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A Heartland Slave Grading, Chapter Five, Part 1

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A Heartland Slave Grading, Chapter Five, Part 1

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CHAPTER FIVE

Warning: There is a background underage character named Georgie that is referred to in this chapter but has no interaction with slavery. I’ve had difficulties with the character because Georgie, full name Georgina Crawley (later Fleming Morris), is a major character in the TV Series, but I’ve tried to keep her as far off to the side as possible. I’ve probably removed about three quarters of what I have written of her, which was even then relatively minor.
Part of the plot and some of the conversations are taken and modified from the Heartland Episode “Picking Up the Pieces” (Season 7, Episode 1)


Day One
Ty Borden didn’t know what hit him. He was at Lou’s and Peter’s Morris new home, waiting for Amy to arrive. He knew some of what had happened to Amy and he was worried. But he didn’t expect this naked whirlwind to fly into his arms, and wrap her legs around him. If he hadn’t been standing against a wall he would have been bowled over. Her deep French kisses and hands pushing into his pants shocked everyone.

Amy was dragging Ty into a guest bedroom where she tore off his clothes as she was still in a fit of intense sexual arousal from her former piercing. Lou was glad she had sent Georgie to Heartland, where her father and grandfather waited for news of Amy. Lou had known that neither could handle what had happening to Amy, with her present slave naked aspect.

Well back to Amy and Ty; Ty had never been with such an aggressive partner, and making love with Amy was not usually a contact endurance sport. She had given him oral sex before, but whereas before it was quick and quite basic, now she hungrily swallowed his cock, with her tongue pleasuring him like never before. Pushing his manhood deep into her mouth and down her throat, cutting her breathing, but by swallowing at the same time he felt the ripples of her throat movement caressing the head of his penis. She would withdraw before he came and after a short wait, mount him and jiggle her ass up and down gratifying both of them intensely. He came first, but she demanded her orgasm and pressed on till she exploded in ecstasy. They both laid down together for a short time, when Amy pushed Ty down to preform cunnilingus on her. He wasn’t used to doing it often but she insisted and gave him directions where to satisfy her cravings. She told him to go slow, told him to speed up, told him to lick her pussy lips, insisted he lick and gently suck on her super sensitive clit. She again felt the flame of delight come over her.

Being young, Ty recovered quickly and Amy was soon returning to giving him a blow job that left him breathless. She pulled him on her and told him to push her legs up and apart to penetrate her even deeper. These sexual Olympics continued until three hours later Ty left the bedroom walking unsteady, and needing to recover from his satisfying ordeal.

After a shower he left to go back to his trailer out on the foothills of the Rockies. Meanwhile Lou had been studying online what had happened to Amy. There was no official name as the evidence was mostly antidotal, but was often called Hyper Slave Heat (H.S.H.). She learned that being turned into a slave can unleash a women’s full unrestrained sexual potential. The amount of pleasure becomes heightened and turning into an additive drug. A drug that makes a woman extremely submissive and needing to serve a master to fill her new sexual needs. The slave had no more choices but to serve and please. Little was said about treatment to reverse it beyond an article suggesting that a woman with this condition should continue to be treated as a slave for a time and then slowly reintroduced to the non-sexual pleasures of her previous life.

Lou was very much a take charge kind of woman. Competitive and assertive she was nevertheless not a bossy person. She would jump into new business possibilities with vigor and competence. However, she also would rush into things, buying the land and new house without consulting her husband, or she would find herself overextended and needing help. And she would be all that for Amy, she would treat her as a slave as was suggested, and it would maybe make slavery less attractive if Amy saw how she would be treated if she continued down this road. But Lou wouldn’t admit it, but she was angry at Amy for being like this and for trying to drag her down with her. She told her plan to her grandfather Jack, and her father Tim. Tim was supportive but kept butting in with his own ideas. He was upset and didn’t want his youngest daughter to become a slave, although he had become more supportive of that particular institution over the years. Her grandfather on the other hand wasn’t at all pleased. He wanted a solution that would avoid any more slavery for Amy. Lou was confident that her proposal was the correct one.

That night, Amy was given her own room with a bed, they didn’t have a cage and the house hadn’t been built with slave pens. Lou had wondered about how far to go with treating Amy as a slave. She would order her about but she also didn’t want to go to the expense of buying a cage, or slave kibble just for a
week.

Day Two

The next day they drove back into Calgary to the HCI store to witness the auctions of Ashley, and Rachel. Lou kept Amy on a chain, wanting to make sure she was as embarrassed as possible. Unfortunately, Amy was still feeling extremely horny, as her clit had still not retracted into its hood and just sitting in a soft chair, or a cool breeze, would electrify her. Ashley was first up; she did her slave positions to show off her body and sex holes. The auctioneer talked about how she was a rich girl reduced to slavery, insinuating she was ripe for humiliation. When she was the least bit slow the slave monger would give her a wallop from his whip. Lou looked in the crowd and noticed several people who were close to the Stanton family. Whether they were her to help her or use her to humiliate Ashley’s family it was hard to know. People started calling out bids, “$30,000, $35,000, $40,000.” Soon it got to over $50,000. Amy was getting both excited and nervous, trying to hold back the need to volunteer to be next, or join Rachel, the black hermaphrodite who had sexually used her, as a duo. Ashley finally went for $75,000, a high price. Lou looked over and her new owner wasn’t someone she recognized. East Indian, a little overweight but fairly good looking, when he took her chain, he seemed to be gracious to her (she seemed). Lou hoped Ashley now had a decent master and decided to go over to introduce herself and hope to find out where he lived and if they could contact her.

Next came Rachel to the auction stage. There was a lot of excitement and there were people on cell phone who would be bidding on their behalf. Rachel saw Amy and called out, “Hey Blondie, come up here with me. I own you so you should be auctioned with me.”

Amy blushed with so much attention focused on her, but she also took two steps forward only to feel a pull on her chain, “You’re not going anywhere.” Insisted Lou, who acted like her owner not her sister. This was partly to keep Amy safe, but she also enjoying the feeling of power. The bids started and the hermaphrodite showed off her seven-inch penis, her 38D cup breasts, her ass and her vagina to make sure everyone knew she truly had a complete set of both sex organs. The bidding started high and went up quickly, starting at $75,000 and rising until the auctioneer slammed down the gavel on $130,000 from a gentleman from Las Angles.

When they got back home, Amy was even more turned on by what she has seen. Lou decided to start Amy’s anti-slave therapy. She had he father, Tim, bring over Amy’s horse, Spartan for her to reconnect with. She took the slave girl to the barn, and had her brush her horse as well as the foster daughter’s horse, Phoenix. This helped Amy remember her love of horses, and her work healing them emotionally. She talked to her horse about her problems, giving her an outlet for her feelings. She tacked up her horse to take him for a ride, forgetting she was still slave naked. Riding in the pasture behind the barn, where luckily no one could see her, the rubbing of the saddle against her pussy lip and clit brought her to climax no less that three times. After each time she would ride faster or jump over fallen trees to heighten the grinding of her sex organs. She returned from her ride happy, satisfied, and looking forward to more slave naked horse rides.

However, Lou considered that Amy should be used as a slave as well and told her husband Peter to have her sister ‘entertain’ one of his clients. He was having a business dinner with an investor and Amy would help grease the wheels of the deal. After helping prepare supper for Lou, she left with Peter, slave naked and at the end of a leash.

At the dinner in a fancy French restaurant, Amy sat beside the client, being attentive and only talking when talked to. Mr. Andrews was an overweight (though not grossly so) balding and of average looks. But he was also well mannered and didn’t make derogatory remarks about Peter’s slave girl. Amy had been watching slave instructional videos on YouTube and the SlaveTV channel on proper behavior and different pleasuring techniques. She would pick up and eat solid food that fell on the floor, and even licked up spilled drinks to show her complete submission. She would feed and compliment him as the evening wore on. Peter at first was uncomfortable, still remembering Amy as a close sister in law, but became less so as the evening wore on and drinks flowed.

Amy kneeled under the table and undid the client’s pants and started sucking him right there in public. This wasn’t considered unusual in such restaurants, as at least three other tables contained slaves entertaining someone’s clients. She gave him a nice slow suck, licking the head, sucking his balls, and deep-throating his penis. Though his cock was too small to cut off her oxygen, it did keep hitting her uvula (that thing hanging in the back of your throat). Amy was still suffering from Hyper Slave Heat, and begged him to fuck her. He took her to a back room where slaves could be fucked, and sitting on a small adjustable U-shaped seat provided for such occasions, which allowed out of shape businessmen the pleasure of standing for face to face fucking without having to worry about hurting they’re backs trying to hold the slave girl up. Amy wrapped her legs around him and bounced up and down on his manhood till she felt him shake in orgasm and release his sperm into her.

He then called out to Peter to join them and with his reluctance diminished through alcohol, came in with an old friend he came across while waiting for the couple. Both men entered and Peter fucked Amy from behind so he wouldn’t have to look her in the eyes. Amy had her hands against the wall, as she had done at the truck stop that led her here. Pushing against her brother in laws large cock she was enjoying herself. Peter was a big guy that had a thick and long cock that filled Amy, who rubbing her still exposed clit, brought both of them to a fiery climax. Peters friend was also nicely endowed, though not as large as Peter, Amy still enjoyed wrapping her legs around him as he pushed her back and forth harshly against each wall of the room. He wanted the slave to swallow his cum so she kneeled and sucked him till he exploded in her mouth.
Afterwards he asked, “Hey Peter, this slave is a nice piece of slave tail, could I borrow her for clients?”

Peter wasn’t expecting that, and in his inebriated state replied, “Ya, probably, have to see about it.”

Lou should have known what would happen when she sent Amy out as a slave, but either ignored it or didn’t think it would go this far. When they go home, Amy was a mess, she was sweaty, her hair disheveled, and she was dripping cum from her pussy. Lou was shocked and upset, and sent the slave to the shower to clean off and gave her a douche to clean herself inside.

That night, when the adults went to bed, Amy stole into Lou’s and Peter’s bedroom. And insisted she needed to pleasure them. Peter was more that happy with the offer, but didn’t want to say so in front of his wife. Lou wasn’t shocked, she had seen Amy’s hyper-sexuality and her clit rubbed red from her own fingers. Amy didn’t wait for an answer and dove under the covers and pulled out Peter’s pecker. Licking the cock head and then letting it slice back and forth over her lips he quickly became hard. Amy had pushed down the blankets with her feet and all three were now uncovered. As Amy went on all fours and spread her legs for Peter to fuck her, she started kissing her sister and Amy’s hands caressed and played with her sister’s breasts. She soon had her top pulled up and began sucking her nipples and playing with Lou’s pussy. Lou was feeling so good by her slave’s attention, and memories of their encounter under the slave showers of HCI made her even hotter. Lou started feeling that Amy was a slave now, she was no longer her sister. Peter had begun slowly pumping the slave girl from behind, his long fat cock bring joy to his slave. Slave Amy now moved down to between her mistress’s legs and began licking her pussy lips, caressing at first, then pressing harder and feeling Lou’s body twitch with pleasure. She started sucking on the clit hood until it emerged and gave that more attention while she pushed four fingers inside her pussy. Lou was writhing in ecstasy, while her slave was also coming close to her own orgasm. Soon Amy was shaking to her umpteenth orgasm since getting on that fateful slave truck. Soon after Peter popped and filled her with hot cum with grunts of his own pleasure. Peter kept pumping though he was getting softer now, and now Lou was herself closing in on her own explosive Big O. With her slave’s expert pleasuring techniques, Lou exploded and convulsed in pleasure and screams.

Day Three

The next morning Lou announced to Peter they should call their slave “Three” to differentiate her from Amy. The new name was taken from the last digit of its slave number. This would make her less human and help with them dealing with their slave. Of course, she didn’t tell her Father or Grandfather about this, both of them would explode at the thought of this, and impressed on everyone that they can’t say anything about this to them. She even had a back up plan if they should find out, she would tell them they did it to hide Amy’s identity as a slave.

During this time Three had been eating the same food as everybody else. But she neither ate at the table with the family, or on the floor. Now she would eat standing up in the kitchen, organizing and sorting dishes as she did so. She helped in food preparation, setting the table, and did all the cleaning up afterwards. In the morning she made the beds and did any laundry when required. Ty would come over after his collage classes ended and they would make intense love, making the bed shake and both needing time to recuperate after.

Lou found a loose-fitting smock, looking like a very long t-shirt that Three could wear that covered up her slave nakedness, and only occasionally teased her clit. It also carried the appropriate slave clothing symbol, showing she was a slave. Though it really wasn’t needed since Three also wore a steel collar, that she now felt comfortable wearing.

Lou still wanted to bring back Amy, and reminded her of her Liberty Training, a different type of horse training where strict methods is eliminated and a calm and gentle way is used instead. It builds trust and makes the relationship between horse and rider much closer. Amy had progressed so far with Spartan that he would follow her with little encouragement and it would become a dance between them.

Lou was out with the girls when Peter came home to a naked and aroused Three. He decided he wanted something that Lou refused to do and took the slave to her room and locked the door. He told her to get on all fours on the bed because he wanted to fuck her ass. He made sure to lube his pecker up well, and he slowly entered the enthusiastic slave. Three felt pain when he entered her, as he was thicker that anyone else she had fucked in there. To the sounds of “Oh’s” and “Ah’s” from the slave he slowly started fucking her ass. As their mutual pleasures built up, he started jack-hammering her faster and faster until they came in moans and screams. Afterward they took a shower together to clean off the sweat, and wound up with her ridding his cock again to their mutual benefit.

That evening after dinner, Peter and Lou were discussing Three’s lack of progress. They carefully talked around the elephant in the room, what if she doesn’t get better and remains a slave? They hinted at their pleasure at having her as a slave, but didn’t think the rest of the family would accept them keeping Three as a slave. Would they come around if the only other option was sending her to auction? Somehow finding her a good home didn’t come up. They didn’t discuss the excitement they had at thinking of Three on the auction block and the money they would make. Lou did make quick comment that the money would be useful, which Peter agreed. Maybe they could get a cheaper replacement slave and still have money left over. Lou reminded Peter that Three hadn’t been graded yet, and might need some slave training to get the best price.

Amy heard some of what they were saying, but not all of it. She thought they were going to send her to slave training and sell her. She wasn’t upset at the idea, she was a slave, it was what she deserved. The thought of being on the block, imagining doing her slave positions, showing off to the crowd, hearing the bids go up and up, made her so aroused she silently came without touching herself. That night she pleasured both of them again, in a circus of sucking, fucking, fingering and licking.

Day Four

Amy’s was better the next day, her clit was slowly beginning to retract into its hood, making her less sexually volatile. She was now able to get back to horse training, and was able to pick up a client for what some would call “Horse Whispering”, though she considers herself more of a “Horse Listener”. With her long smock she was able to meet her client while at least partially dressed. However, she wasn’t dressed when Mrs. Moroz showed up with her skittish horse earlier that expected. She ignored slave naked Amy as a thing to be disdained and put her questions to Lou. Amy finally found her voice and told the woman she was the one she should be talking to. This shocked Mrs. Moroz, as no slave had behaved this way with her. She suggested Amy should be punished, but, after hesitating, Lou finally said no. Amy went upstairs and put her smock on, and now clothed, the woman took her more seriously.

Amy went outside to look over the horse, whose name was Rose, for her reddish coloring. Wearing her smoke and sandals, she let the horse run around the corral, calling out to it in a calming voice. When the horse at last stopped moving, Amy slowly walked up to it, making sure she could see her and repeating her soothing words to the horse. When she finally reached Rose, she slowly brought her hand to carefully touch the horse, then slowly caressed its side showing Rose she could trust her. Mrs. Moroz was flabbergasted at what she saw and quickly became impressed with this slave’s way with horses. Amy told her that Rose should be better in a few days and asked if Mrs. Moroz was her rider. Told yes, Amy said she would have to come over a few times for both horse and rider to learn to trust each other.

While Amy was finally working with horses again, her fiancé Ty, had been called to help his friend and boss, Scott Cardinal bring a extremely agitated horse to his Veterinary Clinic. The horse had a very scary flight flying through a violent storm. The groom had called them but then they had been abruptly dismissed by the arrogant horse’s owner, Prince Ahmed Al Saeed, and referred to Scott as a “Cow Vet”.

Ty was still concerned about the horse and talked again wit the groom, Adrian, and told him about Amy. He showed him the “Miracle Girl” online video of Amy getting a downed horse to get up again, as well as others he took of her working with horses. He didn’t really expect him to contact him again though.

But he did several hours later, the horse was almost uncontrollable and had hit him with his hoof when he reared, and broke his right arm. Ty told him to bring the horse to Lou’s house and then called Amy about what was going on.

Amy wore her frock when he arrived, and Adrian was surprised that she was a slave. Some explanations later they put Emir into the corral and Amy started working with him, guiding him around the corral at a gallop. Amy was in her real element working with horse’s again, her slave lust was in the background and she felt free again.

She was extremely impressed with the horse and was making some progress with him when Prince Ahmed roared into the farmyard with his Ferrari. He yelled at them and threatened to have them arrested. They tried to explain and when he saw Amy, he went livid, “Your having a stupid slave work with my horse? She belongs in the bedroom, and why isn’t she naked?” Amy ignored what he said and tried to tell him that she could help Emir, if he let her. “Take your clothes off, how dare you have clothes on.”

Ty was ready to pound him, but Amy waved him off, “Fine, here let me make myself presentable.” And she pulled off her smock and stood before him slave naked. “Ok, now can we talk?” Amy had her dander up and forgot about being a horny submissive slave.

Amy implored the Prince, “Why are you so afraid of him?”

He angrily responded, “I'm not afraid of anything. If you think I am afraid of an animal, you're wrong!”

Amy challenged him, “Okay, then work with him.”

“Why? I don't have to prove anything to you.”

“No, you don't, but why don't you prove it to yourself?“

Prince Ahmed tried to pull the horses towards him, “Come on! Come on! I've had enough! I won't do a stable hand's job!”

Amy’s naked form came right up beside Ahmed, “Listen, you can't give up! There's a reason Emir acts that way with you.”

He looked at her and appreciated her looks, “Really? And you have the answer, do you slave?”

“Yeah”

“Oh! Then, please, enlighten me.” He couldn’t believe a pleasure slave was acting this way with him. He was angry with her but wanted her too.

Oblivious to his increasingly apparent attraction to her she answered, “The reason he acts this way with you is because the only attachment he has is negative!”

“A negative attachment. I love it.” Backing away he looked her over, he glazed over her blond hair, deep blue eyes, wonderfully C-cup breasts and her athletic figure. He wanted to have her right now.

Amy continued, “He associates you with that horrible flight. It terrified him!” In the excitement and anger Amy found herself becoming aroused.

“And you're just a stupid slave spouting new age garbage! You should be servicing my cock not telling me how to deal with my horse.” Luckily Ty had walked away as he didn’t want to get mad and ruin everything, even he had begun thinking of Amy as a slave.

“Amy retorted, “I am a professional. Why do you think Adrian called me in the first place?”

“Because Adrian is a fool. “

“And you are a spoiled, condescending, sexist idiot!” She could feel herself becoming increasingly sexually excited.

“How dare you?! How dare you talk to me like that, I should whip you for that slave. You don't know anything about me!

Amy let that slide, “I know you have no personal connection with that horse!”

“Personal connection?”

“Brushing him, grooming him, being with him?”

“I have staff to do that.” Maybe I should buy you had you can do it for me, and service all my workers.”

Amy was surprised by his remarks, but they inflamed her even more. But it wasn’t enough to derail her standing up for the horse. “And so, did your father, but I can bet he did it himself anyway. Emir was his horse. They won championships together, so they must have had a strong bond. He misses him. He doesn't have that connection with anyone anymore, certainly not with you.” She could feel her submissiveness creeping in again, “I'm sorry, I... I shouldn't have said that. I'm probably totally wrong.”

“You're not wrong. How do you think it feels, losing again and again on a horse that my father made a champion of? My father was the founder of the equestrian team. Everyone loved him, and I'm letting his memory down in front of my teammates. They know it's not the horse.”

“Well, then you need Emir to trust you, like he trusted your father.” Amy was trying to keep her composure as her slave heat rose within her.

“I am not my father. I can't come close to being my father.”

“And I'm not asking you to, but you can still reach Emir. I can't imagine competing at such a high level without a partnership. You need to make a personal connection with him and I want to help you. Will you let me?” Amy could feel her slave wetness starting to drip down her leg.

Amy couldn’t believe how she had acted, she had been so submissive, like a proper slave, but horses brought out her true passion. That passion had also made her Hyper Slave Heat reemerged and she was extremely horny right now. Her anger towards the Prince had also unleashed a lust for him, he treated her like a slave and that made her feel like a lustful pleasure slave.
Luckily no one was around to witness Amy crawling towards Ahmed on hands and knees towards him. “I want you to fuck me master.” She said as she reached him, unzipping his pants and pulling out his penis, she started lustily sucking on the head to pleasure him. Slowly the cock slid down into her mouth and down her throat, Amy started moving her head back and forth, gratifying his manhood and allowing her to breath.

Soon he was completely hard and she stood up and wrapped her legs around his waist and slowly slid onto his cock. Bobbing up and down on him, he was having a great fuck with this slave girl. He pushed her against the corral fence and he started thrusting into her hard, with Amy pushing against these thrusts and rubbing her clit against her shaved pubic hair. Her clit was super sensitive again and she was soon coming with shouts of “Oh Yes” and “Fuck me hard”. But she didn’t stop, she continued meeting his thrusts and kissing him deeply. Soon she was orgasming again and feeling herself squirt for the first time in her life.
Soon he came too and she felt him jerk and fill her with his hot spunk. Slowly he let her down off his cock and she kneeled again to lick his cock clean. They were hot, dusty and sweaty and left the horse to take a mutual shower in the house. There he enjoyed running his hands over her wet body and she cleaned him off first before herself.

After he left, Amy put Emir into a stall, but with her hyper slave heat she couldn’t stop herself from fingering herself to orgasm again. She finally made into the house, carrying her smock and plopped down on the couch. She felt she was falling into a hole, the deep crater of slavery. She looked down at her clit, it was bigger than it this morning, she was going in the wrong direction. She wanted to go back to Heartland, she wanted to look after horses, she wanted to get back to training Georgie to be a show jumper, and all that was in jeopardy. All she wanted to do was fuck and serve, the idea, the pleasures, of slavery was overwhelming her. She felt strange wearing her smock, she wanted to be naked and have people see her beautiful slave body.

Lou returned home with her daughter Katie who was only two who had been told Amy was playing a game. Amy got up and took Lou’s packages into the house and helped her sort through everything. Amy didn’t know what to say to Lou about how she felt. She talked around it a bit a then burst out in flurry of words about her conflicted fears, frustrations and slave needs. Lou, the take charge type of woman, suggested various answers, slave training, anti-slavery therapy, temporary enslavement to someone else, returning to Heartland and her Grandfather Jack, a tough but caring man who helped raise them both after their father was expelled from their life (by Jack) because of his addictions.

In her head Lou thought about if the Prince would take Amy for a short period for a hefty rental fee. Later on, she would be angry at herself for thinking that, but it was getting harder to think of Amy as her free self and not as Three, the slave. She thought her treating Amy as Three, and calling her by that name she was helping her, but she was still angry at what had happened at HCI and wanted to punish Three for that. It had also really aroused her and she would masturbate to the fantasy of being a slave. But doing that also made her angry with herself and projected that on Amy as well. She didn’t realize it but calling her sister Three, she was also clouding Amy’s identity as her sister and seeing her more and more as Three, a mere slave, dehumanizing her as just her property.

When Peter came home Lou and Three prepared supper, with the slave eating over the sink and cleaning up afterwards. While Three was in the barn settling the horses for the night, Peter and Lou made small talk and again wondered about the ultimate disposition of Amy. Could she go back to home to Heartland, Jack might have a prohibition on slaves on his ranch, but certainly he would make a exception for his granddaughter, who had lived there all here life. She didn’t know how he would react or how he would treat Amy. She knew he wouldn’t hurt her; he certainly would refuse to treat her as a slave, but how would he deal with her hyper sexuality? They would have to have a serious conversation with both Jack and Tim, Lou’s and Amy’s father. That night Three did her duty and pleasured both her masters. Three enjoyed it and so did Lou and Peter, wondering could they do without her?
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Very Hot! Thank you for writing this, I look forward to how it continues.

I like how you are working the psychological issue of changing Amy's name to 3, and how it messes with everybody's heads.

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I was just about to mention it's about time for more story, and here you are posting it. It's like you read my mind. Finally some serious fucking. Might Amy be given some Ponygirl training in the near future? Middle -Easterners live to gamble. Competive buggy racing?
In part four the HCI manager mentions to Amy I see you are keeping your pussy shaved slave smooth. But in part five you mentioned the Prince fondling Amy's pussy and pubic hair. Since Amy is fucking anything male that moves and living like a slave, she would still be shaved slave smooth.
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Wow that was really good!

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Sorry missed the pubic hair bit. Changed it to "shaved pubic hair"

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