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Erin's Story - Part 1

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Really amazing story! I find that I'm usually most interested in the set-up, and I always prefer the set-ups that say something about the real world. Yours is perfect! I could absolutely see an academic institution puling something like this, lol. It's airtight. And whilst Dr. Hancock is a nightmare, it's a very interesting relationship to introduce into Erin' situation: I thought I would be frustrated immediately when it really started kicking up, but you convinced me right away that it could be very hot. A fantastic angle on dominance and the many faces it wants to take.

And speaking of hot: I loved the sex in this. It's very good.

Sorry I have no criticism, but I wanted to share my appreciation for your story! Thanks!
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Avicia,

Read this story and your others on Literotica. This one I feel is one of your best. Your talent is amazing and I really enjoy your work. Erin's story hits close to home forme and my fantasy world. Thank you so much for including this fine piece of work here.

Warmest regards,

Belinda
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I really enjoyed this story. It's an interesting twist to enslave a woman for professional reasons, as well as to have her top from the bottom. I also liked the specificity of it (Mickey Mantle's Steakhouse!, and the 7 Ages of Man reference from As You Like It). Great character development, and I'm looking forward to seeing where it goes! :-)
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Thank you for your stories! It is interesting to have stories from the woman's viewpoint written by a woman, not a man trying to think like a woman. I do hope you finish this series. I am curious to see how being enslaved will affect her future and career.
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I just love the way Erin is manipulated into accepting a four year period of enslavement. Instantly you bond with this character feeling her angst in every paragraph as the story unfolds.
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