed her and dragged her to the auction block. She was pushed on it and people started yelling bids. Abdul and the guards got to her and were able to get her back.
They were bringing her to the bus when they saw the other girls being dragged off the bus. Hey rushed forward and the girls were being stripped and their arms tied behind their backs
Abdul yelled at them, He called over some guard to break up the near riot. There was a frenzy of voices all around them and the women were terrified. Finally, the guards were able to restore order and the talking was calmer now. Abdul took the girls away from the bus into a slave stall. He explained that he had come to a compromise, they would be auctioned but they would be allowed to go free the next day and their owners would get 90% of what they paid back. He then locked them in a slave coffle.
The girls were terrified and but each went up on the block. Each girl was shaking and then sold and pulled down for the next. When Claire went up she used her slave auction poses to entice the buyers. Might as well make them pay through their noses she thought.
Finally, the auctioneer called “Vendu” (French for Sold) and she was dragged off the platform. A large older black man. She was brought to a large dirty house. She knelt before her new Master, he opened his robe and she immediately started sucking his member. She hoped he would keep his part off the bargain, if he even knew there was a deal to release her. He soon came and she was thrown into the slave quarters and saw three other slaves, all black. They each came over to her and started pawing at her. They talked among themselves but of course Claire didn’t understand them. It was a little over an hour and a large young black man came over and brought her back to her owner.
He helped him disrobe and then he pushed her onto the bed she opened her legs and he roughly fucked her. She decided she wasn’t going to give him a pompoir. She wasn’t going to be a good slave for him and make him happy. After a few minutes he came in her and he had her removed back to the harem. After a couple of hours he had her brought back, guess he was finally ready for the next round she thought
This time he took her ass, roughly and painfully with no lubrication. After he came he left her sitting on the floor as he went to his desk and went over paperwork. Again, after a while he came back to her and pointed to the bed, she laid down on her back and spread her legs. She refused to give him any extra pleasure but what he took. She didn’t think he would appreciate it anyways. He wasn’t cruel but just used his slaves as objects. Claire worried she would get pregnant, what happened to the children of slaves?
When he ate he threw morsels to her on the floor like she was a dog. Finally he went to bed and she joined him as a ‘bed warmer”, never mind that it was steaming hot.
Claire had never welcomed a morning like this one, but she tried not to get her hopes up. Finally, Abdul showed up with some other man. They didn’t even talk to her and that worried her. Abdul came over and removed her master’s collar. He escorted her out of the house. She asked what happened, why didn’t they ask if she wanted to stay?
“Why did you want to?”
“No of course not, but I’m just confused”
“Well he wasn’t impressed with you, he didn’t want you anymore”
Claire was a little disappointed “OK”
“Why you disappointed?” he asked mischievously.
“I was trying not to be pleasing, but yes kinda”
They got on the bus and she was relieved that all the other girls were on there. “Elizabeth’s Master didn’t want to let her go we had to give him 95% of his money back. She promised to pay me back with interest.” The bus left to back to the city
He brought them to his house instead of the hotel. He announced that they would all serve him as slaves for six days to pay him back for all his trouble in rescuing them. The girls felt no will to say no.
For the next six days each of the girls took turns pleasuring him, as well and working in groups to do so, but all the girl tried to gain his favor.
When it was Claire turn She removed his robes and started sucking his cock till he was hard. She led him over to the bed and let him mount her. To him she used all her sexual training, and he exploded inside her “By the prophet I have not experienced anything like that, I do not ever want to let you go”. Claire quickly became his favorite and continued to use everything she was taught
Finally, he announced “You have paid your debt to me, you may now go home if you wish” The girls chatted among themselves and realized they must go back home. He turned to Claire and said “I want you to stay a few more days”
“Why?”
“I cannot let you go quite yet, you are my favorite, please obey me”
“What do I tell everyone”
“I will teach you Arabic and you can say your doing a Work Study Program, I cannot let you go quite yet”
“Ok yes sir I will”
The next day the girls, back in clothes and ready to go home were escorted to the airport. Claire came with them, but stayed slave naked. After they left he brought her back to his house. He brought her to the stables. She saw stocks for holding a slave in place and realized what he was going to do and became terrified. “I will honor my promise to you, but I will also brand you as mine, to remind you what you truly are and who you belong to” Two large male slave grabbed her and forced her into the stocks and locked them.
“Please don’t do this please!”
“You must know true slavery, I am your Master now” He talked like her slavery was permeant. She trembled and then felt the most terrible pain she ever felt, smelling her flesh burning. The brand was quickly removed but the pain stayed. He then applied a anti-biotic salve to the wound. He gave her a shot and the pain disappeared. “I have frozen your ass to take away the pain.” He then dressed the wound and she was sent back to the slave quarters.
The wound healed quickly and Claire settled into her slavery. Twice a day for a week she pleasured him, gaining the respect and jealously of the other slaves. Every Day he would teach her to read and write Arabic, Taking the Koran as their work book. She started using Slave Pleasure Addiction (2) on herself to increase her pleasure and her attachment to her Master. She lost all track of time and was letting herself become his slave
It was now two months since the other girls left, he finally came to her and asked “You have not asked to leave, you and now my slave”
“I didn’t realize it had been so long Master”
“By rights, since you have stayed so long and I have branded you, you are a slave now, but a promise is a promise, I will release you, even though my offer was only for a few days, not two months”
Claire was trying to clear her head. “Sam The Slave Man has exclusive rights to my sale, but I don’t know what to think now Master”
“There is no Sam’s here, and our law is paramount, but I gave you my word of honor”
“Can I have a few days to think about it Master?”
“You may, but I will not call you to pleasure me, you will work as a domestic for the rest of your stay” Claire agreed. She spent the next few days Hauling water, sweeping rooms, making beds, and helping in the kitchen. She actually found she moved into the situation easily but felt less and less like a this was what she wanted.
A few days turned into another month, much longer than she planned Abdul came to her and asked if she wished to leave, she hesitated but finally said “Yes Master’.
He handed her a release document stating he had freed her. “I have contacted a mosque that is close to you, they will come and instruct you in Islam so you may convert”
“I wasn’t planning to convert, I have the utmost respect for your religion but it wouldn’t be a true conversion”
“Ah but I am releasing you, you must convert to show your gratitude. But if you don’t its Gods will, but they will come and bring you to classes for a while and take you to the mosque for services for at least a month”
“Thank you Master, you have been very kind”
He took off her collar and presented it to her “This is yours, as a memento, and as proof of your slavery. If you get pregnant I would want you to bring the baby to me, I will take it as my own as is my right, Of course I cannot force you to come back here from Canada.”
Claire had never thought while she served what would happen if she had gotten pregnant. She got dressed, the clothes felt so “strange” like they didn’t belong on her anymore.
The next day he drove her to the airport, he verified that she was a freed slave and was going home. Claire realized he had her be a plain slave to help her commit to leaving. She got on the plane tearfully and left her Master behind.

(1) Slave Pompoir allow a slave to massage a mans penis while inside her
(2) Slave Pleasure Addiction is a technique for slave to increase their pleasure while pleasuring their Master’s. It has the effect of addicting the slave to their Master. Slaves are not told this and are told its called simply Slave Pleasure
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Premise is good, but as you say, needs a little work. Little more detail and polish - and some more paragraph breaks! Make it easier to read.

Nonetheless, thanks for contributing. Since you have posted several stories on the Yahoo group you qualify to have your own thread in the "established authors" section, where you can post your work.
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Keep writing ! Your stories continue to get better!

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Great story! I read it on the yahoo group and again just now. Would love to read more.

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I should point out that these early stories (written in 2017) were written just for myself, though I did share some of them with Joe Doe. Since they were only meant for my own enjoyment they are not as polished as they could be. In some ways there were more of a template that for my fantasies.

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Attn gary: would you like to upload your other stories from the Yahoo group here, too? (Vacation to slave training, etc.)
Otherwise, I could upload a couple of your files which I have downloaded, if you prefer that ....

BTW I have copied the Africa story to your forum: gary's stories
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I have deleted the copy "Claire in Africa (aka African Grading)" of the above story, as it was a duplicate.
(If anyone needs the other Topic, I can undelete it.)
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Master Gary,

I so love your Claire character. The way you tell the story is like you are seeking it to a friend. I so love that. Joe Doe's continuation is also good. I hope you see it in yourself to continue her exploits.

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Gary, are you still polishing your stories or are you working on new Claire stories? Keep in mind new stories don't necessarily need to connect to the old stories.
On your Claire and Mr. Edwards story, you said you weren't sure how to explain how the Judge justified letting Mr. Edwards keep her.
I thought of a plot device that could possibly explain it. The high end permanent collar that he locks on Claire has many features, such as lie detection mode. When the slave is asked a question and doesn't answer truthfully a red light blinks indicating not giving a honest answer. When the slave answers truthfully a light blinks green.
The Judge asks Mr. Edwards to use his phone to activate the lie detection mode. Then asks Claire that while she was forced to submit to Mr.Edwards' sexual demands did she enjoy the sex? Claire insists she was kidnapped and raped but the collar flashes red. Claire must admit that she was sexually aroused while being forced to submit.
This is possible why the Judges decides to let Mr. Edwards have her for now and just maybe Claire will decide to be his slave willingly. ("I think you can handle a little Slavery, you seem to enjoy it") Later the Judge decides to have a Slave Psychologist evaluate Claire and decide if she should be enslaved. Such a situation leads to Claire being Mr. Edwards' slave for many months.
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Orflash, that is BRILLIANT! I love the collar lie detector idea. Whether or not Gary can fit it into his story, of course, is something he needs to workout but I must say I admire the creativity of this plot device and just HAD to let you know.

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Thanks Hooked6,
I have been thinking about it for awhile since Gary mentioned he was still working out how the Judge allows Mr. Edwards to keep a kidnapped free woman as a slave.
Although the Judge is female I thought it would have served better as a male judge with chauvinistic attitudes to all young pretty girls, like they all should be registered slaves. But Gary made the Judge female possibly giving Claire a sense of comfort that a woman would side with her, but then she rules for Mr. Edwards and she is legally forced to be a slave to her kidnapper.I
I hope Gary expands on the Mr. Edwards story, the storyline has so much potential. When he takes Claire it's cold, but as it gets warmer out later in Mr. Edwards starts to take Claire around naked on a leash around her home town. Around the people that know her and they start to think of her as a slave for real. That becomes a issue when she is free again but they still see her as a slave. Some have actually used her as a slave and still want to continue to do so. With all the slave training and months as a slave Claire obeys their wishes.
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