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Dixie Chicks

Posted: Mon Jan 20, 2020 8:43 am
by automagix12
Hi all, Watcher has asked me to post his latest story: Dixie Chicks
His comment: "if anyone is looking for a visual representation of some of the scenes in the story I'd recommend they check out the Tibool's excellent drawings on the old chaingang girl site."
(I can recommend Tibool's drawings, too, see below).

Here is the story for download:
Dixie Chicks.docx

Re: Dixie Chicks

Posted: Mon Jan 20, 2020 12:34 pm
by Hooked6
I always love to read new things from Watcher. He has such an imagination! I hope he might write another Southern Plantation slave humiliation story sometime soon. He really has a talent for those.

Hooked6

Re: Dixie Chicks

Posted: Mon Jan 20, 2020 2:17 pm
by orflash64
Watcher, pretty good story. I'm still reading it.
However you seem to be mixing your regional terms. In England a woman's backside is her arse. In America, especially in the deep South it's ass. A Southern girl would never use that word, especially one with a Southern accent.
It's like a English girl using booty to describe one's backside. Or fanny, in England it means pussy, in America it means butt cheeks.
Could you also use a bigger font when upload a document? Hard to read.

Re: Dixie Chicks

Posted: Mon Jan 20, 2020 5:25 pm
by automagix12
Orflash: you normally can magnify/zoom the text in your program which shows the MS Office document. E.g. MS Word, or Word viewer (free), or Libre Office (free).

Re: Dixie Chicks

Posted: Mon Jan 20, 2020 5:35 pm
by automagix12
Watcher: I think I've found a typo, too: on the first page there is the abbreviation "AFT", but I think it should read "ATF"? (US bureau of alcohol, tobacco, firearms)

Re: Dixie Chicks

Posted: Mon Jan 20, 2020 8:55 pm
by automagix12
Here is a sample drawing by genius artist Tibool:
tib4.jpg

Re: Dixie Chicks

Posted: Tue Jan 21, 2020 1:03 am
by jeepster
Great story Watcher! Love your take on the south's treatment of northerners!

Re: Dixie Chicks

Posted: Tue Jan 21, 2020 9:44 am
by Hooked6
jeepster wrote: Tue Jan 21, 2020 1:03 am Great story Watcher! Love your take on the south's treatment of northerners!

Being a true Southerner from the American South all I can say is "AMEN" to that. I get a great feeling when uppity Northerners that make fun of our traditional Southern ways are put in their place and Watcher definitely has a good feel for our sentiments in his stories. LOL

Hooked6

Re: Dixie Chicks

Posted: Thu Jan 30, 2020 10:39 am
by Watcher
I’d like to give a big thank you to all the people who posted a comment here. It’s always nice to get some feedback on a story. Plus thanks for the clarification on ‘arse’ (UK) vs ‘ass’ (US) I will try to remember that in future.

Watcher

Re: Dixie Chicks

Posted: Fri Jan 31, 2020 12:42 pm
by Scman493
So enjoyed this story. Really love to follow the plight of a well educated society lady who cannot resist her inner deviant urges to experience in real life her dreams. The visual image of the two ladies in the box is outstanding. Thank you for writing.

Re: Dixie Chicks

Posted: Thu Mar 12, 2020 8:37 pm
by Freight_Train
Super story. Thanks for posting it.

Re: Dixie Chicks

Posted: Sat May 30, 2020 2:46 pm
by submit63
Superb story, I very much enjoyed reading it. Thank you so much!!!