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Disciplinary Action pt 2

Posted: Sun Apr 12, 2026 11:59 pm
by CommodorRaptr
I actually completely forgot i wrote the first part of this awhile back and found it in my notes. Here is tne second part, obviously reading the first part might help understand what's going on here. Any criticism or ideas are welcomed. I do intend to make a part 3 and maybe 4. Enjoy!


I woke up several times that night, mostly because I'd have a dream where I would be back home and thought that my current reality was just a hardcore bdsm fantasy gone too far but 3-4 times I'd wake up, realize my new attire and see that it wasn't a dream but that reality turned into a nightmare. It wasn't too difficult to fall back asleep as the first day had drained my energy so much. I'd say I got about maybe 4 or 5 hours of sleep but it gets kinda difficult to tell time from inside this cage inside this humid barn.

I eventually heard the a door being unlachted followed by the all too common noise from the rooster yelling like a dying animal. I leaned over to my side to see that Master was walking up to me while also holding what looked like 2 metal dog bowls.

"Rise and shine Riley! It's a beautiful day full of opportunities. Are you ready to have a productive day with us?"

The way my "Master" said all this with his cheery tone and happy go around attitude made me scared even more. These people are absolute psychos, I had to find a way out of here and fast.

"You must be starving since we didn't feed you yesterday as we didn't think you deserved it for being so difficult to deal with but your Mistress insisted that we give you at least something to build your strength, so be thankful she's being nice today, ok?"

My "Master" and "Mistress" being nice was just creeping me out even more if they would just be straight up mean and rough. The way they hide their intentions behind their smiles and sweet talk is giving shivers all over.

My cage was unlocked and I was released from the hogtie, my leash was locked on and pulled out. I remained kneeling waiting to see what was next.

Master Henry placed both bowls in front of me, one had water and the other some sort of thick oatmeal like substance, it did not look appetizing in the least. I was never much of a picky eater but this might cross a line. I looked up to my Master with a disgusted look.

"What... um I mean, Master, what is this?"

"Well in case you're in need of an eye examination this one is water," he said pointing to the respective bowl, "and this one is your strength and energy, it's full of vitamins and protein, are you ready to eat?"

Having not had a single morsel of food in the last 8+ hours and having worked harder than I ever had in my life yesterday I'm pretty sure ANYTHING would taste great. Still, I was a bit unsure as to what drugs they might have put in this.

Master Henry could clearly see my hesitations, "well if you won't eat it I suppose I can give it to the cows, I'm sure they'll appreciate it if you wont. Your Mistress will surely be disappointed to hear that her efforts were not given the proper love."

"No wait! Please... umm... I'll... I'll eat it and love it Master!"

I was afraid to be starving all day but more terrified of what Mistress Mandy might do to me if she saw me not appreciate her food.

"Good girl, now let me help you get ready to eat."

Master Henry unlocked my wrists chain and pocketed it, then moved my arms behind my back and locked both cuffs tightly with a padlock. He then took my hair and expertly made a quick braid keeping it out of the way.

"Now then you're all set girl. Be quick as I'll be back soon to have you start working the earth as a good member of society."

That whole speech gave me even more shudders but once he left I resigned myself to eat like a dog. Thankfully the weird oatmeal (which I later learned is called gruel) wasn't that bad tasting at all actually. It smelled odd but tasted like an apple pie crumble but a bit more wet. I gobbled it all down in record speed and was actually disappointed when I couldn't find any food molecules left in the bowl. I finished by slurping the last droplets of my water and then kneeled up waiting.

Waiting and waiting and waiting. Being chained up and completely helpless like this made me realize 2 things, number 1, I am extremely dependant on my phone for general distraction that being unable to have it with me hits hard. Number 2, I am beginning to feel a ridiculous amount of heat coming from my body, as if I was building a lava explosion inside me. What I can only assume is a few minutes passing by the "heat" began to feel like an unparalleled pleasure in my nether regions, I was wetter than I have ever been. As someone who often enjoys being edged in kinky sex play this was hitting the right buttons for me but the torturous part is that I obviously CAN'T TOUCH MYSELF!

I struggled in chains in futile attempts to free at least one hand so I could finish myself off. Usually when I did edge myself this extreme aroused feeling would flutter away and come back occasionally but this was constant and unwavering.

Not to mention that the fear of my situation had mostly subsided and could actually begin to enjoy my predicament for it being a slightly too extreme submissive fantasy. My senses were heightened, I could feel the sweat dripping from my body, the warm sensation of the hard steel encasing my ankles and wrists, matched with the thick steel collar paired with the heavy chain leash resting on the ground and not tied to anything... wait what?

I shook my head and saw the chain leash not chained to its usual bolt on the floor. Sure I was still naked and shackled but I had the freedom to move as I wanted. It being very difficult to focus on what's going on with this massive horniness I got up to my feet, stretched a bit and walked to the slightly ajar barn door. I creeped outside and saw Henry and Mandy talking together while walking back into the main house. I looked to the right where the open gate was and beyond that was my freedom. Even though I was still heavily shaking I had complete confidence in myself that idea get away and find some lucky driver who would not hesitate to stop for a naked goth girl chained up. I didn't care what favors I'd have to do, I would be free if it's the last thing I do.

With maximum effort and all my will power I got our of the barn and started doing an awkward jogging in that my chains barely allowed. I didn't know which direction to go but figured I'd find someone eventually. I "ran" long and hard around road bends after road bends of dirt road and what looked like 4 wheeler trails given the tracks I was seeing. It had to be at least a hour if not more that I started becoming increasingly exhausted. The heat was unforgiving and being tightly shackled didn't help anything. My horniness too was still there, but my focus on freedom kept me busy, mostly.

I settled to go off trail for a moment next to a large stone that provided some shade. I decided to careful kneel down so I'd be able to get back up relatively easily. I first began to just relax and catch my breath but exhaustion took over and soon saw my eyes closing unintentionally.

I was scared awake by the distant sounds of a man and woman yelling, the yells getting closer. I had to move. I tried getting up but quickly realized that my ankle chain got caught on a small fallen tree log. I couldn't get the chain out. The voices were still far that I could afford to make some noise to try and free myself but with absolute vain I couldn't. I cursed myself for falling asleep as now that I was on the road to freedom I got caught on this damn tree!

The stone I was laying down next to was protected by a large pine tree that gave even more shade. My usually pale skin having been exposed to sun light in the last 2 days had seen me get slightly tanned and the ground was somewhat muddy. I was then well camouflaged and with the shade there was little chance that I would be found. Which was a good and bad thing. It was fantastic as my captors wouldn't be able to bring me back to that hell hole but also chances of being seen or heard by passing 4 wheelers were slim.

Suddenly I saw Henry in my line of sight.

"Come on Riley! Come out! We're only looking out for what's best for you!"

God I hated hearing that crap, made them both sound like a cult.

"Henry!?" I heard Mandy from further away. "She might have gone the other way towards town, wanna grab the car and go check with me!?"

Henry took a second to look around before saying, "Yeah! I'll meet you there!"

I saw him walking away and when I figured he was out of ear shot I started struggling again and soon realized that was truly stuck. Being chained helpless in the middle of the woods sounded like fun until you actually realized how fucked you are. I'm the middle of bear territory and didn't want to find out what would happen if a giant furry cuddle bear would find me.

Against all my hopes and almost crying I yelled out, "Wait!... Mas... Master I need help!"

I heard back from a male voice, "Riley!?"

Cringing internally I replied, "Over here Master!"

After a few more painful exchanges Henry found me. He just stood there looking down at me. I could feel the disappointment pouring out of him. I didn't dare meet his eyes.

After what felt like a small eternity he finally spoke, "Well well girl. I surely didn't expect this from you but I guess we'll have to be a bit more careful with you now won't we?"

With sobs and tears leaking out of my eyes from the utter humiliation and self-disappointment of being caught so stupidly I said, "I'm sorry... Master I'm so sorry."

"Sorry you got caught or sorry you left our care?"

"I...um... sorry I left your..."

Henry cut me off with his drill sergeant voice, "BULLSHIT! DON'T YOU LIE TO ME SLAVE! DO YOU REALIZE HOW UPSET MANDY WAS?!"

"I... I... I'm sorry Mas..."

"DON'T GIVE ME YOUR DISHONEST APOLOGY YOU DUMB GIRL! YOU MADE MY WIFE CRY AND LOSING YOU! SHE WAS SO LOOKING FORWARD TO TEACHING YOU THE WAYS OF BECOMING THE WOMAN YOU ARE MEANT TO BE!"

I remained silent, nothing I could say or do would likely change his mood. I regretted leaving the barn more than ever. I could only begin to imagine the painful punishment that awaited me.

Once done his rant Master Henry freed me with ease from the log, pulled me up by my chain leash and started walking along. We reached the end of the trail and now started to become a dirt road again suitable for cars which Mistress Mandy was waiting next to an old Ford truck.

Upon seeing us Mandy ran to us and past her husband and surprised me with a long and soft hug. I was in shock that this sadistic woman actually did care about me that much.

"I thought we lost you Riley, you have no idea how worried I was. The last girl that ran away we found her dead from dehydration in a ditch. We gave her a proper funeral but I couldn't let that happen again. So I bought this and planned on putting it on you today."

She went back to the truck and fetch a thick black leather collar, the collar was adorned with several rings all around it and looked to be made of tough materials. It also had a small box on the side of the band. I'm not dumb enough to not understand what that was. A shock collar.

Unable to resist beside trying another attempt at freedom but that would be quite fruitless with Henry holding my leash witn an iron grip I let Mandy do her thing. Using an allen key she unlocked my steel collar and wrapped the shock one very snuggly around my throat. Finishing with the buckle she also locked it behind my neck with what I assumed was a small padlock. A large carabiner was added to my front D- ring in which she clipped on the chain leash.

With a large reassuring smile she tugged on my leash saying, "Now I won't lose you again, that collar has a built in GPS device and we'll calibrate the collar with an invisble fence to prevent any unfortunate issues like this, now let's get back to work shall we Riley?"

Now fully compliant as there was no other option I let my eyes fall, "Yes Mistress, I'm so sorry Mistress."

As we approached the truck Henry got in the driver seat while Mandy open the trunk latch, "It's okay Riley, we all learn at some point, I was once in your shoes and trust me it wasn't easy." She continued on while using another carabiner to attach her end of the chain to the trunk, "But I was able to learn through tough love and hard work, and you will too, you just have to trust that we will care for you as long as you're in our care."

She then hopped in the trunk bed and sat on a pair of stacked up tires making a makeshift seat. "You better keep up girl, we're late to feed the cows because of your little adventure."

"Wait what?" I thought to myself, when suddenly the truck started moving and subsequently my leash pulled and I quickly realized that if I didn't move my ass that I'd be dragged down behind the truck and being naked on the tough dirt would certainly hurt.

I picked up my pace and almost stumbling down a few times. We finally reached the parking lot of the hell scape I had just escaped and I couldn't control myself and started crying like a little bitch.

My Mistress came to me with another hug while also unlocking my wrists from behind my back only to lock them again in front with the half foot chain.

"Oh don't worry my little Riley, you'll be fine," she said wiping my tears away, "I find that the best way to cleanse a bad mood is to provide services to someone else and therefore be productive. How does that sound?"

Resigned to my fate I looked up at her sniffing back my sobs, "Yeah... umm, yes Mistress, I can't wait."

"Atta girl! Now follow me." I looked back to Henry as my leash was being pulled to follow Mandy, he was planting some small poles in the ground while looking at his phone and tapping a few times, evidently installing the invisible fence. Curiosity got the best of me.

"Um Mistress?"

Still pulling along Mandy turned to me, "what is Riley?"

"Not that I want to find out, just how strong is the shock collar?"

"Oh you clever girl eh? Well not that it'll help you go for more adventures any time soon so I'll tell and show you."

She took out her phone and showed me the app linked to the collar. The app was named "Remote Correction". Fitting name I thought.

"From the app I can send you a shock of 20 different levels. Level one is more of a attention getter as it won't hurt you as much but it will definitely get you alerted. Levels 2, 3, 4 and 5 can be used similarly but with each being sometime stronger and longer. Levels 6 through 10 can start to be shocks that will stop you in your tracks and be very painful muscle contractions. Going higher and up to 15 is where you'll be put on your ass and can temporarily disable muscle function. 16 and up to 20 will just knock you out cold. Did you want to try one?" She said that last part with that mischievous smile that one would use to tease a friend.

"No no! Please Mistress don't I'll be good!"

"That's what I like to hear. By the way, I forgot to mention it but last night you were excellent at eating me, you trully have talent, and speaking of..." Mandy turned a speedy 180 and to my great surprise gently placed her hand lightly cupping my pussy, my pussy that I totally forgot was dripping wet.

I couldn't stop a slow moan from escaping my lips. Which I immediately blushed at the realization, especially seeing Mandy's face light up with joy.

"Oh yes, I should have mentioned that I put a little something special in your food, a few natural aphrodisiacs mixed well in your gruel to keep you ready for me. If you make me proud and be productive and well behaved I will reward you like you did for me last night. Would you like that my little Riley?"

Mandy reinforced her question by inserting a finger and playing around with my ocean filled pussy begging for attention. For a small moment I forgot that I was naked, chained and here in this slave farm hell and just fixated my mind on this amazing feeling.

"Are you gonna be a good slave girl for me today?"

Still in utter bliss I choked out through my sensuous moans, "Uh... aaaah... yes! Yes Mistress!"

Inserting another finger she continued, "Say it slave, convince me."

"I'll... oooh... um, I'll be a good slave girl for you Mistress, I'll do whatever you want, just please don't sto..."

Before I could finish (pun very much intended) she pulled out and yanked hard on my leash making me stumble and fall to my knees.

"Only good girls get to cum. Now prove it to me."

On the ground was a shovel, looking around we were next to a big pile of dirt full of big pieces of grass.

"Take this, you need to remove all the dirt from these and mill them down this grate here." Mandy showed me a metal grate at a 45 degree angle. "You do this to my satisfaction and you'll be rewarded, disappoint me and you'll find out what level 10 or higher on your new necklace feels like."

She then locked my chain to a conveniently placed wooden post and walked off. Determined to reach my climax and also not to find out what level 10 was I worked to near exhaustion. After what I can assume is 4-6 hours I was done. My arms were numb, my legs shaking, I was dehydrated beyond belief and covered in dirt.

Master Henry came to unlock me without a word and led me back to the barn where he pushed me to my knees and clipped my leash's carabiner to a floor bolt.

To my surprise I felt him pat me on the shoulder saying, "You did good today girl. How do you feel?"

"I... I feel good... Master."

"Are you feeling productive and engaged in your activities at the farm?"

"Productive and engaged?" Here he goes talking like he's in a cult or something but I had to admit to myself that I did in fact feel like I did something. I never was much of a sports person, well if sex is cardio then I'd be an expert but I did feel some kind of pride in my work. Yes it is grueling and tough and being naked and shackled doesn't help it does make me sweat and earn my keep so to speak.

Honestly all I could think about was getting off. I don't usually go this long without getting an "O" and it had been awful long and not helped with my Mistress's teasing. I wonder if I get him off if he'll fuck me or something.

"Umm, yes Master I'm starting to feel that but I have a request please."

"Oh? What is it girl? Does it have to do with you being extremely aroused by the laced food and my wife's teasing by any chance?"

"Uh... yes... um yes Master!... how did you uhh, know?"

Moving to one end of the barn Master Henry started filling up a bucket with that same sponge with water and adding some soap. He then approached me and poke me on the nose as if I was a child. "You're not the first girl I've trained and my wife had the idea just for you of lacing your food with aphrodisiacs to motivate you further."

"What do you mean by 'just for me' Master?"

Henry began washing me with the soapy water and rubbing me good all over, spending a bit too much time on my small boobs when he continued, "well we were told that you are somewhat of a sex addict and like all girls we have here we try to motivate them with rewards they'll enjoy on a personal level."

"Oh... I see." I began blushing massively at his response.

Henry detected my shame and reassured me with, "There's no shame in it Riley. So long as you don't over exert yourself and stay safe than you will still grow healthy."

"Than... thank you Master."

I washed then rinsed but this time with warm water. Master left telling me to stay put with a light chuckle, which I return. I felt like I was growing closer to him, like he and Mistress actually did care about me. I could do without the cage, shackles, shock collar and being naked but maybe this was the tough love I needed?

The barn door opened again and Mistress came to me with a small laundry basket.

"I'm very proud of you today my good, good little slave girl, you did very good. It's almost time for bed but before we get to that and something else", she said that last part raising an eyebrow, "You're gonna pick out out some clothes for tomorrow as you'll be coming with me into town to help with groceries."

"Oh umm, yes Mistress."

Into town? Groceries? Clothes? Maybe I'll finally get a break from these damn shackles and collar. Maybe I could even escape!... but for some reason I'm kind of starting to like it here, especially since I want to have more of that horny gruel.

"So here are some options for you, let me know which one you like best."

Mistress showed me a few outfits, some were bland or uninteresting and lastly she showed off a black sun dress complimented by a pair of simple black flat shoes. My eyes lit up and I decided on that one.

"Wonderful! I'll put this here and you'll be wearing it tomorrow morning... now, I do have a promise I intent to fulfill."

Mistress approched me like a predator hunting her prey and I was just a little bambi stuck in her trap. She had me stand before restraining my arms behind my back. Then with delicate kisses around my legs then thighs she slowly began lapping at my pussy. She took her time and after what felt like an hour if not more she brought me to 4 amazing orgasms. After the last one I was utterly defeated of all energy.

"Oh... thank you... thank you Mistress, that was... oohhh, my goodness that was wonderful."

"You're welcome little slave. Now let me be clear about something." Standing up she took my leash pulling me close, I thought she might kiss me. "Tomorrow, you will be a good girl to me, people in town know what we do to girls like you here and if you attempt another escape like today you will be staying here much longer than 5 more days. You will experience pain and misery beyond what you can imagine. Are we clear slave?"

If I wasn't already terrified earlier I sure was now. "Yes! Yes Mistress! I'll be a good slave for you. Whatever you want."

"That's my girl, now off to bed but this time we'll get you a little more comfortable, lay down in your cage on your back."

More comfortable?! Am I gonna be able to masturbate finally? Not that idea really need to but I sure could. I crawled and layed down as instructed. Mistress came around and from the outside of the cage she unlocked one wrist from the chain before passing it through the bars and re-locking it back to thr cuff. My hands were then stuck over my head. I let an audible groan of disapproval, which my Mistress caught immediately.

"Now now little slave, we can't have you going overboard with touching yourself or you'll never sleep. You should be thankful that I don't hogtie you again."

Remembering the horrible time I had trying to stay asleep last night I quickly thanked my Mistress for her "kind gesture."

"Goodnight my little Riley. Sleep tight."

"Good night Mistress."

End of part 2

Re: Disciplinary Action pt 2

Posted: Mon Apr 13, 2026 12:28 am
by inkless1980
Glad to see you continuing this story. I hope to get back to the one I started as well. Hopefully it won't be as long of a wait till you post part three.