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[Jack_straw_22222]

I’ve been trying to write a story for over a year and have had no luck. Just comes across as plain with no life, so I’ve decided to open up the concept to the great writers here and maybe someone will run with it.

This is a cfnm story concept, but could easily be switched at a cfnf.

A man (Mark) who does not l treat his wife with great respect has a birthday coming up. Each year his wife asks what he would like and his perverted mind goes into overdrive. One year it was her dressed as a French maid, another was going to a clothing optional beach where he wore a bathing suit and her buck naked, maybe another was visiting a glory hole (before they were married).

This year he asks her to dress as a prostitute and for him to pick her up on a street corner in a shady part of town. She reluctantly agrees and they go dress shopping. He picks out a dress that does not cover her whole bum and 6” heels that lock on. Plus a chocker, stockings and garter. Very slutty and embarrassing. She begs him that this is too much but he says it’s his birthday wish.

The night comes and he drops her off at a street corner and must meet him a few blocks away. She is mortified but starts the walk.

When she finally meets up with him she leans in the car and asks to get in. But to make her feel embarrassed, she treats her like a real street walker and asks how much. She does not want to play but has no choice. Finally they agree on a sexual act and he gives her money. They drive away and that’s when the police pulls them over.

The feminist female cop who is middle age arrests them both as they both beg her that this is a misunderstanding. Shes not a bad looking policewoman. She takes the woman to the cruiser and has a conversation with her privately.

The cop comes up with an offer - arrest them both or he can switch clothes and he can be the hooker and her the client.

*******

The female cop guides the wife on how to turn the tables on her husband. Reminding her that he always thought it was fair for her to degrade herself, why not him. It starts off slow, having to take the bus home that night, then chastity, then French maid. The final chapter would be her hotwifing him with a rival.

Jack

[imreadonly2]

I think it's an interesting concept. I did a body swap once, though, and the readers didn't like it much. But I think your story hits on a key element of these stories, when you write them (or read them) in a way you're all the characters at once. You are the reader, and authority figure, and the girl. In that sense, fiction exceeds real life, both because nobody gets hurt, and you get to feel all the feels, as your story does.

I'd been playing with a story where a guy visits his girlfriend's plantation, and gets treated as a slave. Not really for this forum, and I didn't finish it, but it has some of the same vibes as yours.

[Jack_straw_22222]

I do love stories where the boss becomes the slave/servant to a former employee. Things they did are suddenly used against them. They try their hardest to maintain authority and stature, but always fail at the end.

[mikey22]

I like this story idea. I’d probably have the same problem you’re dealing with as far as being flat, that’s a way I feel about lots of my stories but I try at writing at them anyway.
Definitely don’t hold nothing back when it comes to the male character. He needs to be run through the mill just like the female. Let police lady totally humiliate and shatter his ego right in front of his wife. She could call him out as a small that should really do the trick lol.

Police lady may feel sympathetic towards the wife’s position but that’s no reason not to strip her down also, bring in a well endowed male deputy with a 10 inch cock to give her the pounding she truly deserves right in front of her husband.
That also will destroy him.