Hooded Experiment

[Freight_Train]

This is part of a series of much shorter stories I'm writing under the title of Vignettes. You might say these stories didn't happen so are not as they say in the fandom, they are not "Canon". Its not finished so I don't mind hearing your suggestions.

Claire was looking at the hood that Mistress Davis had used on her. She had remembered how it had removed her identity, even to herself and wondered about an experiment. If she used it with her family, how would they respond, would they also forget who she was?

After talking to them, they agreed to the experiment, she would wear the hood, the collar the Davis’s gave her, and a one-piece bathing suit that was almost the color of her skin. She suggested they try calling her 562 and see how that went. Claire needed help from her younger sister Amanda to zip up the back of the hood, but they didn’t lock it. Another change was the Claire would sleep on the floor of her room, on a camping mattress.

Thus, the experiment started, everyone was self conscious about Clair in the hood, and mostly still called her by her name. But things changed over a couple of weeks, it started with little things, instead of asking they would tell her to do something, they ignored her when she wasn’t needed, they stopped calling her by her name, using the 562 but then just calling her Five for simplicity’s shake.

Claire was nervous about the changes; she didn’t expect them to actually happen, and so quickly. Without her face she became nobody, just a slave. She decided to make a more important change, she removed all her clothes, and waited for the reaction, she was shocked when there was none, they treated the same, her mother made a almost off hand comment, “Your finally properly dressed.” This actually shocked Five that she had now sunk to the level of a faceless slave, they forgot who she was.

He mother took her to the grocery store and general shopping, to carry the bags. Thanks to a breakthrough in technology a new kind of cold weather slave clothing had been developed. Slave-Tex created a tight fitting, and completely see through, cold weather outfit, fit for temperatures as low a -10 C / 14 F your slave is protected and shown off almost slave naked. Passerby’s would glace at the hooded slave, a few would ask questions, which were answered with unconvincing muttered phrases of “Punishment”, or “New way to train slaves” as they didn’t know how to answer. Sometimes after the encounter their would be a moment of questing themselves but it passed quickly.

The next shocker was when her Master (Father) brought home a slave cage a week later. “We should put it in the basement like a proper slave and this will be your new home.” Five was additionally surprised when he brought in Slave Kibble, both hard and soft. Then she noticed the bottles of high protein water bottle, that had originally had ejaculate from male donators, they still did but there wasn’t enough donors to keep up so a synthetic ejaculate was created that wouldn’t break down in the water or separate, so it could just be added, though some companies like to stay with the real thing. An interesting aside is that the artificial stuff had a slightly stronger ejaculate taste.

Five wanted to rebel but found she just couldn’t get up the strength, part of her wanted to see how far this would go. When the cage was installed downstairs, she slowly crawled into it, still nervous. They left her a bowl of slave kibble, a blanket, and locked the door, and left her alone. Five had lost her identity and her family had forgotten who she was. What would happen if she took off the hood?

[Hooked6]

Gary, what a fascinating snippet of what you described as a work in progress. I really would LOVE to read the entire story (series?)

The things that come to mind based solely on this excerpt - (1) I would LOVE to know the nature of this experiment. It is MOST intriguing and I am driven to know more (2) What does the hood look like? Is it like a typical bondage hood with removable eye, nose and mouth coverings OR is it mostly like a ski mask only made of leather just to hide a person's identity? And lastly, (3) When in the heck are we going to get to read MORE of this fascinating tale? I think you have a marvelous basis for a popular story here and I am most eager to see what else you come up with.

Hooked6

[gary]

It's the leather hood used by Mistress Davis in the story "Home Again" The are holes for the nostrils, the mouth isn't zippered but has a separate piece that sealed it, and most importantly of all it has one way lenses for the eyes so Claire can see out, but no one can see her eyes, giving her greater anonymity

[gary]

OH and it has a hole in the back close to the top for hair in a top ponytail. And it zips up in back and had a padlock

[Hooked6]

Gary, Thanks for the added description. I was hoping that was the type of hood you were referring to and thanks again for the snippet from your Vignette series that you are working on. The mind boggles at the possibilities for what happened during this experiment you referred to in the story.

Hooked6

[orflash64]

Gary, this sounds like the frame work of another great story. I like the cum water, reminds me of the cum protein food supplement in "The Valley" series. They give it to slaves as a means of food but tastes like real seamen. But they had to work for it, they slave at first had to suck hard on a dildo feeding tube and the computer system wouldn't dispense it till she sucked for ten minutes and followed the directions of the program to give feather kisses, deep throat and use her lips and tongue. Later she had to ride a dildo on a horse like mount while she sucked.I
It interesting to see how the experiment comes about, like a good reason why Claire does it in the first place. Such as her position on a Slave Training protocol that she is assisting on developing for a company she consults with given her experience with slavery. Claire wanted a more positive slave training protocol to be used on New slaves. As such she let them talk her into volunteering to do it as long as she could do it with people she trusted, hence her family.
I don't recall Claire having any brothers, so maybe Claire 's Father brings home some work colleagues to train Claire to Slave Fuck with the Hood Protocol.
Also more on the naked slave in public duties, naked in summer, and the transparent body shit for cold weather.
You going write a few more vignettes on the subject?

[Hooked6]

You have some interesting ideas, orflash64. But I think your best comment was that this story should be a complete full story (rather than a small vignette.) Such a great premise for a story I haven't seen in a long time! I'd love to know how she got into this experiment; what the experiment is all about; how the hood figures into this project (other than the obvious) and what happens along the way.

My goodness this is great stuff here. (Btw, my comments are meant as a true compliment to Gary's imagination NOT a criticism of his plan for his own project of a collection of stand alone vignettes.)

Hooked6

[automagix12]

Just a wild idea, call it a brainstorming result, maybe it's crap, maybe you like it:
My starting point was, if the vignette by gary is a piece in a puzzle, which shape could the "surrounding" or adjacent pieces have, so that we see a full picture without any holes? Here's the ideas:
- Claire is 19, she and her sister are living with their parents, all in happiness
- One day, a disaster happens, her Dad loses his job (maybe due to Corona crisis), bills stay unpaid, debts are rising
- After 2 weeks, the Davis family is flat broke, the mother has tried to find a job as cleaner or maid, but no success
- the banks and creditors offer to buy the older daughter, Claire, as a slave, which would cover the bills receivable, plus some cash
- after hours of discussions, tears and despair, the family decides to accept the proposition, especially because Claire agrees
- Claire has read secretly been reading novels on slavery and domination, she is naive, curious and aroused
- The official slave grading takes place, the result is: Claire is too young and inexperienced, which limits her rating and her value
- A compromise is negotiated: Claire is declared officially a slave, property of the bank; she is to stay at the Davis' house, but NOT as a daughter, she is there for slave training, only!
- The benefit for the Davis' is, they can see the daughter for the duration of the Slave Training Contract, which is eight weeks, they receive some small payment for the training, and the value/rating of Claire is much higher in the end, when she gets transferred to her new owner
- The family is supported with slave gear, punishment and training tools at a reduced price.

At this point in time, the Vignette story begins.

Okay, I am not a professional writer, maybe I have got into some logic pitfall, contradiction or other flaw... But what do you think about the idea as concept for a full-length story?
(The "big" table of content would then be something like: Introduction (Meet the Davis' Family), The Bad News, Trying to Make Ends Meet, The Negotiation, The Compromise, >>> Hooded Experiment <<< , Week #2, .... etc. etc. , SOLD!, My New Owner).

So much for my sketches and ideas... What do you think, especially Gary?

[jeepster]

Interesting experiment! I'm not gonna give my version of what will/should happen next just wait for you to write it!

[gary]

All the stories will be stand alone stories, more or less.
The idea of the water/cum combination came to me from a Joe Doe story of Claire (that I should put up again).
Again from the Joe Doe story i was thinking of her Father/Master using her to entertain Clients.
I have introduced Claire's younger sister, I have thought she has an older Brother and sister, both married and living in other cities.

[automagix12]

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The idea of the water/cum combination came to me from a Joe Doe story of Claire (that I should put up again).
Again from the Joe Doe story i was thinking of her Father/Master using her to entertain Clients.
I have introduced Claire's younger sister, I have thought she has an older Brother and sister, both married and living in other cities.

Gary:
The water/cum combination as beverage is a genius idea, I love it.
That the slave will entertain (also sexually, I take it) clients or other males, is a nice concept, like it.
The older siblings do not take part in the stories, or do they?

[GreyRose]

I really enjoyed this snippet of a story and hope you get inspired to expand it. After your description of the hood, I had an idea of something to be included in the slowly increasing transition of how the family treats Claire. What if they started sealing the mouth of the hood during the day as a visual way of removing Claire's voice. The first time they seal her mouth, symbolically removing her ability to speak for herself, would be a strongly emotional moment to her. What if one night they put her in her cage and forget to remove it and she is so into slave head space she can't make herself remove it to eat?

Regardless of your expanding or continuing this story segment, I really enjoy your writing and look forward to seeing what else your creative talent brings out.

[orflash64]

That was supposed to body suit, not shit, Damn autocorrect.

[Hooked6]

That was supposed to body suit, not shit, Damn autocorrect.

Happens to me all the time. Glad to see I'm not the only one.