Revised and Expanded Slave Society Story Fragment Part 2

[Mr. Smith]

Cottage industries sprung up due to slavery that drove large segments of the economy. Auction houses, slave stores, full service slave markets, specialized slave equipment emporiums, slave training and equestrian centers, grooming centers, and educational systems sprung up across the country. Employment options for free citizens evolved with new good paying jobs in the slave economy while the economies of scale transitioned low paying manual labor jobs to slave labor.

Slave livestock was readily available either through large auction houses or local slave stores. Human Commodities International (HCI) had auction houses throughout North America regularly moving the supply of slave livestock to meet demand in different markets selling anything from Prime pleasure sluts to batches of Commercial slaves sold in clusters.

Many slave markets offered distinctive logos identifying where the slave was purchased. Much like Mercedes and Tesla had distinctive badges on their cars denoting quality, many high end slave markets followed suit. The Big D Livestock and Slave Market in Dallas, home of the “Sandy Foot Girl” trademark, specialized in selling slave pussy graded as either Prime or Choice with a reputation for producing the finest pleasure sluts in the nation. Only pleasure sluts graded Prime and sold at the Big D could receive the prestigious Big D badge burned into their skin denoting their high quality and value.

Many societal norms also changed, from the institution of marriage to the pornography industry. No longer did porn actresses have to try to “act” during slave girl, rape, bondage or whipping scenes. Now they used actual slaves as the victims. Unwilling, screaming, crying, virgin slaves could be gangbanged and whipped on film for profit. One indie film titled “Here Cums the Judge” starred a former judge criminally enslaved for sexual misconduct reenacting the scene that led to his arrest. He was then pegged repeatedly by women depicting former victims of his excesses in a victim atonement session. Illegal prostitution was all but eliminated due to the legal use of slaves for sex.

Public sex became much more prevalent. Prior to slavery public nudity and sex were illegal. Now there were naked collared slaves everywhere. Almost anywhere you went, whether in a bar, country club, city parks or a professional ball game, you would see a slave drop to their knees and orally service a free person.

From dog shows to horse racing equivalent slave events were created. The famous Westminster Dog Show now hosts the Westminster Slave Pet Show with a wide variety of categories from best in show, best in breed to body types with best in the “Spinner” and “Voluptuous” categories. This type of slave pet play developed into a niche market with a small, but avid following.

Horse racing and equestrian events led to the development of Ponygirl/boy shows and races that became wildly popular quickly expanding from a cottage industry to a national and international pastime. Ponygirl/boy training centers such as the Silver Lake Harness School, the top rated harness racing school in Texas and the Lone Oak Equestrian Academy, the similarly top rated school for dressage, showmanship and vault jumping sprung up across the country. Successful Silver Lake graduates were adorned with the prestigious horseshoe with a star in the middle and Lone Oak graduates with that school’s distinctive intertwined horseshoes with three stars brand that could be located on the thigh, buttock, and back or between the cheeks.

As Ponygirl popularity grew, creative individuals found ways to capitalize on the craze. Hasbro launched the wildly successful franchise “My Little Ponygirl: Friendship is Magic” marketing cute girly Ponygirl toys and cartoons with a target demographic of young girls and their parents. Many little girls dreamed of growing up to be Ponygirls much to the amusement of their parents leading to the development of youth leagues for aspiring Ponygirls. The franchise quickly became a cultural and internet phenomenon with many male fans between thirteen and thirty-five creating a large fan base and a multitude of creative works, fan sites, cosplay and conventions.

This sensation culminated in a live action movie with many prominent actresses vying for leading roles, much like in the Marvel super hero franchise. The R rated movie starred some prominent feminists such as Oscar winner Brie Larsen in the role of Rainbow Dash, Shailene Woodley as Fluttershy, Emily Ratajkowski as Rarity, Margot Robbie as Pinkie Pie, and Kate Upton as Applejack with lesser roles going to Hailey Baldwin, Kendall and Kylie Jenner and Taylor Swift who also did the original soundtrack. All Ponygirl actresses signed lucrative Texas FINO slave contracts making all the required public nudity legal that covered, or better put uncovered, their training at Lone Oak through filming with fine print that they either ignored, did not read or looked forward to enjoying.

The documentary film of the making of the movie was almost as popular as the movie itself as it chronicled the actresses completing actual Ponygirl training at Lone Oak for these roles of a lifetime. It started with them arriving at Lone Oak in limos and walking into the stable for a production meeting. Once inside they were stripped slave naked, collared and introduced to the stable which became their new home for the duration of their three month training period.

Next they were lined up for their piercings as all Ponygirls at Lone Oak received nipple, navel and vaginal piercings. The nipple piercings in particular were used to hold small bells that jingled. For some of the advanced dressage training the nipple and vaginal piercings, often called hood ornaments, were used to maneuver the Ponygirls. Two small chains attached to the left and right labia piercings ran up through the navel and nipple piercings through loops in the collar which the trainer pulled on to guide the Ponygirl through a carefully choreographed set of movements.

Since they were all slave livestock pursuant to their Texas FINOs they were strapped down onto gynecology exam chairs with their feet in stirrups. Interestingly enough Ms. Woodley, Ms. Robbie, and Ms. Swift arrived that day with most if not all the requisite piercings already in place.

With all the new Ponygirls pierced, they were herded into the tack fitting room where they were outfitted with horseshoe boots, harnesses and leather armbinders. The ponytail anal plugs used at Lone Oak were a special variant that had different vibration settings to add to the Ponygirls pleasure that could be manipulated either manually or by remote control. These plugs also emitted a painful electrical shock to punish badly behaving Ponygirls. The producers decided to introduce the 6” by 4” anal plug with tail prior to fitting the Ponygirls with their bridles so as to capture on film each actress’s full reaction in the documentary. This portion of the film was extremely popular catching their facial expressions using a split screen that simultaneously depicted the insertion of the anal plug.

The Lone Oak Equestrian Academy used a new innovative method for motivating Ponygirls during their training which also came in handy for these tail insertions. Trainers sexually stimulated a Ponygirl with handheld butterfly vibrators while forcing the “tail” in as she relaxed, often while climaxing, frequently with the anal plug on vibration mode to enhance the pleasure. In this way each Ponygirl learned to associate the anal plugs, and any pain from sudden insertion, with sexual pleasure as part of the sexualization process that all Ponygirl trainees went through.

Bad Ponygirls received their tail plugs without the use of the butterfly vibrators as a form of punishment. This process was explained to the now very apprehensive actresses, especially the anal virgins who were close to tears listening to the head trainer describe the procedure while holding a what appeared to be in their eyes a huge tail plug wondering what their agents had signed them up for.

Interestingly Ms. Woodley volunteered to go first seemingly forgetting she was being filmed. She moaned in delight as her clit was massaged by the trainer using a butterfly vibrator as the large plug was shoved up her ass while she begged the trainer to make it vibrate more and fuck her hard with it. The horrified look on her flushed face when she calmed down after her climax, with tail vibrating in place, as she suddenly remembered that her performance was caught on film was priceless.

Ms. Robbie and Ms. Ratajkowski were the next two volunteers with both uttering satisfied moans of pleasure while climaxing from their clitoral massage as the plugs were inserted further demonstrating that not all free women abhorred anal sex. It seemed to many observers that these two Ponygirls were playing to the camera as they received their tails.

Ms. Larsen was another story altogether having to be forcefully held down on the plugging bench as her ass was lubed. As a misbehaving Ponygirl she did not receive any good vibrations from the butterfly device. When the trainer forcefully shoved the plug home as she wailed like a banshee while her teary eyes bulged out like fisheyes.

When Ms. Larsen had calmed down the Lone Oaks head trainer advised her that she was a bad Ponygirl whose poor behavior would not be tolerated. He then demonstrated the punitive use of the plugs by giving Ms. Larsen a series of painful electrical shocks demonstrating the different pain levels driving home the penalty for disobedience for all of the new Ponygirls. Ms. Larsen’s high pitched shrieks reinforced the change in status from free women to Ponygirl livestock for these spoiled actresses.

All the other new Ponygirls begged to be strapped down to avoid punishment as some cried, squealing, as their plugs were inserted while trying to be cooperative. There was a lively debate on the internet concerning whether Ms. Upton, Ms. Swift and the younger Ms. Jenner were faking their distress. All three were caught briefly moaning in pleasure, with Ms. Upton caught muttering “fuck yeah” under her breath, and as they appeared to climax from the butterfly vibrator as their tails were seated in their respective hind quarters.

The four hour, two volume, documentary has way too many highlights to mention them all here. The opening scene showed all of the Ponygirls trotting out of the stable in full Ponygirl regalia, to the jingle of the bells hanging from their nipples, while herded out to pasture. Scenes of a naked Ms. Baldwin in Ponygirl regalia receiving the whip on her ass and thighs each time a knee did not reach the requisite height, Ms. Ratajkowski receiving the whip when not staying in gait while vault jumping, Ms. Larsen on the receiving end of a tail shock when breaking stride and Ms. Upton being maneuvered like a puppet using chains attached to her labia and breast hoops were some of the most popular. The Slave Channel using viewer polling created the top ten tail plug discipline scenes of Ms. Larsen being zapped out of the thirty-five in the film shortly after the film premiered.

Late one afternoon towards the end of the three months of training Ms. Larsen broke away from her trainer and ran back to the stable. She was found positioned over the breeding bench waiting to be bred, whinnying impatiently demonstrating the success of the sexualization process implemented at Lone Oak.

After three months all the actresses successfully graduated, receiving on film, once again using the split screen, their Lone Oak brand that they earned between the cheeks before going on to film the actual movie. There was also a third two-hour volume of bonus scenes rated mature containing the breeding scenes and some of the more interesting sexual exploits of these Ponygirls, especially at night while sleeping three to a stall with the most popular one involving the activities of the Jenner sisters abusing Ms. Larsen with large strapons.

Ponygirl usage quickly spread to colleges and universities. At the University of Oklahoma twelve beautiful naked Ponygirl coeds with bells jingling from their pierced nipples replaced the two horses that once pulled the famed Sooner Schooner onto the field during football games and other events. USC followed suit replacing Traveler, the noble white horse with a Trojan warrior astride, with twelve naked Ponygirls with red plumes on their heads and matching tail plumes pulling a chariot carrying a Trojan warrior.

Soon dating a Sooner Schooner or a Trojan chariot Ponygirl held more prestige on campus than dating a cheerleader, much to the derision of the cheerleader experiencing her loss in status. Many schools quickly incorporated Ponygirls into school programs whenever possible due to their popularity both on and off campus.

Colleges and universities quickly saw the advantage of adding Ponygirl racing and dressage competitions to college sports with the SEC and Big 12 power five conferences leading the way followed by the ACC, Big 10 the following year. Eventually the PAC 12 saw the handwriting on the wall and added Ponygirl sporting events.

These schools saw Ponygirl sports as a way to counter the significant Title IV scholarship imbalance caused by football. The NCAA soon designed a standard FINO contract for use in lieu of traditional scholarships that were the equivalent of a scholarship for Title IV calculations. These FINO scholarships made legal nude performances and training for these Ponygirl athletes.

These top ranked collegiate Ponygirls going pro upon graduation often entered into lucrative FINO contracts of between two to five years length. Only football consistently brought in more much needed revenue for these schools than the Ponygirl teams. This phenomena trickled down to the nation’s high schools although without the nudity, nipple piercings or anal plugs.

Ponygirl harness racing gained international popularity with a professional racing circuit that spanned the globe. Eventually the International Olympic Committee decided to add Ponygirl events using free or slave Ponygirls. Many nations such as Saudi Arabia and Dubai that were not traditional Olympic powers in most sports were suddenly competitive in Ponygirl events since it was the nationality of the driver or trainer, not the Ponygirl livestock, which mattered for these Olympic competitions.

Often these events were covered on ESPN, FSN, or the new Slave Channel with slave events frequently making the Sports Center daily “Top Ten”. The Slave Channel covered everything related to slavery. There was news, talk shows, business shows, game shows and slave sporting events. Enslavement Wheel of Fortune became one of the most popular syndicated game shows where contestants put their liberty in jeopardy for cash prizes.

Harlequin Romance soon churned out slavery themed romance novels while Carolyn Keene penned a number Nancy Drew mysteries which found the “Drew Crew” collared as slaves undercover. The Hallmark and Lifetime Channels offered slavery themed movies that soon rivaled in popularity their Christmas and Valentine’s Day films. Often depicting the poor young woman finding herself enslaved and eventually finds love with a kind master or melts the heart of a cruel misunderstood master finding love. Many young women became enamored with the fantasy of finding love as a slave due to these movies and novels. Coupled with the mental conditioning from mandatory Slave Yoga some of these naïve teens voluntarily indentured upon turning eighteen only to find the harsh reality of slavery in a brothel.

The Slave Channel hosted slave block routine contests that quickly became more popular than beauty contests. Naked young free women would perform five-minute auction block routines in front of a panel of judges with a viewer online voting. Most contestants performed a five-minute freestyle block routine and another five-minute auction block routine with a whip wielding auctioneer putting them through their paces as though they were actually being sold.

Slave markets and auction houses nationwide, noting the popularity of the events, hosted these contests using their actual auction blocks for the performances receiving significant free publicity. Often the contests would have a theme for contestants such as MILFs, DILFs, GILFs, MILF/DILF pairs, coeds and identical twins. With the advent of the Texas FINO and Any Chance auctions the wet pussy on display was often sold during the contests.

The Fresh Block Pussy contests where only free eighteen-year-old teens were eligible to compete were some of the most popular events. The Big D hosted the annual Sandy Girl Fresh Block Pussy contest in early June each year that included a six week Any Chance auction clause for a six-week Texas FINO as a pleasure slut with certain conditions attached. The contestants were slave graded the morning of the competition needing a Prime Minus or higher to qualify to be pushed out the chute onto the Broadway stage to perform their block routines in the sand while being simultaneously scored by the judges and auctioned.

This fresh pussy regularly squirted in the sand in a frenzy during the bidding with many immediately accepting the bids when they realized they could fund a couple of years of college for a mere six weeks use as a pleasure slut. It helped that they were hyper sexualized from the grading and auction process fantasizing about being a slave when they were asked if they wanted to accept the bid. Overcome by their slave minds most accepted the offers making this event one of the most popular events at the Big D.

One of the most famous winners of this event was an announced virgin Mandy Taylor. Viewers watched Mandy’s face light up as she squealed in delight upon realizing that not only did she recieve the high score from the judges winning the contest but that the winning bid would also pay for three years of college.

This virgin was so excited, overcome by her slave heat, that upon accepting her bid she ran into the audience and gave her new master her very first blow job making up for a lack of skill with enthusiasm. The look on her face caught on camera as her eyes bulged out when her mouth was filled with baby batter for the first time was priceless. Mandy was a trooper and managed to swallow down most of the splooge deposited in her mouth. Getting the rest when her new master wiped the dribble off her cheek with his finger when this natural quickly licked his finger clean like a good little pleasure slut.

The reality of the FINO was driven home for Mandy, when after being collared and handcuffed, her new master quickly led her back to the blacksmith shop where the Big D brand was promptly burned into her left buttock before returning to Broadway to accept the first place trophy and and check. The commentators were not sure if the tears in her eyes were from the joy of winning the contest or from the new Big D badge burned into her left buttock.

Mandy’s new master took her home for a six-week crash course in sex education which she apparently enjoyed enough to sign another FINO with him for next summer. The now Dr. Mandy Taylor, married mother of three, signed six to eight-week FINOs with that lucky master each summer during college and post graduate studies using the revenue to pay for her schooling with enough left over for a down payment on a house when she graduated from medical school.

This minor celebrity and fan favorite came out of “retirement” to handily win the annual Sandy Girl MILF competition a year after giving birth to her third child, even accepting the two week Texas FINO with her old master. Once again running into the audience to give him his blowjob. The Slave Channel pulled up old footage of her playing it side by side to show how much the sexy MILF’s technique had improved while her enthusiasm had not waned. Dr. Taylor often acts as a guest judge for Fresh Block Pussy contests even now while also appearing on the slave channel as their medical expert.

Another popular topic on the slave channel involved the coverage of public criminal punishments, whether corporal or public atonement. Cindy Lou Austin, a Dallas Cowboys cheerleader, was a little known reporter with Slave Channel News (SCN) until she covered a public atonement of an eighteen-year-old man who, while drunk, punched a homosexual man and accompanied his attack with gay slurs and taunts. He was sentenced to four hours’ public atonement in a park in the Oak Law district of Dallas located in the middle of “Gay Dallas”.

Cindy Lou interviewed the young man as he was being placed in the stockade and somehow got him to say “Hi Mom” right before his virginity was taken. Ten minutes later he was crying for his mommy as Cindy Lou described a line of over twenty men waiting for their turn. After forty-five minutes he came while getting a hand job and being spit roasted in the stockade. The reporter continued the interview pointing out to the unhappy young man that he just orgasmed while getting fucked in the ass, asking the young man, “Who’s your Daddy” to the jeers of the crowd. The ratings success of that interview propelled Cindy Lou to her very own SCN weekly show.

The sport of “Cropgasm” was also introduced by Cindy Lou Austin when during an interview with Bailiff Bob Turner, he bet her dinner and “dessert” that he could make convicted drunk driver and suburban MILF, twenty eight year old Wendy Abbot, orgasm while being publicly whipped with a riding crop. Wendy was a former Longhorn cheerleader who married her college sweetheart from the football team was strung to the holding pole waiting for her whipping. Unbeknownst to Bailiff Bob, Wendy was a legendary squirter often teased by her fellow cheerleaders after letting loose one evening while the girls were practicing their naked slave yoga.

For most people the connotation of whipping is horrific. They visualize only the most egregious examples which are usually where somebody’s skin is flayed from their body repeatedly causing serious injuries resulting in permanent visible scars.

Most people outside of the BDSM world are not aware of the distinction between good pain and bad pain. Bob Turner was keenly aware of this distinction. He had noticed that after two children Wendy had managed to maintain her figure, her D cup rack standing firm with some sag. She kept her bush trimmed to a small landing strip over her bald cunt which was wet with arousal. He believed she was one of the sixty percent of women with submissive fantasies and the erotic nature of being tied up naked and vulnerable was making her slave hot. He suspected she still practiced her slave yoga hoping to play fantasy slave sex games with her husband.

Bob Turner understood that the same neurotransmitter that helps control the brain’s reward and pleasure centers, dopamine, is also active in the body’s chemical reactions that make us feel pain. Understanding how the body reacts physically to pain and pleasure coupled with this mental component of getting inside the woman’s head allowed him and a growing number of bailiffs to bring women to orgasm during public whippings. This informal inside the bailiff community competition was about to get national exposure.

Bob Turner knew that you always start and end with rubbing the woman’s skin because the rubbing personalizes what becomes an intimate erotic experience for her. The rubbing away the pain from a crop strike feels good and is pleasurable. When you slap that or another spot after the rubbing it goes from pleasure to pleasurable pain with a slight feel good sting. Then you go back to the rubbing after the slap, which helps to take the sting away replacing it with pleasure again but leaving them wanting to feel the pleasurable sting again. You then repeat this process, highlighting the woman’s erogenous zones.

There was a mental aspect of the process that Bob used to get inside their heads before and during the whipping, fondly nicknamed “whip whispering”. With sixty percent of women having submissive fantasies coupled with the erotic nature of being tied up naked and vulnerable most are open to suggestion. Talking suggestively to them during the process only enhances their arousal. Thus by using the rub, slap, rub process while talking suggestively to these women he would bring them to an involuntary orgasm.

Knowing all this Bob negotiated with Cindy Lou live on air as he set up favorable ground rules for the contest that allowed him to fondle Wendy’s vagina prior to the whipping to prime her arousal, getting her slave hot, to whisper in her ear during the entire process, to rub the crop and touch her anywhere but the vaginal/anal crescent while he administered the thirty blows.

Wendy’s pussy was a leaking sieve by the time Bailiff Bob had her strung up. He started with a few blows to her buttocks, after each blow rubbing away the pain from each buttock with his hand while whispering that she was going to cum for the crowd like the slave hot slut that she was. He struck her stomach followed by hand rubbing while he whispered how her breathing showed how much she really liked it. He traced the crop on the underside of her impressive breasts sporting rock hard nipples and trailing the crop around her back.

The whole time Bob was walking around her whispering in her ear telling her she was slave hot and was going to orgasm in front of the crowd. He then whipped the underside of her right breast, rubbed away the pain followed by a blow to the inside of her upper inner right thigh and again rubbed away the pain. He ran the crop from her thigh to her buttocks around to her stomach and up to her breasts. The crop circled her breasts culminating with each nipple. He then struck her left nipple and proceeded to “rub” away the pain by gently sucking on her nipple with his mouth.

Wendy was strung up, listening to the jeers of the crowd, eyes tearing up in frustration, panting, pussy juice dripping down both thighs, on the verge of orgasm. “I cannot cum now, no, you can hold it in” she thought to herself. Next thing she knew she felt a sharp blow to the right nipple immediately followed by a blow directly on her clitoris as Bailiff Bob whispered in her ear, “cum for me, slut.”

“No!” she shrieked, as she arched her back and squirted five feet to her front as the earth shook screaming out a loud, to the crowd’s cheers.

“That’s one Cropgasm, double or nothing?” shouted Bailiff Bob from the stage while turning to Cindy Lou.

“You’re on,” she shouted back.

Cindy Lou owed Bailiff Bob five dinners and a lot of “dessert” by the time he was done.

The whipping culminated with Bob striking Wendy on the clitoris on the thirtieth blow, triggering another orgasm. With the frenzy triggered he rammed the riding crop handle into her cunt and proceeded to fuck her with the handle increasing the intensity and duration of the climax as she road it out screaming with her back arched squirting all over the riding crop handle. The audio then caught Wendy telling Bailiff Bob that these were the most intense climaxes she had ever experienced leading to another ratings bonanza for Cindy Lou.

The sport of Cropgasm was born with SCN creating Thursday Night Cropgasm hosted by Cindy Lou Austin in collaboration with the Texas Department of Criminal Justice (DOCJ). The judicial counsel modified the sentencing guidelines increasing the number of defendants eligible for cropping.

The judicial council added five to twenty blows to the buttocks using a cane, flogger, paddle or hand, to be applied right after the cropping or at a later date if no other flogging was ordered. This was done due in part to public outcry that for some this was not punishment and did not deter crime. This viewpoint had some validity when Billy Jean Wilson stole a pair of panties to get arrested and begged the judge for a double cropping by Bailiff Bob. For the vast majority of women the humiliation of being strung up and whipped to public orgasms was a humiliation to be avoided.

Medical science evolved adapting to the new slave society. A whole new medical system was needed for the slave livestock. Veterinary clinics and hospitals were established to treat this population. The Samson Clinic and the Spartacus Clinic, the largest slave medical facilities in Dallas and Houston respectively, provided 24/7 emergency room and surgery facilities.

Unique mental health conditions related to slavery resulted in specialization in slave psychology with specific licensing requirements. For example, renowned Slave Psychiatrist Dr. Nicola “Nikki” Sheldon at the Samson Clinic voluntarily indentured for six months to meet these strict licensing requirements. The book she co-authored, “Psychological Impact of Slavery” examined new psychological disorders such as Sudden Enslavement Syndrome became required reading in most psychology courses.

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[Carl Bradford]

Love the Pony Girl movie descriptions--i look forward to you writing a story about ordinary women going through one of the equestrian academies.
As you suggested, the possibilities for specialized schools in this world seem endless. I've described the Pearson Pussy Ranch for training pleasure sluts of various genders, and I believe that Gentleman Mariner described a school intended to "break" rebellious slaves. For those with more specialized tastes, I presume there would have to be Sissy schools to feminize some slaves--although you and I have discussed the idea that (with the exception of lifetime slavery for violent crimes) the law would limit/forbid hormone replacement therapy and sexual reassignment surgery. Still, I'd MUCH rather hear about your equestrian ranches in more detail!

[Carl Bradford]

Oops--I was so impressed with your Pony Girl film idea that I neglected to thank you for the shout out to "Here Cums the Judge" in the Literotica story "Going Around to Cum Around."

[Mr. Smith]

Carl wrote,

Love the Pony Girl movie descriptions--i look forward to you writing a story about ordinary women going through one of the equestrian academies.

Thanks for the compliment. I was just thinking which outspoken actress would I like to see get a tail while spending three months getting trained as a Ponygirl and Brie Larsen fit the bill.

I was leaning towards having a couple of the girls attend the Lone Oak Equestrian Academy for harness racing training at some point.  Looking at Avery (triathlete), Kimi (triathlete), Lindsey (soccer) and Allison (ballet) with the exception of Allison harness racing looks like a better fit for them as a whole if some or all of them were to attend one of these schools. All of these girls are competitive and know how to train to achieve a high level of athletic performance.  I see the harness racing and dressage being two entirely different skill sets requiring different specialized training.  Either specialization could be used to instill some much needed discipline in a slave as an alternative to an obedience school. I wonder if there is a special collar that eliminates a slaves ability to speak to such an extent that all that comes out are horse sounds that could be used as a form of punishment. Some Ponygirl stories turn the women into mindless ponies that begin to think and ack like horses. That is not a model that I am looking at for my story.

Broadstone consorts will be exposed to Ponygirl training to teach discipline as part of the curriculum but nobody is sending a slave to that school to become a Ponygirl

On a side note if you are looking to incorporate a "Here Cums the Judge 2" into a future story, Judge Ledbetter, his wife and one if not both daughters will be available for starring roles in the near future.  The stage is set for his downfall.

Thanks.

Mr. Smith

[bertrumm00057]

I enjoyed how you flesh out the slave universe. Lots of detail and funny episodes. Especially the feminists signing up to be in the My Little Pony Girl Movie.
I'm glad you have broached the fact that slavery would leak into everyday life. I was worried that your suggesting that there are pony girl themed children's toys would get a lot of flack. The fact is that with slavery being out in the open would effect all levels of society, including those who are underage. Do teenagers play slave games?
When I asked if it was OK about having the underage character of Georgie (who would have been 12 at the time) in the background, I got some push-back. And cut most of what I wrote. I wonder if I should put some of it back in.

[jean.amelot]

I would say, as long as the sex doesn't envolve that character, it's ok.

[Mr. Smith]

I would love to read a scene where a curious teenage girl asked a bunch questions to a slave or Amy after she has been a slave for a few weeks. The awkward conversation would be hilarious and to Amy embarrassing.

[Mr. Smith]

Orflash64 wrote,

I would love to read a scene where a curious teenage girl asked a bunch questions to a slave or Amy after she has been a slave for a few weeks. The awkward conversation would be hilarious and to Amy embarrassing.

I love this idea, especially if it is some seventeen year old's who are infatuated with slave romance novels and spending Friday nights watching slave themed Hallmark movies such as "I found Love in a Collar", "My Perfect Master", "Love on the Auction Block", "Sold by my Step-Mom" or kinkier titles such as "Bad Little Slave Girl finds Love" and the "Slave Spankings" series where different misbehaving slave girls get their slave heat ignited by being bent over their new master's lap for a spanking awakening their inner pleasure sluts who then live happily ever after pleasing their loving masters or mistresses.

These teens could confess to each other that they fell asleep diddling themselves. It would help if the age of consent was seventeen in Canada like in Texas. Just stay away from any overt sex acts. You could have them describe a slave sister lesbian sex scene in a book and then have them agree to a re-enactment without describing them in action and the next morning that they just have to do that again.

Amy would have to talk about her slave mind and slave heat taking over and all of the nasty good sex she enjoyed while pleasuring different men.

Again, great idea.

[Mr. Smith]

I'm still not sure what all to do about Amy in the last chapter, though I still plan for her to become a Slave In Name Only (SINO) to her husband Ty. But I do like the idea of Amy being asked about slavery from a teenager.
By the way the age of consent in Canada is sixteen, it was raised to that from fourteen in 2008. There is also a close in age exception of under five years, so a fourteen year old could have sex with a 18/19 year old. Also twelve year old could have sex with someone who is less than two year older.
In Canada you cannot depict sex involving a person under eighteen years old in any way, though there is an "artistic license" exception.

[Carl Bradford]

Yeah, I think it can work. Talking about sex with a teenager is awkward by itself, talking about slave sex super awkward. I mean all they are doing is talking. Very embarrassing for Amy when the teenager asks about slave heat and how wet Amy is being ordered about. How often Amy cums from being forcibly slave fucked, is she turned on being slave naked in public? This can be a stand alone chapter or story. Would be funny if answering all the teen's questions is a punishment from a Judge. You could use that truth setting suggestion I made sometime ago.
With the new electronic collars the collars glow red when not being truthful and green when being honest, controlled by phone app.
Only when the app is activated. Becomes necessary when the teens knows Amy is lying about something and complains to the Judge.

[Mr. Smith]

Gary wrote,

But I do like the idea of Amy being asked about slavery from a teenager.

Gary,

Do high schools in Canada have the same slave yoga graduation requirement as Texas? I am pretty sure the girls in Texas practice naked at home, especially those that have slave girl fantasies from the slavery themed novels and movies.

You could have the teens ask Amy if real slave sex is as good as the sex described in the novels and depicted in the movies. Get Amy to describe how she feels when her slave heat ignites and her slave mind takes over while she serves a master or masters. It would likely be safer if you have the high school teen asking the questions be eighteen. There are all sorts of possibilities here. The teen could ask Amy for help with her slave yoga that they practice au natural. That could lead to them diddling themselves during practice, and then each other, culminating in some hot lezzie action as their slave heat ignites. Then Amy helps Ty enslave the eighteen year old as their slave with Amy as the head slave. She could tell the teen that Ty is better than any fictional master in her books or in the movies. I bet Amy could use a good slave sister. It would be interesting if she trained her new slave sister as a Ponygirl entering different competitions. Just think of the possibilities.