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Hi from Avicia: stories on legal slavery

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Hi,

I am a very new writer. I recently started a new series on Literotica set in the fantasy world of legal slavery in the US and the 34th Amendment.
Someone on Literotica suggested I might find a more responsive audience here.
I am very open to constructive criticism on how I can write better stories so please feel free to comment on what you don't like as well as what you do
I was hoping to use feedback to upload improved versions of the stories here, if that makes sense?

https://literotica.com/stories/memberpa ... id=6365558
https://www.literotica.com/s/bought-or-rescued-pt-01
https://www.literotica.com/s/bought-or-rescued-pt-02

Kind regards,
Avvy
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Welcome! Have looked at a story on Lit and liked it!

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Welcome to the forum! It's always good to have new writers - the more content we have, the more hits we get, and the more we can grow.

Currently, we have around 300 visitors per day, so nothing like Literotica. But on the plus side, we are much easier to deal with. May I ask who it was who suggested you visit here?
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Hi SteveBurke

I joined because of Zee, his stories aren't on Lit so I had to join. I'm considering posting my first story here - it is a slave romance - set in the same world as Zee, Carl, Smith, and joe_doe. I'm worried it is too tame for Strip Search

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Avicia wrote: Tue Aug 09, 2022 7:24 pm Hi SteveBurke

I joined because of Zee, his stories aren't on Lit so I had to join. I'm considering posting my first story here - it is a slave romance - set in the same world as Zee, Carl, Smith, and joe_doe. I'm worried it is too tame for Strip Search

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Stories don't have to be hardcore, just to fit within the overall theme.
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