The Stallion - Champion's Reward Part 3

[ZeeChromosome]

Upon enslavement, all professional degrees and certifications would be automatically negated, so while a hotshot lawyer, doctor, or college professor might end up doing some of the same work, they would never be able to independently perform those same duties. Isabella could certainly work as a doctor at the stables, but she wouldn't have the authority to write a prescription

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Thanks, Joe, that's how I understand it. Although I believe that a FINO slave would retain their credentials, because the free person continues to exist as a legal entity while their slave-persona is under slave discipline. Also, I think that this means that true slaves can't drive because they cannot be issued a driver's license.
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When I do Sandy's follow-on story, I plan to depict Isabelle visiting the HH Ranch as her free persona, Doctor Cohen. Harriette has secrets and she needs someone on the inside who can help her keep them. Spoiler - Hank's shins are a mess. What better way to smuggle in a doctor than bringing Isabelle in for the occasional pony weekend? This is the deep-plot reason behind Isabelle's recruitment and it's why Harriette is so eager to make Isabelle an Association insider. She enlisted Mary's help in recruiting Isabelle over a year earlier - the hospital has pictures of its physicians on its website and Harriette picked her out personally. "Mary, I want that one, get her for me. Bring her to me."
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While she's on the ranch as Isabelle (for now), Harriette asks her to look at some ponies' feet. Harriette escorts Dr. Cohen to the ranch clinic and introduces her to the slave nurse, yet another woman who she has purchased for a fraction of her value as a degreed professional (I plan to make that a recurring theme because I like it so much). Nurse Callie is serving a 10-year criminal sentence for shooting her husband. She caught him balls deep in her sister... and her niece! Since Nurse Callie is a real slave and not a FINO slave, her nursing credentials have been revoked. Harriette gets around that by simply making her slave name "Nurse Callie." Dr. Cohen knew her as an eager young nursing student before her enslavement and finding her here is quite the shock. For both of them. Nurse Callie is wearing a nurse's uniform hat, a stethoscope, a white leather collar with red crosses on it, and... that's it. I do so love a clothed-female-naked-female moment! I have (fun-evil) plans for Nurse Callie. Also, because Carl reads my work, a happily-ever-after as well.
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Thanks again for the clarification. I think it's very important to color within the lines, especially since I'm a latecomer.
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Zee

[Carl Bradford]

It's my understanding that Zee intends to have Isabelle/Dizzie enslaved only for short periods of time, although that may change--it's his story, not mine. That said, I must again applaud Joe for his creativity in imagining how a skilled professional might be used and yet humiliated as a slave. To my mind, many professional qualifications--MD, RN, CPA, JD, etc--require the individual to be personally liable for his/her actions, which is kind of impossible if that individual is enslaved. My personal solution, sort of in line with what Joe suggested, is that an enslaved professional would be de facto demoted in his/her field and required to work under the supervision of a (more junior, less experienced) free person, which not only satisfies liability but exploits the power dynamic that Joe has pointed out, where the ex-professional is not only a slave but also required to report to someone they should outrank. I imagine an MD functioning as a Slave Veterinarian's Assistant, an RN as an LPN or CNA, a CPA as just a bookkeeper, and a JD as a paralegal. Someday when I get around to it, I intend to write a story about the latter situation.
Once again, though, Joe Doe is the master of the loss-of-power dynamic as yet another way to humiliate a naked slave. Hurrah!

[Mr. Smith]

What about an Extraordinary Talent slave?  I would see them retaining clothing able to work in their professions for the benefit of their owner.  The surgeon would continue to perform surgeries as before. His owner would be responsible for malpractice insurance and would receive compensation for work performed.  I see hospitals acquiring RNs, technicians, PAs and doctors, housing them in barracks like living quarters attached to the hospital.  When not performing medical tasks they could be used for "stress relief" by hospital employees, including the janitorial staff.  Same for lawyers, accountants, and other professionals.  Not all slaves will be young choice or prime pleasure sluts.  To that extent I disagree with Joe and Carl.  I mean, Sarah Hollister expected to be sold as an extraordinary talent.  How about that snooty hot shot surgeon that becomes a slave at the hospital.  When not saving lives she is taking the janitor's staff in her ass.

[jeepster]

Snooty hot shot surgeon? Tell me more!

[imreadonly2]

My personal solution, sort of in line with what Joe suggested, is that an enslaved professional would be de facto demoted in his/her field and required to work under the supervision of a (more junior, less experienced) free person, which not only satisfies liability but exploits the power dynamic that Joe has pointed out, where the ex-professional is not only a slave but also required to report to someone they should outrank.

That is precisely what I had in mind, Carl. So if Sarah Hollister ended up working for her protege Rebecca at The Big D, Sarah would do all of Rebecca's grunt work, with Rebecca taking full credit for her ideas, new marketing strategies, or process improvements. Any papers she wrote would be published under Rebecca's name with MAYBE a sly citation thanking "all of the nameless Pleasure Sluts who provided the basis for my research."

"See, Golden Gash?" Rebecca would tease, showing the crestfallen, kneeling slave girl her new book. "I even gave you credit, right here, in the reference section on page 179! Why don't you roll over on your back, and masturbate for my publisher Steve, to show him how happy you are." In this case "grunt work" would take on a whole new meaning, as Rebecca would be free to give Sara's hot snatch away to any of Sarah's old friends, in her remorseless attempts to take control of everything her mentor once had.

Doctor Hollister wrote a paper about the trend of immigrant au pairs from Eastern Europe who gradually seduce their wealthy female employers into slavery, only to marry their husbands and take away their homes, children, and all their possessions. Sometimes the Pleasure Slut would be kept on as a domestic / fuck toy, but more often she would be sold, usually to a brothel in her mistresses's native country. Dr. Hollister even coined the phrase "doppelgang-banging" to describe this unique phenomenon.

Joe

[Carl Bradford]

Mr. Smith has pointed out the one partial exception to demoting the professional upon slavery: the Extraordinary Talent. I must defer here to Joe, who invented the concept, but it seems to me that PROVIDED you were careful to read the fine print (which Sarah Hollister didn't), a person could indeed be enslaved--probably voluntarily indentured, in lieu of debt enslavement--as an Extraordinary Talent, permitted to wear clothing (as necessary) when performing his/her job, but still subject to nudity and sexual use the rest of the time. I believe Mr. Smith even suggested a new form of scholarship--given the high cost of going to nursing or medical school, a hospital might pay the full cost but in return the student (having been slave graded as worth it) signs an agreement to self-indenture for, say, five years after passing medical boards. At the end of that time, the student will have completed all residencies and be ready to practice independently, or stay on as head resident to supervise the next crop of medical sluts--I mean, students. And somewhere in the fine print, the agreement would specify that, if the individual flunks out, she/he still serves five years or longer as an ordinary slave. To be honest, given the current epidemic of student loan debt, that might be a better deal for both students and lenders than ordinary student loans!

[imreadonly2]

One could see these scenarios playing out in professions where the supply of candidates far outstripped, so to speak, the demand. Examples would be entrance to Ivy League or medical schools, or Hollywood. Perhaps a year of indenture to a tenured faculty member, in exchange for admission to Wharton? Or perhaps you could get that part in the next blockbuster comic book movie, if you agreed to a year indenture to the director, or your leading man. Hollywood would have an incentive to make certain at least a small number of girls achieved major stardom this way, to ensure the pipeline of slave pussy eager to do anything for their chance.

One could see a scenario where the daughters of famous celebrities were encouraged by their mothers to "come up the way I did, on my knees", to learn what a tough business it is, and to prove that they weren't merely the beneficiaries of nepotism.

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[Mr. Smith]

I would love to see some of the daughters of the famous wearing a collar for a year or two. On top of Sailor Brinkly throw in the Hamilin and Richie daughters. Kelly Ripa's daughter is smoking hot. Other supermodel daughters like Kaia Gerber (Cindy Crawford) and Leni Klum. Then their are Aunt Becky's daughters Oliva Jade and Isabelle. You could have a celebratiy daughter aution block competition. Now that could be a story as the spoiled and pampered daughters are processed and trained at the Big D for culminating in a block routine contest and sale.

[Carl Bradford]

As exhibited in the way he imagined an X-rated "My Little Pony" movie, Mr. Smith is far more up to date than am I concerning beautiful and famous young women to enslave. My evil mind, as usual, wants to go beyond his suggestion of a child-of-celebrities slave auction--surely some of the newly enslaved should continue their "education" by attending the Pearson Pussy Ranch or the Venus Academy, in preparation for their appearance in X-rated films,

[imreadonly2]

You could have a celebrity daughter auction block competition. Now that could be a story as the spoiled and pampered daughters are processed and trained at the Big D for culminating in a block routine contest and sale.

I could see this as a reality TV show, with the mom's helping their daughters through the process by showing them how it's done. But there's always a question -- how far will mom go? How far will mom be willing to strip if she attends her adult daughter's slave yoga class? Will mom wear clothes when she does the pole? A lot of the tension will be the mom telling her daughter to do things she doesn't want to do, because she's a "STAR", and her daughter's growing annoyance... and her smug delight in her mom's embarrassment when she does agree to participate in certain activities she has to do.

The "surprise" twist climax of each season will be when the host informs the celebrity moms that their daughter's only chance of winning is if they auction themselves as a pair. The mom has a humiliating, dreadful decision to make...

STAY TUNED!!

[ZeeChromosome]

perhaps you could get that part in the next blockbuster comic book movie, if you agreed to a year indenture to the director, or your leading man. Hollywood would have an incentive to make certain at least a small number of girls achieved major stardom this way, to ensure the pipeline of slave pussy eager to do anything for their chance.

One could see a scenario where the daughters of famous celebrities were encouraged by their mothers to "come up the way I did, on my knees", to learn what a tough business it is, and to prove that they weren't merely the beneficiaries of nepotism.

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In my current project, I'm being a little more cynical:
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"Slave Announcer Carlie, on the other hand, she gets fucked in all holes no matter what she does, but she just tries to have fun with her job before the highest-bidding fan inevitably fucks her in whichever perverted way he deems necessary. That's the life of a starlet in Hollywood nowadays. Not that it's all that different from the days before slavery was reinstituted. At least it's official now. Smart starlets with star potential immediately enslave themselves to the best acting agencies they can as soon as they arrive in Los Angeles. The lucky ones immediately get lucrative (for their owners) acting jobs. The majority are simply sold. It's an easy scam. Put out a sign that says, "I'm a a powerful and important acting agency with power and influence" and watch the innocent and unsuspecting teenage pussy march into your lair and enslave themselves to you for "a percentage of movie royalties." There will never be movie royalties. Nobody tries, why bother? Then sell them to the nearest suck-bar. Easy-peasy. Lots of suck-bars in California. Free women refuse to do it these days. Apparently oral sex is something that only slave girls do now. Nevertheless, always visit the suck-bar girls and tell them that you're working on "the next big project" while she's sucking your cock. It keeps them docile."
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Zee

[jeepster]

So? Is that the end? Seems like it's been forever since this chapter was written!

[ZeeChromosome]

Thanks for checking in!
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Gonna do Isabelle's day of pony training soon, but got distracted by another project called "The Atonement Session" featuring many of the same characters and some new ones that I hope you will find entertaining. I certainly have. I've been getting some good advice from Carl and Smith on that.
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Right now it's at about 13,000 words and it's just about ready. Harriette, Thanh, Sandy, and Caleb are all in it. The Golden Hammer is NOT there, because the criminals are supposed to survive their punishment.
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Harriette picks up one or more new slaves and there will be oral sodomy. Also, anal sodomy. Several women will be stripped. Three previously-un-mowed free-woman bushes fall prey to Sandy's talented razor.
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I've got some great plans for Isabelle's second day, so I'll probably swoop back around to that next. We'll also see more of Harriette's seduction-of-Sandy plan in action.
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Zee!
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PS - Do you recall Sandy and Monica's conversation regarding a certain pop star who tried to copyright the high ponytail? Heh. Sandy would SO love to get her in front of a cart. Harriette is really fond of Sandy and wants her to be happy. Maybe that's relevant and maybe it's not. We shall see.

[jeepster]

The pop star didn't do a thing for me cause I have never watched any MTV or an awards show so I have no idea who you were referring to! Classic rock now I might have a clue!

[ZeeChromosome]

Ariana Grande. She tried to copyright the high ponytail this summer. It didn't go well. Because it was stupid. I heard about it on the radio while driving to work. I have no idea what songs she sings. I just know that she tried to steal my pretty ponies' hairdos. I was offended and decided that she needed to pay for her offense.
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Sue me.
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Zee

[jeepster]

Ok still wondering about Dizzie's future! Maybe not all of it just the next day or week would be interesting! Watching some of the olympics got me thinking about ponygirls! I know twisted, haha!

[Jim927]

The start of another great story, Zee. The big disappointment is that you haven’t finished it or at least taken it further. We still have a whole day of cart training to learn about, not to mention the free 2 night stay that was added on to her winnings. Reading through the comments, I see that you have a number of great ideas about how to move this character forward and many of your ideas seemed to be pretty well payed out. On the plus side, I love the way you developed the split personality that lets you separate the free persons thoughts from her slave persona.
You have said in some of you responses that you have this huge story somewhat laced out and that as good ideas or the right mood strikes you, you write it down even if it is for a future segment. I understand and support that but I just hope that you eventually get back to the segments you have already been working on. As a reader who really likes your writings, it gets frustrating to be left hanging without any hint of for how long.

Having read all the segments you have written so far, I can see how they could all fit together into one great book length story that your followers would love.
Wishing you the time and creative energy to get back to writing while still dealing with the real world life that we all must live.
Jim

[ZeeChromosome]

As a reader who really likes your writings, it gets frustrating to be left hanging without any hint of for how long.

- Hey Jim, thanks for the kind words. Yes, I have a seasonally intense job and a hellish home life. So it's not unusual for me to disappear for months on end. Two days ago, I wrote my first scene since... October. It was fun!

So, fingers crossed, back in the saddle? We'll see. Looks like - hopefully - the next chapter to appear is a sequel to "The Workout" portraying Hank's first day in the office as a slave intern. My editors/advisors liked it and had lots of suggestions, so that means they found it pretty engaging. I hope you do, too.

It will be fun, I promise!

Zee

[Jim927]

Zee, I appreciate the reply. I understand that this is a hobby for you and always needs to take a backseat to you home life and job and I would never suggest that you change that. It’s just that as a reader, we get attached to a story and find ourselves waiting for the next chapter and can get a little frustrated when they don’t come and even more frustrated when what does arrive is a chapter from a different story or a new story. The real fear is that the author just disappears and never finishes the story. I know that you are active on here and believe you when you say you will get to it. I’m just hoping that it’s sooner rather than later.
Happy writing,
Jim

[ZeeChromosome]

I’m just hoping that it’s sooner rather than later.

- Me too. I'm always working on recovering my mojo. Believe it or not, your post was a huge help to me. - Zee.

[jeepster]

How you doing Zee? Hate to pressure you but still waiting for Dizzy's cart training!

[Diver]

Please continue this story