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Re: A Heartland Slave Grading, Part One

Posted: Wed Jun 03, 2020 9:31 pm
by GreyRose
Gary,
I'm pleased I could help you get your creative flow on this story. I'm looking forward to this chapter more and more, as you provide these little teasers from it.
gary wrote: Wed Jun 03, 2020 3:52 am I had a vague idea of the HCI manager giving her the card of a place that turns out to be a slave brothel. Alternatively my idea was that Amy finds the brothel owner in trouble (she's hurt?) and helps her get to her workplace
As a possible idea, Amy seems to be the helpful type. What if she saw a car with a flat and stopped to see if she could help. There are several people there, one looks to be the driver and a woman in business suit is being very upset with him. Amy comes to find out that the jack is broken or the spare is flat. The woman has an important meeting scheduled and is upset that she'll miss it since the tow truck / AAA / Auto club will not get there soon. Amy offers to drive the woman to her office. Since the woman also has some packages in the trunk she asks if Amy will help carry them in when they get there.

Does Amy's chip trigger an alert at the brothel, due to the convoluted setting changes from the HCI warehouse?

Re: A Heartland Slave Grading, Part One

Posted: Wed Jun 03, 2020 10:35 pm
by gary
Well so far its no more that an idea that needs a lot more development in my head. I am starting to think of putting some Amy stories, but not the ones I'm working seriously on now, in my "Vignettes" story.
Other story thoughts are Mr. Davin coming back to Calgary on business and they either run into each other, or he asks to see her which results in sex of course. A variation on this idea is Amy going to see the Davin's in Toronto so she can be with Liz. Of course she be treated as a slave their the whole time. and this time Amy would be sexually used by Mr. Davis and his son.
Also thinking of Amy meeting up with the female HCI manager again, maybe as a date, or more.
Oh and this is who I am basing the HCI manager on, I also use her name:
https://i.pinimg.com/736x/03/42/32/0342 ... -stars.jpg
I've wondered about a Slave Yoga story, but not sure how to make it different, maybe just make it something the women of Heartland try.
There is another young female character on the show, Georgie, adopted daughter of Lou and Peter. However she doesn't turn eighteen till Season Thirteen (2019) so that quite a few years in the future from where I am writing from which is Season Four (2011). I had thought about a a story of Amy taking her to HCI for her Slave Chipping and Grading when she is old enough. This is Georgie:
https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/ide ... 0222224658

In my original story I was going to include this sub plot:

She helped Prince Ahmed Al Saeed first with his fathers’ horse, then his own. And he had convinced her to accompany him to Europe on a competitive horse jumping tour. This also brought her face to face with his stable of four pleasure slaves, one black, one Indian, one oriental and one a blond buxom white girl, barely older than Amy. She would see them fawn over him, and once even coming over to her, caressing her, and pushing her towards Ahmed. Amy wasn’t sure if they were trying to help him seduce her or maybe get her to join them as his slave. Amy hastily made her embarrassed excuses and left.

This is now a lot more restrained than it would be if I wrote it now, depending where I put it in story It would be much later since I generally talking about things happening in Season Four of the series. And her time with the Prince in between Season Seven and Eight. I'm talking timelines, since I'm mostly ignoring what actually happened in the series.